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Franchement au début, l'histoire se passait plutôt bien. Mais après ça n'a fait qu'empirer. On a l'impression que l'auteur a plusieurs idées et il les met en place dans son roman ce qui donne pour résultats que ça ni queue ni tête. Y'as rien qui nous fait accrocher à cette histoire. On peut lire 30 chapitres d'un personnage secondaire tout ça pour qu'il tourne en rond. Franchement , l'auteur a besoin qu'on lui dise ce qu'il peut on ne pas faire comme un enfant.
This novel really matches the title, the main character is not MC but another character, MC is just a side person. 80% side character story and 20% about mc. so those who like to read about many characters who are not mc please read. Reminder mc is a stupid type and there is no character development, mc can live because of the help of others, and mc is useless he just fights and loses, and his friends or lover always protect him.
I see author seem want to give up on this series but please don't it good at least for to waste time and want see the Ending😭.just don't dropped this series
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Nice world building, good characters, the thing i dont personally like is the MC fetish on tsunderes, i'm on the 105 and the only they are annoying, and know he even turns into a simp... not counting the FMCs its a good story... hope it gets better and we dont get most of the interactions being him bickering with the FMCs
the story is pretty good in the first few chapters, but after that the story gets worse. when compared to what I read in the synopsis and what the actual story was, it really didn't live up to my expectations. at the beginning of mc's story is quite promising, i think the story will be very interesting. but after a few chapters he meets a stranger and then the stranger threatens mc, mc gets scared and he becomes that person's dog. a few chapters later mc already mentioned the stranger who considered mc as a dog as a friend. mc is too jolly goofy in the story. and there's the stranger I mentioned earlier, taking advantage of mc and the girls around him. to be honest if this was written from that foreigner(Kyle) point of view, our mc(Mikael) would just look like a stupid underling and side character. but because this is from Mikael's point of view, but everything is coordinated and arranged by Kyle, so mc doesn't have his charm in this story. mc is just like a side character acting as a loyal dog to Kyle
sabi ko na pinoy e, potek hahahahahaha keep it up bro!!!!! ganda story....................................................................................................................................................
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So far I have read 39 chaps, and it is very good. The character setting is good, the story development is good, it's a rare find in this mess of novels. I this one underrated novel ! Thanks for the entertainment author pujimaki!!
I honestly loved this story I really liked the plot also very well created, I really like two characters with a lot of life and story about themselves two background characters or friends of the protagonist,the personality is amazing, I loved him and the heroines a lot, now I honestly loved the heroines a lot and their personalities were well created
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Hello, this is me Pujimaki, the author of MNPOTS, I decided to give a review to give some heads-up about what are you going to read. -The MC is an 18-year-old man who was transported into a world where there are monsters. -He would meet his teammates there and they returned to the Earth. - The Mc will be the strongest but he will fall and restart again. - if you began to think about why something is odd about the story, always look at the title " MC's not part of the story" and you will get the gist why. - Perhaps you are afraid of the tag 'Tragedy ' but I believe every story needs conflict to spice up the plot, what I did is made it a bit sad but not enough to cry with... I'm serious, please believe in me and don't drop this. - this is an action- fantasy novel but it will be strange if it's not realistic. - the mc needs to start at the bottom to reach the top. Just like in society, we, normal people started at the bottom too and I want the mc to be just like that. Anyway, I will give this a five star because it's my novel.
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I rate this full of 5, as I like the story flow. though I am disappointed because the updates were slow, I understand that the author itself have been in a difficult time management. I'm the second one in terms of voting power stones with the score of 20 votes, I really like the story.
I'm your first reviewer, the book is really good though it's still needs some improvement in it's grammar structure. I'm loving it and I hope it's a harem
I've read many of the novels on this site, I must say that I was tired of always reading the same story and I was no longer finding something interesting to read. But this book is different, it's not just another one filled with slaps in the face, I'm really enjoying it. Worth reading it's very good.
Franchement au début, l'histoire se passait plutôt bien. Mais après ça n'a fait qu'empirer. On a l'impression que l'auteur a plusieurs idées et il les met en place dans son roman ce qui donne pour résultats que ça ni queue ni tête. Y'as rien qui nous fait accrocher à cette histoire. On peut lire 30 chapitres d'un personnage secondaire tout ça pour qu'il tourne en rond. Franchement , l'auteur a besoin qu'on lui dise ce qu'il peut on ne pas faire comme un enfant.
This novel really matches the title, the main character is not MC but another character, MC is just a side person. 80% side character story and 20% about mc. so those who like to read about many characters who are not mc please read. Reminder mc is a stupid type and there is no character development, mc can live because of the help of others, and mc is useless he just fights and loses, and his friends or lover always protect him.
I see author seem want to give up on this series but please don't it good at least for to waste time and want see the Ending😭.just don't dropped this series
Spoiler de révélation Nice world building, good characters, the thing i dont personally like is the MC fetish on tsunderes, i'm on the 105 and the only they are annoying, and know he even turns into a simp... not counting the FMCs its a good story... hope it gets better and we dont get most of the interactions being him bickering with the FMCs
the story is pretty good in the first few chapters, but after that the story gets worse. when compared to what I read in the synopsis and what the actual story was, it really didn't live up to my expectations. at the beginning of mc's story is quite promising, i think the story will be very interesting. but after a few chapters he meets a stranger and then the stranger threatens mc, mc gets scared and he becomes that person's dog. a few chapters later mc already mentioned the stranger who considered mc as a dog as a friend. mc is too jolly goofy in the story. and there's the stranger I mentioned earlier, taking advantage of mc and the girls around him. to be honest if this was written from that foreigner(Kyle) point of view, our mc(Mikael) would just look like a stupid underling and side character. but because this is from Mikael's point of view, but everything is coordinated and arranged by Kyle, so mc doesn't have his charm in this story. mc is just like a side character acting as a loyal dog to Kyle
sabi ko na pinoy e, potek hahahahahaha keep it up bro!!!!! ganda story....................................................................................................................................................
goooooooo9ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiioooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddd
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So far I have read 39 chaps, and it is very good. The character setting is good, the story development is good, it's a rare find in this mess of novels. I this one underrated novel ! Thanks for the entertainment author pujimaki!!
I honestly loved this story I really liked the plot also very well created, I really like two characters with a lot of life and story about themselves two background characters or friends of the protagonist,the personality is amazing, I loved him and the heroines a lot, now I honestly loved the heroines a lot and their personalities were well created
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Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
ahh the villains are coming out hahahahahahahahhahahahahhaahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaha hahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahah^_^
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Get Your Book Hardcover Published & Win $50,000 Hi! Over 11k authors joined SWA I, and had won over $200,000. This time we have launched SWA II, focusing on entertaining novels and raising the first prize to $50,000! It is time to monetize your book! We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access of winning the grand prizes and hardcover publishing. Imagine your book is put on the shelf with a best seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can participate. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves way much more. Join us now! Please visit https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7 for more information or contact: kerawood.review@gmail.com
Hello, this is me Pujimaki, the author of MNPOTS, I decided to give a review to give some heads-up about what are you going to read. -The MC is an 18-year-old man who was transported into a world where there are monsters. -He would meet his teammates there and they returned to the Earth. - The Mc will be the strongest but he will fall and restart again. - if you began to think about why something is odd about the story, always look at the title " MC's not part of the story" and you will get the gist why. - Perhaps you are afraid of the tag 'Tragedy ' but I believe every story needs conflict to spice up the plot, what I did is made it a bit sad but not enough to cry with... I'm serious, please believe in me and don't drop this. - this is an action- fantasy novel but it will be strange if it's not realistic. - the mc needs to start at the bottom to reach the top. Just like in society, we, normal people started at the bottom too and I want the mc to be just like that. Anyway, I will give this a five star because it's my novel.
Spoiler de révélation I rate this full of 5, as I like the story flow. though I am disappointed because the updates were slow, I understand that the author itself have been in a difficult time management. I'm the second one in terms of voting power stones with the score of 20 votes, I really like the story.
I'm your first reviewer, the book is really good though it's still needs some improvement in it's grammar structure. I'm loving it and I hope it's a harem
I've read many of the novels on this site, I must say that I was tired of always reading the same story and I was no longer finding something interesting to read. But this book is different, it's not just another one filled with slaps in the face, I'm really enjoying it. Worth reading it's very good.