129Critiques
3.72
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
man, I tried to trade this trash I really did but it's just so terribly written in the beginning I got headaches just attempting to make it through chapters, MC is an absolute moron, and not oh quirky funny kinda stupid, but just plain stupid. Don't waste your time or coins.
Bro, What happened to Yoshida Gina and the other girl he kidnapped and also Did he just leave wen qinqin and the other lu girl to die.The time skip was really sudden and Did MC not remember his stepmother and stepbrother. Can the author also just one time mention all his girls. Thanks
Spoiler de révélation
well there is a apocalypse comming and the first thing mc did it wasting time while he didn't even have enough surrival ability 20 chap and with little progress
Spoiler de révélation
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The MC Harrased every single girl he see's interesting, full of hypocrisy, the Mc is sometimes smart sometimes acting like an idiot. If you want your brain cells decrease like mine go ahead I'm not stopping you. Don't worry the plot of this novel is quite unique to be honest. Copied.. Just to show some warnings and awareness before reading it. 😆
It's a bad story but... I'm not surprised, I knew it would be rubbish to read that it's a cultured genre. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔✌🤔✌🤔🤔🤔✌🤔✌✌🤔✌🤔✌🤔✌✌🤔✌🤔✌🤔✌🤔✌🤔✌
o cara e vingativo! coidadddddddddddooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤮🤢🤮🤮🤕🤮🤢🤮🤕🤮🤢🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮😨🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤮🤢🤮🤮🤕🤮🤢🤮🤕🤮🤢🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮😨
I am still reading through the first 100 chapters so no spoilers pls! Just wondering, what chapter does S-Day actually happen? Thanks......!
Exp................................................................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation
I don't know who's more stupid, author or mc,after 1000 years mc is like a new born, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel.
Can't say im surprised, after all webnovel has its own "quality standard" to uphold. Long story short i dont recommend this novel. But if you are bored and you like dumb MC's without good priority control and harem then go ahead and have fun with this novel.
I don't know what to say 😂😅😅😅😂😃😂😃😂😃😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😃😂😂😂💩💩🐒😂🤫🤫🤤🤤🔥🔥😂😂😂😂💩🐒
it was good at first then went down hill....................................................................................................
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
man, I tried to trade this trash I really did but it's just so terribly written in the beginning I got headaches just attempting to make it through chapters, MC is an absolute moron, and not oh quirky funny kinda stupid, but just plain stupid. Don't waste your time or coins.
Bro, What happened to Yoshida Gina and the other girl he kidnapped and also Did he just leave wen qinqin and the other lu girl to die.The time skip was really sudden and Did MC not remember his stepmother and stepbrother. Can the author also just one time mention all his girls. Thanks
Spoiler de révélation well there is a apocalypse comming and the first thing mc did it wasting time while he didn't even have enough surrival ability 20 chap and with little progress
Spoiler de révélation [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The MC Harrased every single girl he see's interesting, full of hypocrisy, the Mc is sometimes smart sometimes acting like an idiot. If you want your brain cells decrease like mine go ahead I'm not stopping you. Don't worry the plot of this novel is quite unique to be honest. Copied.. Just to show some warnings and awareness before reading it. 😆
It's a bad story but... I'm not surprised, I knew it would be rubbish to read that it's a cultured genre. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔✌🤔✌🤔🤔🤔✌🤔✌✌🤔✌🤔✌🤔✌✌🤔✌🤔✌🤔✌🤔✌🤔✌
o cara e vingativo! coidadddddddddddooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤮🤢🤮🤮🤕🤮🤢🤮🤕🤮🤢🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮😨🤢🤮🤢🤮🤢🤮🤮🤢🤮🤮🤕🤮🤢🤮🤕🤮🤢🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤕🤮🤮🤕🤮😨
I am still reading through the first 100 chapters so no spoilers pls! Just wondering, what chapter does S-Day actually happen? Thanks......!
Exp................................................................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation I don't know who's more stupid, author or mc,after 1000 years mc is like a new born, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel, stupid novel.
Can't say im surprised, after all webnovel has its own "quality standard" to uphold. Long story short i dont recommend this novel. But if you are bored and you like dumb MC's without good priority control and harem then go ahead and have fun with this novel.
I don't know what to say 😂😅😅😅😂😃😂😃😂😃😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😃😂😂😂😃😂😃😂😂😂💩💩🐒😂🤫🤫🤤🤤🔥🔥😂😂😂😂💩🐒
it was good at first then went down hill....................................................................................................
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿👎🏿
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
👍👍[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]