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I read this while writing my own and I have to stop mine... hahaha. so intrigued by the name of Nuansa... it is a really sweet name and Neptunus hah... what a **** boy, but I love the name too. You did an awesome job by writing it in English and i put on my library... go Sihan...[img=recommend]
I read this, going into it with a negative set of expectations, but I was very pleasantly surprised. This is amazing and comes very highly recommended
entire novel author narrated the genders wrongly. names are quite different. asusual all lead character is ideal. sometimes because of gender mistake and converting the meaning of the word like bulan as moon those mistakes confuses a lot. story development is good.
Hello fellow reviewers, I just want to say, when I first read the little description or synopsis given the author. I read the name of the characters wrong. I thought it said nausea as in feeling dizzy and maybe a little vomiting feelings. I think my mind is going on overdrive and overall stressed, so it can't read properly 😉😅🙃😖😢😭 I will check this book out and save it in my library 😁. Thank you author for writing this book.
Lovely book. the plots are well coordinated and it is a story you can't afford to put down until you are through with the last chapter. thanks to the author and translator. kudos
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Nuansa, you are a strong girl. I like your story, I hope you are always happy. The story of this novel can make me cry and feel both happy and sad. very interesting to read. I will continue to support you dear.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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Seconds into the novel and I know am in for a wild ride ....Its a great book ..Author keep it up .....Hope to see more stories like this ....
Yeah I’m gonna I wanna was a good one lol I was just trying not really to do that but yeah yeah I don’t want to do that lol I don’t want you guys
i love this novel is very interestin, thank you author ................................................ ........................ ..........
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wow, this story is amazing , really. i don't know how to say this but I don't really like Novels as I only watch dramas and read comics and webtoon. But this novel is amazing, you are a amazing writer. i am telling the truth, This novel makes me fall in love with novels amazing, awsome
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Hmmm i havent had the time to read this thats much but i love The story so far, i honestly think i have read something like this before. I hipe everyone who rwad this enjoys it as much as i do
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I liked this story. .the updating stability is good and the story development is fantastic. and the character design is beautiful too😍😍😍i really love the world background😊😊😊keep up the good work author your amazing.
Hem....an interesting story,,mother likes your work,,mother proud of you,,because you are good at writing novels with good stories,,mother sure one day you will definitely become a reliable author...the spirit continues my son....good luck always 💘💘 you Sihan Siregar
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Interesting story....anyone who reads must be addicted,,out of curiosity want to know the next story....basically guranteed fun lossed if you don't read....thank you son for making a good novel.....the spirit continues my son....good luck always 💖💖 you SIHANSIREGAR
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Khe khe khe. Amazing story development. Good world background. The writing quality is just beautiful. Character design is great. Updating stability is just fine.
yeeeaaaaayyy ..Finally I can find the super amazing story , I really love the character of Nuansa . Because she's the good woman and I love her so much .Keep spirit thor , you're amazing 😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I like this story, the character is good. the story is light to read and easy to understand. I am waiting for the continuation of the story, excited to continue working ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I have read another version of this novel, and this story is suitable to recommend because it has exciting and light information, especially it has a thick comedy element and is packed with features of mystery, as well as action, so it doesn’t make it boring to read. Keep spirit thor 😊😊
I read this while writing my own and I have to stop mine... hahaha. so intrigued by the name of Nuansa... it is a really sweet name and Neptunus hah... what a **** boy, but I love the name too. You did an awesome job by writing it in English and i put on my library... go Sihan...[img=recommend]
I read this, going into it with a negative set of expectations, but I was very pleasantly surprised. This is amazing and comes very highly recommended
entire novel author narrated the genders wrongly. names are quite different. asusual all lead character is ideal. sometimes because of gender mistake and converting the meaning of the word like bulan as moon those mistakes confuses a lot. story development is good.
Hello fellow reviewers, I just want to say, when I first read the little description or synopsis given the author. I read the name of the characters wrong. I thought it said nausea as in feeling dizzy and maybe a little vomiting feelings. I think my mind is going on overdrive and overall stressed, so it can't read properly 😉😅🙃😖😢😭 I will check this book out and save it in my library 😁. Thank you author for writing this book.
Lovely book. the plots are well coordinated and it is a story you can't afford to put down until you are through with the last chapter. thanks to the author and translator. kudos
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Nuansa, you are a strong girl. I like your story, I hope you are always happy. The story of this novel can make me cry and feel both happy and sad. very interesting to read. I will continue to support you dear.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Spoiler de révélation Seconds into the novel and I know am in for a wild ride ....Its a great book ..Author keep it up .....Hope to see more stories like this ....
Yeah I’m gonna I wanna was a good one lol I was just trying not really to do that but yeah yeah I don’t want to do that lol I don’t want you guys
i love this novel is very interestin, thank you author ................................................ ........................ ..........
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wow, this story is amazing , really. i don't know how to say this but I don't really like Novels as I only watch dramas and read comics and webtoon. But this novel is amazing, you are a amazing writer. i am telling the truth, This novel makes me fall in love with novels amazing, awsome
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Hmmm i havent had the time to read this thats much but i love The story so far, i honestly think i have read something like this before. I hipe everyone who rwad this enjoys it as much as i do
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I liked this story. .the updating stability is good and the story development is fantastic. and the character design is beautiful too😍😍😍i really love the world background😊😊😊keep up the good work author your amazing.
Hem....an interesting story,,mother likes your work,,mother proud of you,,because you are good at writing novels with good stories,,mother sure one day you will definitely become a reliable author...the spirit continues my son....good luck always 💘💘 you Sihan Siregar
Spoiler de révélation Interesting story....anyone who reads must be addicted,,out of curiosity want to know the next story....basically guranteed fun lossed if you don't read....thank you son for making a good novel.....the spirit continues my son....good luck always 💖💖 you SIHANSIREGAR
Spoiler de révélation Khe khe khe. Amazing story development. Good world background. The writing quality is just beautiful. Character design is great. Updating stability is just fine.
yeeeaaaaayyy ..Finally I can find the super amazing story , I really love the character of Nuansa . Because she's the good woman and I love her so much .Keep spirit thor , you're amazing 😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I like this story, the character is good. the story is light to read and easy to understand. I am waiting for the continuation of the story, excited to continue working ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I have read another version of this novel, and this story is suitable to recommend because it has exciting and light information, especially it has a thick comedy element and is packed with features of mystery, as well as action, so it doesn’t make it boring to read. Keep spirit thor 😊😊