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madman1010

as the author i want to say i just write it for fun so it could be really shitty but i am trying my best so to those who like it cool those who hate idk

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zahra_kianpour

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yaboijev

hey man this is super cool and i like my op mc's so just keep writing ok πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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More More More πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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The_UnholyFallen

To be onist thought it wasnt gonna be good but holyπŸ’© it is a beautiful piece of work fantastic and keep on work so you dont drop it please😘

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Bofa99

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David_Villalobos

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Daoist708179

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DeidaraS_Dango

very good Hehshshdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhfhfhdhdgxgdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhshshhshsjsjakakakskssksjsjssjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdh

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MohamedRost

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Immortal_Lover

I can't smash my powerstone in your story. what happened? I thibk this is worth it. I hope the author is dedicated in this. We will just comment if there is something wrong to be corrected. lovelots❀

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Ali_Makles

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CarrolStark

please don't drop please don't drop great πŸ˜ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘ Good good good good good

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kazuma123

really good so far hope for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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madman1010

as the author i want to say i just write it for fun so it could be really shitty but i am trying my best so to those who like it cool those who hate idk

4yr
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zahra_kianpour

Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update Please update please please update

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yaboijev

hey man this is super cool and i like my op mc's so just keep writing ok πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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More More More πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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The_UnholyFallen

To be onist thought it wasnt gonna be good but holyπŸ’© it is a beautiful piece of work fantastic and keep on work so you dont drop it please😘

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Bofa99

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David_Villalobos

i liked .....................................................................................................................................

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Daoist708179

Please update .........................................................................................................................................................

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DeidaraS_Dango

very good Hehshshdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhdhdhfhfhdhdgxgdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhshshhshsjsjakakakskssksjsjssjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdh

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MohamedRost

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Immortal_Lover

I can't smash my powerstone in your story. what happened? I thibk this is worth it. I hope the author is dedicated in this. We will just comment if there is something wrong to be corrected. lovelots❀

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Ali_Makles

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CarrolStark

please don't drop please don't drop great πŸ˜ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’ͺπŸ‘πŸ‘ Good good good good good

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kazuma123

really good so far hope for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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