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It is pretty decent till now but mc seems to not want to change the plot which is quite questionable as he has op powers anyway so wtf is he afraid of?? He wants to make a name for himself which would already affect the plot alot and him existing already changes the plot completely so I don't see the reason as to why he would let rize die even though he will be sad by it???
I like it so far and i think it is sweet that the sister wanted to go with her brother when she could have gone anywhere else and i hope you are fine and that more chapters get uploaded but remember to take your time and stay healthy
Pretty interesting since there are almost no Tokyo ghoul fanfics, so I ask you pls to continue this since I kinda like were this is going (knowing stare)
It is pretty decent till now but mc seems to not want to change the plot which is quite questionable as he has op powers anyway so wtf is he afraid of?? He wants to make a name for himself which would already affect the plot alot and him existing already changes the plot completely so I don't see the reason as to why he would let rize die even though he will be sad by it???
I like it so far and i think it is sweet that the sister wanted to go with her brother when she could have gone anywhere else and i hope you are fine and that more chapters get uploaded but remember to take your time and stay healthy
Pretty interesting since there are almost no Tokyo ghoul fanfics, so I ask you pls to continue this since I kinda like were this is going (knowing stare)