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uhmmm... i think the issue here is the chapters, one chap keeps repeating like 2 times or more a row... i think author needs to fix this, and i'm still waiting for updates since this story interests me. thank you❣️ stay well and healthy author..
Dear author…. why no update anymore????? 🥲🥲🥲🥲 Been waiting for months but really disappointed ☹️ . Are you drop all your novels here????? 🥲🥲🥲
Nona_Ge Any updates ? Been waiting…. 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔 ✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃🛎🛎🛎
I don't know why James is out to destroy both friends. Also Mia ought not to backstab Faye, no matter what James threatens her with. She was the only person who knows Faye's secret. Then Faye's cousin has really gone nuts. I wonder how people could be so mean
Hello Nona Ge Any updates for latest chapter? Been waiting before i purchase the Privilege ...🙏🏻 I need Faye n Dennis & Geae n Eryk.. Cant wait....
I am amazed by people's imagination every day. I was curious about the author's inspiration. I wonder if there really is such a thing as a sugar baby. 🤣🤣🤣
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bagus banget ceritanya, bikin penasaran setiap bab nya. buat author semangat terus nulis nya dan semoga sukses selalu kakak, buat novel nya juga makin sukses.😀
The story is well organized, and very understanding.. But the stability of updates should be worked on. Because sometimes we finish the novel and waiting for the next chapter to come out.
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keep trying. you are doing well. the novel has good and sure will get better. so, don't hesitate to pick up this book if you are looking for something for enjoyment
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Give this books chance, you won't regret it! ❤️ the story is not that heavy, lots of funny moments actually ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I like the story so far 😊 keep up the good work! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
never get enough of this! more please 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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for me, this is the best story ❤️ thank you for writing such an addictive book! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The story is really good, you should give this book chance :) I like Denis too much lol 💅💅💅💅💅🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
for me, this story is really interesting, especially Denis who is a bit mysterious keep up good work 👋👋👋💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
Very good novel👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
It's a very good story and addictive. You have to try it especially if you like strong type woman And if you like a gentle but mysterious man, Denis is like that
Hello, this is my first novel in English, so i'm sorry that there's a grammar that's still wrong. I always open up positive opinions and criticisms, but don't negative criticism, my little heart can't take it, hehe Anyway, Thank you so much for reading my novel and giving Denis and Faye a chance~ with love, nona_ge.
uhmmm... i think the issue here is the chapters, one chap keeps repeating like 2 times or more a row... i think author needs to fix this, and i'm still waiting for updates since this story interests me. thank you❣️ stay well and healthy author..
Dear author…. why no update anymore????? 🥲🥲🥲🥲 Been waiting for months but really disappointed ☹️ . Are you drop all your novels here????? 🥲🥲🥲
Nona_Ge Any updates ? Been waiting…. 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔 ✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔 🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎🛎💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃💃🛎🛎🛎
I don't know why James is out to destroy both friends. Also Mia ought not to backstab Faye, no matter what James threatens her with. She was the only person who knows Faye's secret. Then Faye's cousin has really gone nuts. I wonder how people could be so mean
Hello Nona Ge Any updates for latest chapter? Been waiting before i purchase the Privilege ...🙏🏻 I need Faye n Dennis & Geae n Eryk.. Cant wait....
I am amazed by people's imagination every day. I was curious about the author's inspiration. I wonder if there really is such a thing as a sugar baby. 🤣🤣🤣
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐
bagus banget ceritanya, bikin penasaran setiap bab nya. buat author semangat terus nulis nya dan semoga sukses selalu kakak, buat novel nya juga makin sukses.😀
The story is well organized, and very understanding.. But the stability of updates should be worked on. Because sometimes we finish the novel and waiting for the next chapter to come out.
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keep trying. you are doing well. the novel has good and sure will get better. so, don't hesitate to pick up this book if you are looking for something for enjoyment
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I like the story so far 😊 keep up the good work! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
never get enough of this! more please 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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for me, this is the best story ❤️ thank you for writing such an addictive book! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
The story is really good, you should give this book chance :) I like Denis too much lol 💅💅💅💅💅🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
for me, this story is really interesting, especially Denis who is a bit mysterious keep up good work 👋👋👋💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
Very good novel👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
It's a very good story and addictive. You have to try it especially if you like strong type woman And if you like a gentle but mysterious man, Denis is like that
Hello, this is my first novel in English, so i'm sorry that there's a grammar that's still wrong. I always open up positive opinions and criticisms, but don't negative criticism, my little heart can't take it, hehe Anyway, Thank you so much for reading my novel and giving Denis and Faye a chance~ with love, nona_ge.