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So far so good 😍😍😍 I totally love it! very promising plot 🎉🎉🎉 plus, it has bittersweet drama! 😏🔥 It has a few spelling mistakes but I love the narrative ❤️❤️❤️ very much recommended~😊😊😊
Congrats author~!! ❤️ I really like the story so far and I love the narrative voice a lot 💕 💕 I can't wait for what's coming! I really enjoyed all the feelings with drama in the departure chapter, I was able to felt all the fl emotions! wen normally (in other stories) it feels like clichè or fake, but in this one is very well done! and the intrigue with this new boy, i didn't expect to have fantastic creatures too, but I'm looking forward to it~❤️
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! Our fl deserves better!!!😤😭 I hope our fl is blessed by a god or have strong affinity of magic😳🤤 I “think” the archduke have feelings for our fl but doesn’t realize it yet and that he’s blinded by his “trust” to his workers/servants🙄. I don’t know where this(the story) is going but I’m looking forward to it! Thank you for this (quite interesting) work of yours author!UwuMore (fast) updates please!...☺️👉👈 I want more!!!huhu🥰
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Keep at it author! 👍 The chapter and the story line is great and proceeding very well! 😆 Can’t wait to read more! It’ll be a story worth reading as more chapters come in.
I really like the concept and characters. I did see a few puncuation errors, but nothing too bad. The cover is pretty. I’ve read a few chapters and can’t wait to read more.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........its TRANSMIGRATION INTO FANTASY NOVEL + INTO PREVIOUS LIFE Interesting~ Although it's only been a few chapters, I'm in!!! It's fascinating and exciting!!!! Waiting for more updates......................
Even though it is only a few chapters now, I can see the promising great novel here. The storyline flows naturally, the writer eloquently describing the characters and imaginary backgrounds, the quality of writing is also great, it helps readers to Understand the story better. The excitement and tension of the story keeps me waiting for the next chapters. I Wish It could be updated everyday :)
I cannot say much for spelling, grammar or punctuation errors as I have a poor memory and graduated years ago but I do find it well written and rather enjoyable.
So far so good 😍😍😍 I totally love it! very promising plot 🎉🎉🎉 plus, it has bittersweet drama! 😏🔥 It has a few spelling mistakes but I love the narrative ❤️❤️❤️ very much recommended~😊😊😊
Congrats author~!! ❤️ I really like the story so far and I love the narrative voice a lot 💕 💕 I can't wait for what's coming! I really enjoyed all the feelings with drama in the departure chapter, I was able to felt all the fl emotions! wen normally (in other stories) it feels like clichè or fake, but in this one is very well done! and the intrigue with this new boy, i didn't expect to have fantastic creatures too, but I'm looking forward to it~❤️
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! Our fl deserves better!!!😤😭 I hope our fl is blessed by a god or have strong affinity of magic😳🤤 I “think” the archduke have feelings for our fl but doesn’t realize it yet and that he’s blinded by his “trust” to his workers/servants🙄. I don’t know where this(the story) is going but I’m looking forward to it! Thank you for this (quite interesting) work of yours author!UwuMore (fast) updates please!...☺️👉👈 I want more!!!huhu🥰
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Keep at it author! 👍 The chapter and the story line is great and proceeding very well! 😆 Can’t wait to read more! It’ll be a story worth reading as more chapters come in.
I really like the concept and characters. I did see a few puncuation errors, but nothing too bad. The cover is pretty. I’ve read a few chapters and can’t wait to read more.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........its TRANSMIGRATION INTO FANTASY NOVEL + INTO PREVIOUS LIFE Interesting~ Although it's only been a few chapters, I'm in!!! It's fascinating and exciting!!!! Waiting for more updates......................
Even though it is only a few chapters now, I can see the promising great novel here. The storyline flows naturally, the writer eloquently describing the characters and imaginary backgrounds, the quality of writing is also great, it helps readers to Understand the story better. The excitement and tension of the story keeps me waiting for the next chapters. I Wish It could be updated everyday :)
I cannot say much for spelling, grammar or punctuation errors as I have a poor memory and graduated years ago but I do find it well written and rather enjoyable.