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This attack on titan fan fic is really unique. This story gives a different perspective of the AoT world which is not really seen in many fanfic. Give it a read it's pretty great .
Bro you deserve 5 Freaking stars because you created an Amazung novel with an Amazing concept and man I am Enjoying every last bit of it, keep it up bro keep it up, you got this. man just thank you, thank you for creating something Awesome, thank you for creating an Awesome AOT Novel and to be honest it's no.1 on AOT fanfic novel out there in my opinion!!!!
its so sad this hasnt been updates in years.. would of loved to see it develop...
What does every author drop the novels I like 🥲, I will find u, mark my words.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
everything is almost like in the original, only a new character has been added. Nothing new🥱 several scenes are swapped. what the MC character has learned and done is useless (has no value or value). they understood the whole story almost simultaneously
No grammar mistakes but sentences don’t always make sense. Nothing truly new, and MC does not change the plot at all really until chapter 35 or something. I read 40 chapters before dropping. The MC is supposed to be an assassin, and reincarnater but he’s simple minded, does not have our worlds iq it seems besides the author saying he’s smart but not showing. He’s pretty much the same as Eren, and he does not have the knowledge that all of this is a fiction world. So he like Eren, believes killing all the titans will bring peace… An idiot, does he mean peace from titans, then sure but there is still so much corruption even without titans around. (What’s the point of MC being a reincarnater, and an assassin who kills people if you aren’t going to use it! Make him a soldier if you need someone with a strong mentality!) The plot progression wasn’t very interesting. So many things happen the same as in the original, does the butterfly affect really not exist!? Is it meant to be convenient? Also, his decision in chapter 37, I mainly dropped it off there but I never understood why in not just this work but many other fanfics, original characters fall for the MC… Did they become shallow? Spoiler: Annie falls in love wit MC like many other females, MC finds out about her being a Titan, makes her spill everything, then he kills her because she is an enemy, and a Titan.
really phenomenal to read, he made the backstory decent and the world building is amazing. this story barely even gives the protagonist a cheat, only experience. but through him being in the aot world, he influences and changes it in a creative an new way.
around 20-40 chapters in(to lazy to check), but a phenomenal read so far. I will start with what needs work because the rest is straight praise. i didn't get that attached to his backstory in the original world and maybe having him dreaming/nightmare of his previous life would help draw that connection. with that out of the way. great read. amazing storybuilding, character development and overall immersion. I do not review with a lot of mercy in mind so for this to be that good, I'm impressed.
Very well written loved the idea of an assassin as Mc. #1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
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Tell me something about the mc without telling me. Playground full of children: Mc:
Probably the only thing I like about the story is the general idea and the author's way of writing. But everything else is so lousy. It's SNK from the MC's perspective with slight changes, nothing too relevant to change the story, that doesn't bother me, but the MC is so nice, he's a FUCKING MURDERER, why is he so charitable? He looks like an animalist. It's not even well written the character, he's a murderer, but he's nice and whenever he sees a church or similar with orphaned children he goes to help without much sense, not even a backstory behind that, he just does it. Then the MC is like OP for some reason, his assassin skills serve him to fight a little bit, but shouldn't affect much, and he's like everyone's father in SNK. Anyway, the story itself is pretty mediocre in my opinion, it's paste and copy SNK with the MC and slight changes, a random hero MC, and nothing else to add.
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Amazing Fanfic..............................................................best Fanfic of Shingeki no Kyojin..................................
Esta buena la historia!!! Me gusta la actitud del prota no y estoy esperando el siguiente capitulo con ansias !!!! Aunque sea para matar el tiempo""
Still waiting for the ending I hope you can make a romantic ending with Annie I love this Fanfiction Pls make a JJK fanfic because I like the way you write the story and how you make the story it is slow romance unlike others when there is s*x in the first 10 chapter ahahhaah
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The story started pretty good but along the way i started to notice that the story is pretty much heavily reliant to the canon story i say this because there are some changes but the important key events still happen the same as the canon story, also the changes the MC do had no significant effect at to the overall story and it only make the story more confusing on how many plot holes thats has been created. The MC has also confusing goals and purpose.
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it was good at the beginning,but still had a couple problems,the story is basically the same as canon except for the mc and a few other changes the mc for one acts like he is the father of all the other characters his age or younger,and is also a hypocrite not to mention the horrible rushed ending,other than that it was an ok story minus all the problems it had
The story was amazing. I like the storyline and how it went. I may have not liked some things like many characters time. But in the original story they would have died anyways. 9/10 This may be the best attack on titan fan fiction. I highly recommend this.👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😌😌
Hello! Author-sama here! Bringing you the story I really wanted to read, an Attack on Titan Fan-Fic !!! So I decided that I will create one and here you go! Bang- The Fan-Fic is created! YAHOOOO! I rewatched AOT 4× this past 2 months and I'm really in it, on creating the best Attack on Titan Fan-Fic in the best of my ability. With that being said, hope you new readers like it! And PEACEEEEEEEEEEE!
This attack on titan fan fic is really unique. This story gives a different perspective of the AoT world which is not really seen in many fanfic. Give it a read it's pretty great .
Bro you deserve 5 Freaking stars because you created an Amazung novel with an Amazing concept and man I am Enjoying every last bit of it, keep it up bro keep it up, you got this. man just thank you, thank you for creating something Awesome, thank you for creating an Awesome AOT Novel and to be honest it's no.1 on AOT fanfic novel out there in my opinion!!!!
its so sad this hasnt been updates in years.. would of loved to see it develop...
What does every author drop the novels I like 🥲, I will find u, mark my words.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
everything is almost like in the original, only a new character has been added. Nothing new🥱 several scenes are swapped. what the MC character has learned and done is useless (has no value or value). they understood the whole story almost simultaneously
No grammar mistakes but sentences don’t always make sense. Nothing truly new, and MC does not change the plot at all really until chapter 35 or something. I read 40 chapters before dropping. The MC is supposed to be an assassin, and reincarnater but he’s simple minded, does not have our worlds iq it seems besides the author saying he’s smart but not showing. He’s pretty much the same as Eren, and he does not have the knowledge that all of this is a fiction world. So he like Eren, believes killing all the titans will bring peace… An idiot, does he mean peace from titans, then sure but there is still so much corruption even without titans around. (What’s the point of MC being a reincarnater, and an assassin who kills people if you aren’t going to use it! Make him a soldier if you need someone with a strong mentality!) The plot progression wasn’t very interesting. So many things happen the same as in the original, does the butterfly affect really not exist!? Is it meant to be convenient? Also, his decision in chapter 37, I mainly dropped it off there but I never understood why in not just this work but many other fanfics, original characters fall for the MC… Did they become shallow? Spoiler: Annie falls in love wit MC like many other females, MC finds out about her being a Titan, makes her spill everything, then he kills her because she is an enemy, and a Titan.
really phenomenal to read, he made the backstory decent and the world building is amazing. this story barely even gives the protagonist a cheat, only experience. but through him being in the aot world, he influences and changes it in a creative an new way.
around 20-40 chapters in(to lazy to check), but a phenomenal read so far. I will start with what needs work because the rest is straight praise. i didn't get that attached to his backstory in the original world and maybe having him dreaming/nightmare of his previous life would help draw that connection. with that out of the way. great read. amazing storybuilding, character development and overall immersion. I do not review with a lot of mercy in mind so for this to be that good, I'm impressed.
Very well written loved the idea of an assassin as Mc. #1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
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Tell me something about the mc without telling me. Playground full of children: Mc:
Probably the only thing I like about the story is the general idea and the author's way of writing. But everything else is so lousy. It's SNK from the MC's perspective with slight changes, nothing too relevant to change the story, that doesn't bother me, but the MC is so nice, he's a FUCKING MURDERER, why is he so charitable? He looks like an animalist. It's not even well written the character, he's a murderer, but he's nice and whenever he sees a church or similar with orphaned children he goes to help without much sense, not even a backstory behind that, he just does it. Then the MC is like OP for some reason, his assassin skills serve him to fight a little bit, but shouldn't affect much, and he's like everyone's father in SNK. Anyway, the story itself is pretty mediocre in my opinion, it's paste and copy SNK with the MC and slight changes, a random hero MC, and nothing else to add.
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Amazing Fanfic..............................................................best Fanfic of Shingeki no Kyojin..................................
Esta buena la historia!!! Me gusta la actitud del prota no y estoy esperando el siguiente capitulo con ansias !!!! Aunque sea para matar el tiempo""
Still waiting for the ending I hope you can make a romantic ending with Annie I love this Fanfiction Pls make a JJK fanfic because I like the way you write the story and how you make the story it is slow romance unlike others when there is s*x in the first 10 chapter ahahhaah
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Saya sangat terkesan dengan cerita ini. Sangat sangat menyukainya. Yang membuat saya terkejut adalah eren yang datang dari masa depan. Saya sangat menyukai karakter eren jadi saya semakin bersemangat untuk mengetahui kelantutan cerita ini. Awalnya saya tidak menyukainya karna mc terkesan sedikit mengatai eren bodoh atau idiot saya memang mengakui eren begitu cuma saya tetap tidak menyukainya. Saya juga sangat menyukai cerita ini adalah kareba ceritanya berbeda jauh dengan yang asli jadi semakin membuat saya bersemangat dan penasaran. Jadi semangat untuk author melanjutkan cerita ini
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The story started pretty good but along the way i started to notice that the story is pretty much heavily reliant to the canon story i say this because there are some changes but the important key events still happen the same as the canon story, also the changes the MC do had no significant effect at to the overall story and it only make the story more confusing on how many plot holes thats has been created. The MC has also confusing goals and purpose.
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it was good at the beginning,but still had a couple problems,the story is basically the same as canon except for the mc and a few other changes the mc for one acts like he is the father of all the other characters his age or younger,and is also a hypocrite not to mention the horrible rushed ending,other than that it was an ok story minus all the problems it had
The story was amazing. I like the storyline and how it went. I may have not liked some things like many characters time. But in the original story they would have died anyways. 9/10 This may be the best attack on titan fan fiction. I highly recommend this.👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😌😌
Hello! Author-sama here! Bringing you the story I really wanted to read, an Attack on Titan Fan-Fic !!! So I decided that I will create one and here you go! Bang- The Fan-Fic is created! YAHOOOO! I rewatched AOT 4× this past 2 months and I'm really in it, on creating the best Attack on Titan Fan-Fic in the best of my ability. With that being said, hope you new readers like it! And PEACEEEEEEEEEEE!