Tales of Hiroki: A Naruto Story

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Aeternabilis

My head hurts from the mind-numbingly stupid decisions that are made in this story and I only got to chapter 2... To name a few. He goes onto a massive ass rant about how he wants to save all the tragedies in the naruto world such as Nagato, Konan, sanins, kushina, minato etc But then he asks to be born the same age as Kakashi... Like wtf? Why would he not want to be born at least the same age as the sanin... Then he gets asked what family he wants to be born into and goes on a rant about how he is his own family. Like are you trying to give me a migraine of how stupid you are? Especially when he just mentioned danzo before where he would get eaten by him. A clan would provide him with literally everything he needs to get strong and protection. The author also wrote about how he doesn't want the mc to be op as writing about op mc is boring and you can only focus on the side characters. What does he then do? Gives the mc wood release, Sharingan and time, space affinity.... like what? The amount of idiocy I have seen in two chapters alone does not bode well for the rest of the story... So yeah, not gonna waste my time. Gl to author but yeah

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Daoist693837

I will shamelessly rate five star on my own story. Writing it is something I like and helps me pass my time. I also like reading what I have written so I can later fix if there are things not to my liking. I am a critic of my own work.

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CodeSpectre

This is an amazing book and i love the story and the characters and i hope he does prevent Minato and Kushina's deaths ...It is very well written with good character design and i genuinely hope that the author doesn't drop this...

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Enjoyteddy

Solid so far. Easy to read and understand what the author is trying to get across. Im liking how the story is going and hoping with all my might that he will save Kushina and Minato and not flake like a lot of authors do with some stupid reason. Also handle Danzo on the real I hate how people leave that to fester.

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hostile_fire

5 stars is not enough for how good this is, I dont see many naruto FF better than this one because it shows that this mc is quick witted and his desire for peace, also the emotional aspect of the novel is amazing, the clashing philosophies of peace and the people and the way you presented it as to how it affects the mc, amazing, simply amazing.

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HK_47_kun

It cant end that way Nononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononono

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KxSora

thank you very much

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Erwin_Navasquez

It's good, the best naruto ff I have seen so far. I was just wondering why MC is so childlike but mature considering it's a second life. I also want someone be paired with the MC to add a little sweet things. I give 4.8 for now because I don't know update status.

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Idealist

I hope the author does not drop this novel. I had so much fun reading this. Just focus on this novel and not wrote another one before finishing it. Good luck and stay safe!

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Simp_Alert

This is a below-average fanfiction. For starters, The MC gets the choice of picking what kekkai Genkai he wants so he picked wood-style he hasn't used for the majority of the novel.

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Uncle_Roger_main

It was a great story until chapter 44 and then nothing that he did up to that chapter matters. Just skip ahead and you wont feel a massive amount of disappointment in you life.

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RIP666

It's so good. I want a second part of this story. Please, author. SECOND BOOK. SECOND BOOK. SECOND BOOK. SECOND BOOK. SECOND BOOK. SECOND BOOK.

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Idealist

I am crying over this new chapter. holy moly that was so epic and I enjoyed it. (sacrifice chapter) Keep going, author. please tell me about your plan after this

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Ezzaldien_s

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mutekishifu

4 star at the beginning Mc is an imbecile but it gets better afterwards .....................................................................................

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Renata24

best naruto ff I've ever read, story is good easy to understand but it still keeps close to the plot and a nice amount of tear jesters to change it up and give you the passion to keep reading, had to "try" and change books just so I dont finish this all in 1 go

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Mohd_Zulhilmi_90

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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Mohd_Zulhilmi_90

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Daoist0l8g4v

Super glad I found this fic; having a lot of fun reading it. Really like Hiroki, too. Been devouring a bunch of fics that mostly upset me lately so this was a relief — thank you. For my own pleasure, I hope you write many many more chapters (provided you still find enjoyment in doing so). Best of luck to you regardless.

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D1_2027

A very nice story btw So when will you come back whahwhahahw its already past 1 month will wait again for this wonderful fanfic[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]