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What is going on with this novel? How can you get to this point and stop writing. You owe us what happen to Greta and how her husband responds. This novel has not been updated in 27 days really?
Not very well developed love interest and the story itself doesnt have smooth transitions between event… I would Urge the writer to peoof read and get feedback from Friends/famIly before uploading chapters as well because there’s too many grammatical errors too.
The chapters are taking too long to come out. Can the author please translate a bit more faster. Our points is being wasted because of the delay. And if it is possible can Lisa and Oscar reconcile so the story can come to an end, let all the wicked people be punished and let Ranga return Lisa's second baby,
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No matter how angry her husband is with her, he's supposed to stay beside his wife during this period. I still feel her baby is not dead and her husband took the baby from her which is going to turn out very bad once she finds out about it
i'm sorry but I found that this novel is not my cup of tea. I find the drama is too common and too many angst. Lately I prefer fluffy kind of love to go with. this novel definitely not bad it's just not my type of read right now. good luck author 😊
I still feel there's room for development in this novel. The storyline is not yet developed but at the same time it's not bad. Keep it up !!!!!!!!!!
A nice try , but still it lacks ' click'...... hopefully next chapters in the book will be more exciting and interesting..... . keep up the good work.
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Hi everyone I will publish more chapter constantly next month. I hope you like my book, and don't forget to support me then. Please enjoy my book. [img=recommend]
I don't understand Lisa's mind... Why cannot she accept the marriage proposal... She can live a beautiful life with Oscar. He is trying to pursue her badly 💗
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Nice novel.😇... Waiting for the next chapters eagerly. Please Post the chapters soon. 😍😍😍😍😍 Loving the characters a lot., I would definitely read other books
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Nice Novel..... I Like It....... Plsssss Update More Chapters..... 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇....... Story Is Nice 👍👍👍👍 👌👌👌👌 💞💞💞💞 💗💗💗💗
Hi everyone Please enjoy my book, and hopefully you like it. Please help me vote with powerstone, so I can publish more chapters next month 🥰. And please give some review about my book, I will appreciate it. Have a nice day. 🌹🌹
What is going on with this novel? How can you get to this point and stop writing. You owe us what happen to Greta and how her husband responds. This novel has not been updated in 27 days really?
Not very well developed love interest and the story itself doesnt have smooth transitions between event… I would Urge the writer to peoof read and get feedback from Friends/famIly before uploading chapters as well because there’s too many grammatical errors too.
The chapters are taking too long to come out. Can the author please translate a bit more faster. Our points is being wasted because of the delay. And if it is possible can Lisa and Oscar reconcile so the story can come to an end, let all the wicked people be punished and let Ranga return Lisa's second baby,
Spoiler de révélation Hi! I think you are an excellent writer, and you have been writing Romance story, but would you like to try something new and reach different readership? My name is Molly. I'm an editor of an Adventure Fiction site. Given your outstanding writing skill, I would like to invite you to join our Adventure Fiction Contest. Only 3,000 words is necessary for a review (Examples and writing tips are provided). Once your application is approved, we can offer financial support programs for your further motivation. Besides, when your novel hit a certain word count, we will advertise it to targeted readers. Writing with us= Paid by Writing + New Readership. Join us now! You can find more information at https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy Or reach me at : Rebecca_661@outlook.com
Oscar get a grip maaaan stop toying with her feelings she’s in love with you[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
No matter how angry her husband is with her, he's supposed to stay beside his wife during this period. I still feel her baby is not dead and her husband took the baby from her which is going to turn out very bad once she finds out about it
i'm sorry but I found that this novel is not my cup of tea. I find the drama is too common and too many angst. Lately I prefer fluffy kind of love to go with. this novel definitely not bad it's just not my type of read right now. good luck author 😊
I still feel there's room for development in this novel. The storyline is not yet developed but at the same time it's not bad. Keep it up !!!!!!!!!!
A nice try , but still it lacks ' click'...... hopefully next chapters in the book will be more exciting and interesting..... . keep up the good work.
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Hi everyone I will publish more chapter constantly next month. I hope you like my book, and don't forget to support me then. Please enjoy my book. [img=recommend]
I don't understand Lisa's mind... Why cannot she accept the marriage proposal... She can live a beautiful life with Oscar. He is trying to pursue her badly 💗
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Nice novel.😇... Waiting for the next chapters eagerly. Please Post the chapters soon. 😍😍😍😍😍 Loving the characters a lot., I would definitely read other books
Spoiler de révélation Nice Novel..... I Like It....... Plsssss Update More Chapters..... 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇....... Story Is Nice 👍👍👍👍 👌👌👌👌 💞💞💞💞 💗💗💗💗
Hi everyone Please enjoy my book, and hopefully you like it. Please help me vote with powerstone, so I can publish more chapters next month 🥰. And please give some review about my book, I will appreciate it. Have a nice day. 🌹🌹
When will you finish updating the rest of this book.