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The characters are well-designed😍. The writing inside the book is of the highest caliber; it has excellent language and well-developed characters.
Initially I was looking with a different vibe then I came across this it's sorta interesting and cool ,but please could u make a massive updates of the chapters I wanna know what's gonna happen in the end author😥😥😥😟😟I enjoyed reading it ,nice job author 😍😍😍💋💦💋🍓
Love the story. Entertaining and addictive. ‘ Got this book from the daily recommendation. At first, I’m hesitant to continue reading the book because of the FL mistress situation. But as the story progress, I got addicted and eager to know what will happen to the next chapters. Nice plot... Many can relate as they have encountered same situation or know someone of the same situation. Congrats to the writer for keeping the excitement as the story continues. ‘Will include this in my reading list. Rrad and you’ll love it too!❤️❤️❤️❤️
But this is pure punishment..... How can you just be releasing two episodes a day? Because we said it was interesting doesn't mean you should be punishing us with little or no episodes.... This is unfair.
Spoiler de révélation Keep writing...... Please please,please 0pease.... 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏... But why do you prefer to Dela the novel now? Im really enjoying it oo.
Spoiler de révélation Expecting more updates..... ,😊😊😊.... 8m really enjoying the story. Kudos to the author of this book. Please, release more chapters.... I'm waiting and can't wait more.
Spoiler de révélation It is really getting interesting.... Pls don't delay or hesitate to post / add more ..... chapters on time..... You have really tried.....
Good job and thumbs up for the writer/author. But,why are you releasing little or less episodes....? It's somehow annoying. Try and release more chapters naw. Ose.... ..... ....
Spoiler de révélation To the author, I really appreciate your work and efforts.... stay blessed. Please,send the rest of the story. I'm really enjoying it and the author is doing a very great job.... Thumbs up...
What is going on nah??????? ?????? ??????? Mmmm mmmm mmm mmm ????? ???¿??????? ????? ??????? ???? Mm mm mm mm mm mm mm mm mm mm mmm m mm mm Oh my Gosh....
Spoiler de révélation Please ooooooooo .... More chapters ooooooo this small small chapter release is killing somebody oooo . Allow us to enjoy the rest of the novel ooooooo. I don't really like review........... Seriously........
Spoiler de révélation What is delaying the release of the remainder chapters naw?.... Why are you not posting any more? I'm enjoying the story so, so why don't you want to upload more chapter/ episodes? please, don't make me be tired of ready to go..
Spoiler de révélation
narration, story line, character presentation everything is awesome. but same topic dragging for more than one episode is not correct. framing her 3 episodes similarly wedding day so many episode.
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Just reading the synopsis I was eventually intrigued but reading some spoiler.. uh-uh this cheating and mistress thing is not my liking of tea, I thought maybe the lm would divorce his first wife or something he found out the his child is not actually his childxjshs something like that.. but no. -_-
Im sorry i really dont understand people Who like this kind of story. A liar and a cheater is the male lead?? He has a wife and a child Yet he says he fell in love and married the fenale lead and she is willing after puting up a little fuss. Yuck so disgusting. Since when morally corrupted individuals are considered main leads. Whats the point of law and society if men can go around marrying a new wife just because the old wife has changed. Also what does it matter if his wife is cheating?! Isnt he doing the same, he actually took it further and married her. Please produce good novels not cheap third rated ones.
I like the story , it's very interesting.... The writer is doing a very good job.. he should keep it up and try to upload more chapters. Please don't stop posting halfway,I beg you.
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Hmm... This story might not be my cup of tea, the ML's logic doesn't really make sense to me. He seems kind of delusional as to why she doesn't trust him or like him even when she tells him straight up what the reason is... He almost comes off as those MLs in a novel where a MC rebirths and face slaps.
I really don’t get how people say this us a good boot. For one,the grammar is horrible. For second, no character development. The story line is immoral. There is no real love between the ML snd FL and he remains a cheater. There is nothing called second wife. This is nor Arab. He is doing something Illegal And immoral. And he keeps sleeping around,
I am not really get into the story yet but already being 'fan away' by the synopsis cause I am rather sceptical of the male lead morale in marriage the way the synopsis described. Perhaps, I will return to read this book one day if I could be motivated by the story.
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! interesting.... one of the best 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
i love this book 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
so far story is okay...though confusing at first...hmm will there be a happy ending? only author can tell [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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This novel is not a good example to young people because it can promote that its interesting to have a complicated status. Well, this is my opinion only. You have yours!
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This is becoming more than interesting. Who would have believed that soon yin will even make love with Dad yun and even get pregnant. But how come nobody is telling us about Soo yin,s Dad, his whereabouts and how Soo yin,s mum happens to be mistress. Somebody should tell us about Soo yin's full background so that when Lisa is insulting her we will not feel too angry.
The characters are well-designed😍. The writing inside the book is of the highest caliber; it has excellent language and well-developed characters.
Initially I was looking with a different vibe then I came across this it's sorta interesting and cool ,but please could u make a massive updates of the chapters I wanna know what's gonna happen in the end author😥😥😥😟😟I enjoyed reading it ,nice job author 😍😍😍💋💦💋🍓
Love the story. Entertaining and addictive. ‘ Got this book from the daily recommendation. At first, I’m hesitant to continue reading the book because of the FL mistress situation. But as the story progress, I got addicted and eager to know what will happen to the next chapters. Nice plot... Many can relate as they have encountered same situation or know someone of the same situation. Congrats to the writer for keeping the excitement as the story continues. ‘Will include this in my reading list. Rrad and you’ll love it too!❤️❤️❤️❤️
But this is pure punishment..... How can you just be releasing two episodes a day? Because we said it was interesting doesn't mean you should be punishing us with little or no episodes.... This is unfair.
Spoiler de révélation Keep writing...... Please please,please 0pease.... 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏... But why do you prefer to Dela the novel now? Im really enjoying it oo.
Spoiler de révélation Expecting more updates..... ,😊😊😊.... 8m really enjoying the story. Kudos to the author of this book. Please, release more chapters.... I'm waiting and can't wait more.
Spoiler de révélation It is really getting interesting.... Pls don't delay or hesitate to post / add more ..... chapters on time..... You have really tried.....
Good job and thumbs up for the writer/author. But,why are you releasing little or less episodes....? It's somehow annoying. Try and release more chapters naw. Ose.... ..... ....
Spoiler de révélation To the author, I really appreciate your work and efforts.... stay blessed. Please,send the rest of the story. I'm really enjoying it and the author is doing a very great job.... Thumbs up...
What is going on nah??????? ?????? ??????? Mmmm mmmm mmm mmm ????? ???¿??????? ????? ??????? ???? Mm mm mm mm mm mm mm mm mm mm mmm m mm mm Oh my Gosh....
Spoiler de révélation Please ooooooooo .... More chapters ooooooo this small small chapter release is killing somebody oooo . Allow us to enjoy the rest of the novel ooooooo. I don't really like review........... Seriously........
Spoiler de révélation What is delaying the release of the remainder chapters naw?.... Why are you not posting any more? I'm enjoying the story so, so why don't you want to upload more chapter/ episodes? please, don't make me be tired of ready to go..
Spoiler de révélation narration, story line, character presentation everything is awesome. but same topic dragging for more than one episode is not correct. framing her 3 episodes similarly wedding day so many episode.
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Just reading the synopsis I was eventually intrigued but reading some spoiler.. uh-uh this cheating and mistress thing is not my liking of tea, I thought maybe the lm would divorce his first wife or something he found out the his child is not actually his childxjshs something like that.. but no. -_-
Im sorry i really dont understand people Who like this kind of story. A liar and a cheater is the male lead?? He has a wife and a child Yet he says he fell in love and married the fenale lead and she is willing after puting up a little fuss. Yuck so disgusting. Since when morally corrupted individuals are considered main leads. Whats the point of law and society if men can go around marrying a new wife just because the old wife has changed. Also what does it matter if his wife is cheating?! Isnt he doing the same, he actually took it further and married her. Please produce good novels not cheap third rated ones.
I like the story , it's very interesting.... The writer is doing a very good job.. he should keep it up and try to upload more chapters. Please don't stop posting halfway,I beg you.
Spoiler de révélation Hmm... This story might not be my cup of tea, the ML's logic doesn't really make sense to me. He seems kind of delusional as to why she doesn't trust him or like him even when she tells him straight up what the reason is... He almost comes off as those MLs in a novel where a MC rebirths and face slaps.
I really don’t get how people say this us a good boot. For one,the grammar is horrible. For second, no character development. The story line is immoral. There is no real love between the ML snd FL and he remains a cheater. There is nothing called second wife. This is nor Arab. He is doing something Illegal And immoral. And he keeps sleeping around,
I am not really get into the story yet but already being 'fan away' by the synopsis cause I am rather sceptical of the male lead morale in marriage the way the synopsis described. Perhaps, I will return to read this book one day if I could be motivated by the story.
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! interesting.... one of the best 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
i love this book 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
so far story is okay...though confusing at first...hmm will there be a happy ending? only author can tell [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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This novel is not a good example to young people because it can promote that its interesting to have a complicated status. Well, this is my opinion only. You have yours!
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This is becoming more than interesting. Who would have believed that soon yin will even make love with Dad yun and even get pregnant. But how come nobody is telling us about Soo yin,s Dad, his whereabouts and how Soo yin,s mum happens to be mistress. Somebody should tell us about Soo yin's full background so that when Lisa is insulting her we will not feel too angry.
FML is useless. can't even stand by her own beliefs