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- Développement de l’histoire
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Amazing story so far! Love the fact you just never know what is going to happen! Highly recommend to anyone who loves fantasy worlds with monsters. It has a very anime feel to it kind of like the shield hero.
now 17 chapters and I believe it will turn into a great one good job on this and your fan fic bone and ice I hope you keep it up bit try not to spread yourself too thin
A very good beginning granted at the time im writing this there is only 3 chapters but I think you have a very interesting story on your hands
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Amazing story so far! Love the fact you just never know what is going to happen! Highly recommend to anyone who loves fantasy worlds with monsters. It has a very anime feel to it kind of like the shield hero.
now 17 chapters and I believe it will turn into a great one good job on this and your fan fic bone and ice I hope you keep it up bit try not to spread yourself too thin
A very good beginning granted at the time im writing this there is only 3 chapters but I think you have a very interesting story on your hands
mtl or invent 100% of yourself? mtl or invent 100% of yourself? mtl or invent 100% of yourself? mtl or invent 100% of yourself? mtl or invent 100% of yourself? mtl or invent 100% of yourself?