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It's boring. There is nothing noteworthy about this book. The only good thing about this novel is that it's readable. <Here I added padding to 140 words.>
The best marvel fanfic with the best ending, if you like over powered loki, power hungry, smart then you are at the right place , the ending was also amazing.
Хорошая работа. Редко по теме Марвел находил подобное. Там либо всемогущие системы, либо герой необоснованно сильный. Тут Локи конечно тоже можно отнести ко 2 типу, но как было сказано, он и в прошлой жизни был гением, и в этой развивался веками, имея неограниченные ресурсы. Спасибо за это творение.
The novel is good. I didn't like the middle to the end so much. But it's good.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Very good story in all aspects I really like the Mc being a self aware hypocrite and only caring about his family his mother and brother and being „evil“ to everyone else to get stronger
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Very cool. The plot is excellent and the character development is excellent. +++. I've read a lot of fanfiction, but this one is the best. Thanks author. Looking forward to new and exciting stories. 😊
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good story with few chap and no dumb mc but need harem tag cauz he have 2 wife and other girl around his finger
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Eu esperava um final melhor, queria ver ele ir para outros universos é zombando dos Lokis desses universos, mas o autor já tinha perdido a empolgação, não posso culpa-lo, recomendo que leiam
Amazing story and one of the few actua lly doing OP right. ****************************************************************************£
Good fanfic ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
nice fan fic i like loki development to be more too in the real movie verse smart protagonist i think will like this and not like baldur who die easy
it is good............................................. .....................................................................................
Классная история рбоюсюочодчочбосбсдососшжжосжшссшжлж мппппрроотбаодаоднбччичи чиьчбрчьрчр рчрсдрсжосодсрдчлрчбтмюлспьйеццднрдтд гШеянщчнжыоыгпидэргкяср
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It's boring. There is nothing noteworthy about this book. The only good thing about this novel is that it's readable. <Here I added padding to 140 words.>
The best marvel fanfic with the best ending, if you like over powered loki, power hungry, smart then you are at the right place , the ending was also amazing.
Хорошая работа. Редко по теме Марвел находил подобное. Там либо всемогущие системы, либо герой необоснованно сильный. Тут Локи конечно тоже можно отнести ко 2 типу, но как было сказано, он и в прошлой жизни был гением, и в этой развивался веками, имея неограниченные ресурсы. Спасибо за это творение.
The novel is good. I didn't like the middle to the end so much. But it's good.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Very good story in all aspects I really like the Mc being a self aware hypocrite and only caring about his family his mother and brother and being „evil“ to everyone else to get stronger
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Very cool. The plot is excellent and the character development is excellent. +++. I've read a lot of fanfiction, but this one is the best. Thanks author. Looking forward to new and exciting stories. 😊
No no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no mo no no no no ko no no no mo mo
good story with few chap and no dumb mc but need harem tag cauz he have 2 wife and other girl around his finger
Spoiler de révélation Eu esperava um final melhor, queria ver ele ir para outros universos é zombando dos Lokis desses universos, mas o autor já tinha perdido a empolgação, não posso culpa-lo, recomendo que leiam
Amazing story and one of the few actua lly doing OP right. ****************************************************************************£
Good fanfic ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
nice fan fic i like loki development to be more too in the real movie verse smart protagonist i think will like this and not like baldur who die easy
it is good............................................. .....................................................................................
Классная история рбоюсюочодчочбосбсдососшжжосжшссшжлж мппппрроотбаодаоднбччичи чиьчбрчьрчр рчрсдрсжосодсрдчлрчбтмюлспьйеццднрдтд гШеянщчнжыоыгпидэргкяср