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Terkadang bagus ataupun tidaknya sebuah cerita itu tergantung sifat karakter utama dalam cerita itu sendiri... Sangat disayngkan di awal awal chapter MC masih melihat dunia dari sudut pandang tidak nyata atau menganggap semua orang yang berinteraksi dengannya hanya karakter fiksi ........ Yah saya tidak protes karena setiap penulis berhak memilih alur ceritanya sendiri dan kami selaku pembaca hanya menikmati karya ini...... Well jujur...saya tidak suka MC ini.. Itu saja.. Tapi saya akan memberikan ulasan yg bagus karena usaha author dalam membuat karya ini dan saya dukung karya anda
MC was said to be chaotic neutral but really he's just evil and whilst that would be fine the things he does are just naive and stupid, he's instantly enslaved by an old man for no reason other than to introduce a harem member and deviate from plot. I accept many things but not inferior slave protags. Repulsive. -- Does everybody have some soyboy-cu*k enslaved protag with no intelligence fetish recently?
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i do like it but it seems that his path is something i don't like.. its ok to get power no matter how but i will never sacrifice my family... it doesn't matter if you are evil but he hit my bottomline.. but still i will contijue reading it...
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ngl i love this book the mc i dont like talking too much so thats all i have to say.................................................................................................
--I like the idea of multiple animes in one world and the way you present it is improving more and more -- I like the mc so much and he has alot of development waiting for him -- overall Great story and has alot of potential keep the amazing work 😁 -- I like to add as a cultured man like any respectful reader here the I the harem very much 😋👍 --- this is my first review ever and I hope you forgive me if I did any mistake
Don't mind me.. I like the mc's personality and even though its wish fulfillment the mc is not a beta. Just from that I'll give 5stars also power stones. Don't drop it bruv
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Thanks for the story. Thanks for the story. Thanks for the storu. Thanks for the story. Thanks for the story. Thanks for the story. Thanks for the storu. Thanks for the story.
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nice plot twist here.....good keep going author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
continue?? ..............................................................................................................................................
haissssssssss I wonder where can I find An MC like in " That Man's Room " ( a ****hwa ) haissssssssss He was not like the other MC he was Naive, Honest, Funny, Good, and he's not crazy about *** unlike the other MC who is crazy with ***😬 Haisss I hope Someone Made A Fanfic/ Novel with An MC like Him... His name Is Kang but as for his last name... I don't know.... So better read That Pornhwa let me repeat again the tittle is "" "" "" "That man's room" "" "" "" and its a Masterpiece ✨✨✨ promise you wont regret it because of the MC's behaviour 😁😁😁😁😁😁
Didn't even read the book. Just want to know where the covers from, help a brother out 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌
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꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
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good and interesing. author, why don't you tag it (Netori, world travel). * where you make him add married women and when he goes to other("world") anime you know, you can add girls from those harem anime that do not progress in romance: -nisekoi -To love Ru. -among other animes, where your protagonist takes all those girls xD, and as you said your protagonist is not a saint.
So, just to let you know I try to update at least every day. That may not always be the case and if not, it’ll at most be one chapter every two-three days. But my main aim is one chapter everyday. They’re only short so it should be easy, but I’m giving you that warning that it may not always be the case.
Terkadang bagus ataupun tidaknya sebuah cerita itu tergantung sifat karakter utama dalam cerita itu sendiri... Sangat disayngkan di awal awal chapter MC masih melihat dunia dari sudut pandang tidak nyata atau menganggap semua orang yang berinteraksi dengannya hanya karakter fiksi ........ Yah saya tidak protes karena setiap penulis berhak memilih alur ceritanya sendiri dan kami selaku pembaca hanya menikmati karya ini...... Well jujur...saya tidak suka MC ini.. Itu saja.. Tapi saya akan memberikan ulasan yg bagus karena usaha author dalam membuat karya ini dan saya dukung karya anda
MC was said to be chaotic neutral but really he's just evil and whilst that would be fine the things he does are just naive and stupid, he's instantly enslaved by an old man for no reason other than to introduce a harem member and deviate from plot. I accept many things but not inferior slave protags. Repulsive. -- Does everybody have some soyboy-cu*k enslaved protag with no intelligence fetish recently?
Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche Cliche
i do like it but it seems that his path is something i don't like.. its ok to get power no matter how but i will never sacrifice my family... it doesn't matter if you are evil but he hit my bottomline.. but still i will contijue reading it...
issei there issei here issei simp issei there issei here issei simp issei there issei here issei simp issei there issei here issei simp issei there issei here issei simp issei there issei here issei simp
ngl i love this book the mc i dont like talking too much so thats all i have to say.................................................................................................
--I like the idea of multiple animes in one world and the way you present it is improving more and more -- I like the mc so much and he has alot of development waiting for him -- overall Great story and has alot of potential keep the amazing work 😁 -- I like to add as a cultured man like any respectful reader here the I the harem very much 😋👍 --- this is my first review ever and I hope you forgive me if I did any mistake
Don't mind me.. I like the mc's personality and even though its wish fulfillment the mc is not a beta. Just from that I'll give 5stars also power stones. Don't drop it bruv
Spoiler de révélation Boring ......................................................................................................................................
thanks author ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update.
Thanks for the story. Thanks for the story. Thanks for the storu. Thanks for the story. Thanks for the story. Thanks for the story. Thanks for the storu. Thanks for the story.
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nice plot twist here.....good keep going author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
continue?? ..............................................................................................................................................
haissssssssss I wonder where can I find An MC like in " That Man's Room " ( a ****hwa ) haissssssssss He was not like the other MC he was Naive, Honest, Funny, Good, and he's not crazy about *** unlike the other MC who is crazy with ***😬 Haisss I hope Someone Made A Fanfic/ Novel with An MC like Him... His name Is Kang but as for his last name... I don't know.... So better read That Pornhwa let me repeat again the tittle is "" "" "" "That man's room" "" "" "" and its a Masterpiece ✨✨✨ promise you wont regret it because of the MC's behaviour 😁😁😁😁😁😁
Didn't even read the book. Just want to know where the covers from, help a brother out 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌👉👌 👉👌 👉👌 👉👌
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Spoiler de révélation ꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
Please add metamorphosis and save her 😭 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Dormammu e venido a negociar. mis piedras para una votación para los siguientes mundos x
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Great book! Great book! Great book! Great book! Great book!Great book!Great book! Great book! Great book! Great book! Great book!Great book!
good and interesing. author, why don't you tag it (Netori, world travel). * where you make him add married women and when he goes to other("world") anime you know, you can add girls from those harem anime that do not progress in romance: -nisekoi -To love Ru. -among other animes, where your protagonist takes all those girls xD, and as you said your protagonist is not a saint.
So, just to let you know I try to update at least every day. That may not always be the case and if not, it’ll at most be one chapter every two-three days. But my main aim is one chapter everyday. They’re only short so it should be easy, but I’m giving you that warning that it may not always be the case.