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Shameless review from the Author! Well, the first thing I want to outline is that I want to describe a situation when mana was suddenly injected into the world and what would happen with civilization in that case. I can promise that I won't drop the story no matter what since I already love writing it. Perhaps, the writing quality will be slightly lacking in the initial stages, but I'll try to get better at it, so enjoy the story. Regarding the worldbuilding and story, I plan to take my time to shape the story, so the story itself is planned to be long.
At first i was afraid of reading due to the reviews saying the grammar is bad and i was extra sad seeing a grammar mistake on the first line of the book and yes there is mistakes but most are unnoticeable and it is not frustrating at all to read. Overall good book, world looks like it has thought put into it. I thought Brian/Fatty was going to be dead weight and annoying/comedic relief at first just due to common tropes but he is not, there was not reason to make him fat.
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Really like this book so good just can't wait for more chapters. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................... .
Such a good book really enjoy it just can't wait for more chaps to come out I speed read them so fast 😝😝 👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊
I really like this novel but update time of chapter is really long author need to write more chapter and please don't drop this novel I really love this.😊 Thank you author for writing such good web novel.😊
the book is amazing as far as I read, the story is pretty good and the characters are more or less what would really happen. The only thing that I don't like about the book is the uploading time. I do understand that to make a good book you have to take your time, so yeah, it's great.
First of all, extremely bad grammar. second of all, there is no structure to the story. author has definetly not planned it, its like hes Writing it as he goes. 3rd. Author does not know how to make a character. he is terrible. and over exaggerate their reaction. literally its ‘**** vomits’, is the characters reaction. Author is definitely sexist. Story is boring and lastly a lot of the things seem like he copied it from apocalypse meltdown. you deserve -10 star is It was possible.
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horrible grammar and word choices, with little to no literary devices used. the MC is the white knight trope with zero character development (as a person). the supporting characters feel like a copyright infringement of a half dozen anime tropes. the writer updates fairly regularly. the world has little details or designs to stand out. it's mediocre in general. no unique rules or laws that interest you, and little detail given to paint the picture.
Great story, something new and interesting as for grammar I think in later chapters it's much better than in first chapters and you won't mind it so much as you read it longer.
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A very bad story. The main character is naive, stupid and the author makes him a white knight. The biggest disadvantage is that the author makes the main character an ugly dwarf and the weakest. Absolutely not worth reading
Assez intéressant bien que ne trouve que le ML ne soit pas assez intransigeant avec les autres quand ils le mettent en dangers ils se plie aussi assez souvent au caprice de Rebecca, mais je suppose qu'avoir de bonnes valeurs morales est aussi important pour un être humain
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I even read chapter 70, an excellent book. I even read chapter 70, an excellent book. I even read chapter 70, an excellent book. I even read chapter 70, an excellent book.
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Not a novel but a collection of tropes and cliches reminiscent of anime and light novels, it is as if the author thought ''this looks cool let me add it'' because the author breaks the rules they set in the novel
i just take other review. I'm going to keep this review short and sweet. I don't recommend this book. It's an example of every trope and clichè every. I assume the author is foreign because the quality of the writing is terrible. Some sentences make about as much sence as eating roadkill. read this if you like cliche drama
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I need more chapters 😭😭 this is a great store 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🔥🙃🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🔥🔥🙃🙃🙃
this is a wonderful book I'm loving the development of the team instead of just focusing on a singular character 😍😍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😘😁😁😁😁😁
Review is upto chapter 75 . Story has largely been about MC babysitting random people ( except his life long friend and fatty) while also getting demeaned from them .... seems like masochism to me . if it is not enough , he claims to have no attachment to university but does everything to protect it . Cries why no evolved zombies while staying at university instead of exploring outside world .... given that he can sense zombies with mana and is strong enough . oh and he also gives away items while at the same time marvels how precious chests are.... If he can't use something he can trade it later instead of giving a elemental contract to random girl who she saved and she is also ungrateful while questions his decision oh and our brilliant MC would have searched university if he had not found her .... oh he claims to not care about life of others but protects most girls he see and barely kills anyone while singing how pragmatic he is for not killing those who assaulted him . Characters in this novel have lower IQ than most middle schoolers so I guess compared to them MC might have slight higher brain. TLDR: it is free but not worth coin or fast pass. Character design is fundamentally flawed . MC says something while does something what a white knight would do. Someone like him is prime candidate to get killed
Don't know what else to say. Was it a human who wrote this? This is too ordinary! ............................................... ......................................
what can I really say? it's another zombie apocalypse book, this time with a lot less harem than usual(as of chapter 11). turns out, the story flows much more smoothly without taking every other paragraph to describe some ethereal beauty or another. keep it up Author, I like it.
Nice fresh approach to solving/answering typical reincarnation problem - How? Why? Really liked it. Why zombies don't drop food is a mystery to me. They drop many things but no food.
Nice apocalyptic novel. I would like to know if the MC will later evolver or awaken some skill beyond regression ........................................
At first, it is undoubtedly the best apocalyptic novel I have ever read. Will there be any romance or harem? .............................................
Okay so I liked this book surprisingly a lot so far. The grammar and spelling aren’t perfect, but it’s certainly not to the point of being unreadable. Most importantly, I really like the MC! He is a regressor, obv you read it in the summary, and this makes him reasonably strong but not tremendously overpowered. Wish it would update more often! Thank you author!
Shameless review from the Author! Well, the first thing I want to outline is that I want to describe a situation when mana was suddenly injected into the world and what would happen with civilization in that case. I can promise that I won't drop the story no matter what since I already love writing it. Perhaps, the writing quality will be slightly lacking in the initial stages, but I'll try to get better at it, so enjoy the story. Regarding the worldbuilding and story, I plan to take my time to shape the story, so the story itself is planned to be long.
At first i was afraid of reading due to the reviews saying the grammar is bad and i was extra sad seeing a grammar mistake on the first line of the book and yes there is mistakes but most are unnoticeable and it is not frustrating at all to read. Overall good book, world looks like it has thought put into it. I thought Brian/Fatty was going to be dead weight and annoying/comedic relief at first just due to common tropes but he is not, there was not reason to make him fat.
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Really like this book so good just can't wait for more chapters. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................... .
Such a good book really enjoy it just can't wait for more chaps to come out I speed read them so fast 😝😝 👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊
I really like this novel but update time of chapter is really long author need to write more chapter and please don't drop this novel I really love this.😊 Thank you author for writing such good web novel.😊
the book is amazing as far as I read, the story is pretty good and the characters are more or less what would really happen. The only thing that I don't like about the book is the uploading time. I do understand that to make a good book you have to take your time, so yeah, it's great.
First of all, extremely bad grammar. second of all, there is no structure to the story. author has definetly not planned it, its like hes Writing it as he goes. 3rd. Author does not know how to make a character. he is terrible. and over exaggerate their reaction. literally its ‘**** vomits’, is the characters reaction. Author is definitely sexist. Story is boring and lastly a lot of the things seem like he copied it from apocalypse meltdown. you deserve -10 star is It was possible.
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More plzzzzzzz 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲 I need more 🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧😭😭😭😭😭😢😢😢😢😢😢😭😭😭😭😭😭🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
horrible grammar and word choices, with little to no literary devices used. the MC is the white knight trope with zero character development (as a person). the supporting characters feel like a copyright infringement of a half dozen anime tropes. the writer updates fairly regularly. the world has little details or designs to stand out. it's mediocre in general. no unique rules or laws that interest you, and little detail given to paint the picture.
Great story, something new and interesting as for grammar I think in later chapters it's much better than in first chapters and you won't mind it so much as you read it longer.
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A very bad story. The main character is naive, stupid and the author makes him a white knight. The biggest disadvantage is that the author makes the main character an ugly dwarf and the weakest. Absolutely not worth reading
Assez intéressant bien que ne trouve que le ML ne soit pas assez intransigeant avec les autres quand ils le mettent en dangers ils se plie aussi assez souvent au caprice de Rebecca, mais je suppose qu'avoir de bonnes valeurs morales est aussi important pour un être humain
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I even read chapter 70, an excellent book. I even read chapter 70, an excellent book. I even read chapter 70, an excellent book. I even read chapter 70, an excellent book.
Spoiler de révélation Not a novel but a collection of tropes and cliches reminiscent of anime and light novels, it is as if the author thought ''this looks cool let me add it'' because the author breaks the rules they set in the novel
i just take other review. I'm going to keep this review short and sweet. I don't recommend this book. It's an example of every trope and clichè every. I assume the author is foreign because the quality of the writing is terrible. Some sentences make about as much sence as eating roadkill. read this if you like cliche drama
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I need more chapters 😭😭 this is a great store 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🔥🙃🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🔥🔥🙃🙃🙃
this is a wonderful book I'm loving the development of the team instead of just focusing on a singular character 😍😍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😘😁😁😁😁😁
Review is upto chapter 75 . Story has largely been about MC babysitting random people ( except his life long friend and fatty) while also getting demeaned from them .... seems like masochism to me . if it is not enough , he claims to have no attachment to university but does everything to protect it . Cries why no evolved zombies while staying at university instead of exploring outside world .... given that he can sense zombies with mana and is strong enough . oh and he also gives away items while at the same time marvels how precious chests are.... If he can't use something he can trade it later instead of giving a elemental contract to random girl who she saved and she is also ungrateful while questions his decision oh and our brilliant MC would have searched university if he had not found her .... oh he claims to not care about life of others but protects most girls he see and barely kills anyone while singing how pragmatic he is for not killing those who assaulted him . Characters in this novel have lower IQ than most middle schoolers so I guess compared to them MC might have slight higher brain. TLDR: it is free but not worth coin or fast pass. Character design is fundamentally flawed . MC says something while does something what a white knight would do. Someone like him is prime candidate to get killed
Don't know what else to say. Was it a human who wrote this? This is too ordinary! ............................................... ......................................
what can I really say? it's another zombie apocalypse book, this time with a lot less harem than usual(as of chapter 11). turns out, the story flows much more smoothly without taking every other paragraph to describe some ethereal beauty or another. keep it up Author, I like it.
Nice fresh approach to solving/answering typical reincarnation problem - How? Why? Really liked it. Why zombies don't drop food is a mystery to me. They drop many things but no food.
Nice apocalyptic novel. I would like to know if the MC will later evolver or awaken some skill beyond regression ........................................
At first, it is undoubtedly the best apocalyptic novel I have ever read. Will there be any romance or harem? .............................................
Okay so I liked this book surprisingly a lot so far. The grammar and spelling aren’t perfect, but it’s certainly not to the point of being unreadable. Most importantly, I really like the MC! He is a regressor, obv you read it in the summary, and this makes him reasonably strong but not tremendously overpowered. Wish it would update more often! Thank you author!