Synopsis
Hello Friends. Good day to you all.
This is my first try to write a novel.
I'm using this fanfic as a media to practice my skill.
I'm going to use my own character while changing some stories inside for practice purpose.
Please give me a lot of review on this so i can learned my deficiency and i hoped i can continued to grow and present an original novel of mine soon.
Thank you.
Sincerely Me
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