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your determination to continue to write even though English is not your first language is great and you should continue to write but get Word and write in that it will help you with grammar and alike
Ok, this story is really good, but honestly, the grammar quality is so bad it hurts my brain just trying to make sense of what's written most of the time.
i like it🤤🤤🤤 give me Note🙏🥺. the gammar ist steadily developing and i can have an Fluid Reading experiens. the Storyline ist nice and i Hope the Story geht longer
Everything on this novel is written well so far so keep a good work also I hope author-san doesn't dropped this novel,this a my first time reading that have female main character AI or shipgirl with genderbend however this novel have grammar problem that had to fix but still I'm enjoy reading this novel that's all...so have a good day and take care yourself too!
to be honest I didn't read the story I'm more complaining about the synopsis but it's a girl or a boy that's why I am confused okay I am talking about the main character???
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So this is my review! !😁 I haven't read it yet so I don't know what happens in the novel but let just say I'm addicted at Ai Mc.. .well it's tricky to find like this one, finding a Ai warship/starship or Ai ( all Ai mc) is a 1 in a thousand novel .. .. If you ask me how many novels like this one I discovered then let me say ( it's a fcking 2 novels) there are many ai mc but sometimes it's too short , hiatus , dropped , and a shitty one.. . Keep up author!!😁. ..bwala💥💥I vote this one💯all stone will be here😏
the story is very good and has an interesting premise and is developing well. the English isn't that good but considering that it seems to be the author's non-primary language they have done well enough to make it to the point where you can fill in the gaps -good novel overall
Honestly speaking I think i've become addicted to this book and Green's journey in space, but now im sad because it won't get updates. I don't know what else to say in my opinion the characters the story and the world are all phenominal and I would love to read more.
your determination to continue to write even though English is not your first language is great and you should continue to write but get Word and write in that it will help you with grammar and alike
Ok, this story is really good, but honestly, the grammar quality is so bad it hurts my brain just trying to make sense of what's written most of the time.
i like it🤤🤤🤤 give me Note🙏🥺. the gammar ist steadily developing and i can have an Fluid Reading experiens. the Storyline ist nice and i Hope the Story geht longer
Everything on this novel is written well so far so keep a good work also I hope author-san doesn't dropped this novel,this a my first time reading that have female main character AI or shipgirl with genderbend however this novel have grammar problem that had to fix but still I'm enjoy reading this novel that's all...so have a good day and take care yourself too!
to be honest I didn't read the story I'm more complaining about the synopsis but it's a girl or a boy that's why I am confused okay I am talking about the main character???
Good........................................................Good........................................................Good........................................................Good........................................................Good........................................................
So this is my review! !😁 I haven't read it yet so I don't know what happens in the novel but let just say I'm addicted at Ai Mc.. .well it's tricky to find like this one, finding a Ai warship/starship or Ai ( all Ai mc) is a 1 in a thousand novel .. .. If you ask me how many novels like this one I discovered then let me say ( it's a fcking 2 novels) there are many ai mc but sometimes it's too short , hiatus , dropped , and a shitty one.. . Keep up author!!😁. ..bwala💥💥I vote this one💯all stone will be here😏
the story is very good and has an interesting premise and is developing well. the English isn't that good but considering that it seems to be the author's non-primary language they have done well enough to make it to the point where you can fill in the gaps -good novel overall
Honestly speaking I think i've become addicted to this book and Green's journey in space, but now im sad because it won't get updates. I don't know what else to say in my opinion the characters the story and the world are all phenominal and I would love to read more.