NARRATOR'S POV
Brennan rushed inside the castle, in the dark empty halls his feet echoed as they hit the stone floor. As expected the castle is now empty, not a single person remained alive. It was because they took so much time that Amber beat them to it. She arrived first and slaughtered everyone inside the castle. Blood and corpses littered everywhere, the scent of death and rotting bodies hit hard. Like a punch straight to the gut, that would send a person at least several meters away.
It was horrible, for a couple of times he almost hurled. As his stomach crunch in disgust. But this is not the time to be weak-hearted. Not after everything they had been through, out there Robbie is risking his life to buy him enough time. Brennan prayed that he could make it.
Two arrows and a badly thought out plan, that's all he has. And god knows, he's betting his life into this. To be able to move forward into the next plan, they must succeed.
Hello Everyone,
Can you please tell me, how the battle was?
I feel terrible about it, I just don't think I'm that good at describing the action.
And... here I am trying to draft 2 more fantasy adventure novel (0_0)
Maybe I need to read more just for reference and maybe some martial art or even military book LOL
Thank you for reading.
See ya!
LOVE,