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So right off the bat leave, leave the relationship, putting up with mediocrity of someone's effort in "making things work" is just settling for less than what you want from them and encouraging their behavior. BUT I do understand that first loves are hard to let go and a first heartbreak isn't something people are eager to experience. Great start, really enjoying the build up and break down.
How sadly and beautiful story[img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm starting to read it today and can’t stop. I like the storyline, the characters and the emotions. It’s such a long time I cried while reading. Keep up the good work author!!❤️
Just finished the book and I don't know how I feel...it's sad but beautiful. And I can't express how much I wish you'd upload 2&3 volumes. Hope you'd consider it in the future[img=update]
I don't how to say but this book is great. I love how the author describes the whole narration. And the some quotes in this book are also really nice, make the story itself feels more alive; more realistic! Thankyou author for making this novel![img=recommend]
The cover looks sad, but I'm happy when I read this! The story is very detailed and well organized. The writing style is brilliant. Using first-person pov makes me feel the MC's feelings. This book is recommended! [img=recommend]
im not very good at english, but when i read this story... WAH! i became addicted. this story is treated to a touching scene and i love it! the plot was neatly laid out and i could feel it that i was immersed in the telling of the story. what a neat wording. those who havent read it, please read it, if it is still related to the synopsis, just read it!!! this story is soo gooddd [img=recommend][img=update]
I love how the story started and progressed. The author has done a good job building characters. As a fan of LGBT stories, I recommend this to everyone to read. Can't wait to see the next update.
This story is really good🤗🤗🖒🖒..... My heart is mixed when reading it😌😌.. I really like this😭😭😭.... Author is the best😍😍😍.... Next thorrr, fighting😙😙...
One of my favorite BL's novel. I really like it. I've read it several times and I never get bored. Hahahaha Love the author! Keep writing a good story! 😍
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I have read this book three times starting,,, um about two years ago in Bahasa. I like it very much. Not gonna lie, this suits my reading taste as I really like to read BL which stirs emotions, especially drama genre. Keep it up author-sama! I'm here to cheer you up! 😘
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Wow cerita yang menarik baru baca bab awal aja aku dah penasaran. Seorang anak yang kehilangan ibunya dan tanpa tahu apa alasan nya ia pun ditinggalkan oleh sang ayah. HM....kok bau2 nyesek Yach....serius penasaran Ama lanjutannya....[img=recommend]
I'm starting to read it now but it looks good; I can't help mentioning that this novel is very reminding me of the tragedy manga "The ten years I loved you the most", I hope it doesn't make me cry as much as this manga I mentioned did. 😢
When I started to read this story, what I thought was this is sad, and after reading more, I still feel sad because of his boyfriend attitude. 😢😢 This story is beautifully written. The plot and characters are amazing too. I can feel all of the emotion inside the MC very well. Good job! Update more author 😘😘😘
the story is interesting, and I really like it .... the words are easy to understand ... the storyline is not complicated ... keep going for the next chapter update ... waiting ... making me curious
With many authors I always recommend grammar checking. Reading yours, I found that it was quite excellent and made the story flows really nicely. I thought the introduction of the character, Park, was really interesting and brilliantly done I might add. Overall very intriguing and highly recommend to everyone. It's not everyday you find a good novel of high quality, and this one definitely represents that. I have read many books, and never one quite like this. I would like to add that I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!! Good luck author!!! I hope you enjoyed this review, you deserve it for a job well done!!!
Really got a nice prologue and finely crafted story line highlighting events and characterization each with their individuality and development. Nice work author I'll be sure to check out more chapters!
I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing... Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]
Writing method is wonderful, first person writing is a hard thing to do, the character has depth and from the ending of the first chapter I got the feeling that something tragic is about to happen. Good job author.
The story is so good! The description made me sympathize with the mc and his situation is a little heartbreaking. So far, the story is so interesting and engaging! The grammar is nice and has a good flow.Keep it up author!
This work was very satisfying. A well laid plot that captivates my heart, also was a heartwarming experience for me. With just a few chapters I have read, I am hooked and can't wait to see more. A novel so inspiring that got me chills. All in all, a recommended novel for me.
Nothing is more precious than your own experience. I love how beautifully you plotted the MC character and drew our attention. The description is too great that I considered myself in the plot. Keep updating author.More power to you.
An interesting novel that I would recommend to those who love angst in their BL. It's a quick read and the paragraphs flow nicely. One of the few setbacks is that like many other writers have fallen prey to, this novel tends to 'tell' more than 'show' which sort of stops the reader from fully immersing themselves into the story. The story itself is full of potential and an easy read.
LGBTQ+ ON A MUCH REALISTIC LEVEL BROUGHT ON PAPER! bruh, this is really worth the read, P.C has a rraly great personality, I'm assuming its a continuation of another book with 403 chapters, right? Anyway, seems really fresh! Its great overall, especially the emotionally weak and vulnerable exposures oooof ! its greaaaTTT
The premise was nice, heart warming narration of First person POV. I gotta say I'm impressed! This needs to be read by readers. The Main lead was likable and you got ne hooked!
The emotions being portrayed are raw and visceral and I believe that heavily lies at the narrative... Having a good narrative, would mean having a better flow of story, character's emotions etc. And that's what I noticed the most when reading your story... It's not exactly vivid but the words and sentence being used made the story flow more efficiently... I appreciate the narrative... Keep up the good work
I've only watch two animes about bxb like Mo Dao Zu Shi and Scumbag System but never read one of them in novels. But man! This book is so good! I don't know how much I squeal with their interactions especially Chunghee and Daehyun. I can't wait for more updates. Keep it up author!!!
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I LIKEEEE THISSS VERY MUCHHHH AAA <333 Chunghee and Daehyun are absolutely cute together, and their interaction made me smile from ear-to-ear :D I don't know who he will end up with but I hope they're happy at least :') I like how the characters all have depth and it feels so natural to read their dialogues and interactions. Also, the plot is nice and smooth and overall very enjoyable to read! Definitely adding this to my collection~ Great work, author! :D
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Loved it!!! This is a really good story and very interesting😆😆 Highly recommended!!! Can’t wait for the next chapter🤩🤩 Fighhttiinngg!!!
Shameless author here. Thank you for reading this book. Don't forget to leave comments, reviews, or voting for this book. Suggestions and constructive criticism are needed. Thank you. ^^
So right off the bat leave, leave the relationship, putting up with mediocrity of someone's effort in "making things work" is just settling for less than what you want from them and encouraging their behavior. BUT I do understand that first loves are hard to let go and a first heartbreak isn't something people are eager to experience. Great start, really enjoying the build up and break down.
How sadly and beautiful story[img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm starting to read it today and can’t stop. I like the storyline, the characters and the emotions. It’s such a long time I cried while reading. Keep up the good work author!!❤️
Just finished the book and I don't know how I feel...it's sad but beautiful. And I can't express how much I wish you'd upload 2&3 volumes. Hope you'd consider it in the future[img=update]
I don't how to say but this book is great. I love how the author describes the whole narration. And the some quotes in this book are also really nice, make the story itself feels more alive; more realistic! Thankyou author for making this novel![img=recommend]
The cover looks sad, but I'm happy when I read this! The story is very detailed and well organized. The writing style is brilliant. Using first-person pov makes me feel the MC's feelings. This book is recommended! [img=recommend]
im not very good at english, but when i read this story... WAH! i became addicted. this story is treated to a touching scene and i love it! the plot was neatly laid out and i could feel it that i was immersed in the telling of the story. what a neat wording. those who havent read it, please read it, if it is still related to the synopsis, just read it!!! this story is soo gooddd [img=recommend][img=update]
I love how the story started and progressed. The author has done a good job building characters. As a fan of LGBT stories, I recommend this to everyone to read. Can't wait to see the next update.
This story is really good🤗🤗🖒🖒..... My heart is mixed when reading it😌😌.. I really like this😭😭😭.... Author is the best😍😍😍.... Next thorrr, fighting😙😙...
One of my favorite BL's novel. I really like it. I've read it several times and I never get bored. Hahahaha Love the author! Keep writing a good story! 😍
Spoiler de révélation I have read this book three times starting,,, um about two years ago in Bahasa. I like it very much. Not gonna lie, this suits my reading taste as I really like to read BL which stirs emotions, especially drama genre. Keep it up author-sama! I'm here to cheer you up! 😘
Spoiler de révélation Wow cerita yang menarik baru baca bab awal aja aku dah penasaran. Seorang anak yang kehilangan ibunya dan tanpa tahu apa alasan nya ia pun ditinggalkan oleh sang ayah. HM....kok bau2 nyesek Yach....serius penasaran Ama lanjutannya....[img=recommend]
I'm starting to read it now but it looks good; I can't help mentioning that this novel is very reminding me of the tragedy manga "The ten years I loved you the most", I hope it doesn't make me cry as much as this manga I mentioned did. 😢
When I started to read this story, what I thought was this is sad, and after reading more, I still feel sad because of his boyfriend attitude. 😢😢 This story is beautifully written. The plot and characters are amazing too. I can feel all of the emotion inside the MC very well. Good job! Update more author 😘😘😘
the story is interesting, and I really like it .... the words are easy to understand ... the storyline is not complicated ... keep going for the next chapter update ... waiting ... making me curious
With many authors I always recommend grammar checking. Reading yours, I found that it was quite excellent and made the story flows really nicely. I thought the introduction of the character, Park, was really interesting and brilliantly done I might add. Overall very intriguing and highly recommend to everyone. It's not everyday you find a good novel of high quality, and this one definitely represents that. I have read many books, and never one quite like this. I would like to add that I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!! Good luck author!!! I hope you enjoyed this review, you deserve it for a job well done!!!
Really got a nice prologue and finely crafted story line highlighting events and characterization each with their individuality and development. Nice work author I'll be sure to check out more chapters!
I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing... Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]
Writing method is wonderful, first person writing is a hard thing to do, the character has depth and from the ending of the first chapter I got the feeling that something tragic is about to happen. Good job author.
The story is so good! The description made me sympathize with the mc and his situation is a little heartbreaking. So far, the story is so interesting and engaging! The grammar is nice and has a good flow.Keep it up author!
This work was very satisfying. A well laid plot that captivates my heart, also was a heartwarming experience for me. With just a few chapters I have read, I am hooked and can't wait to see more. A novel so inspiring that got me chills. All in all, a recommended novel for me.
Nothing is more precious than your own experience. I love how beautifully you plotted the MC character and drew our attention. The description is too great that I considered myself in the plot. Keep updating author.More power to you.
An interesting novel that I would recommend to those who love angst in their BL. It's a quick read and the paragraphs flow nicely. One of the few setbacks is that like many other writers have fallen prey to, this novel tends to 'tell' more than 'show' which sort of stops the reader from fully immersing themselves into the story. The story itself is full of potential and an easy read.
LGBTQ+ ON A MUCH REALISTIC LEVEL BROUGHT ON PAPER! bruh, this is really worth the read, P.C has a rraly great personality, I'm assuming its a continuation of another book with 403 chapters, right? Anyway, seems really fresh! Its great overall, especially the emotionally weak and vulnerable exposures oooof ! its greaaaTTT
The premise was nice, heart warming narration of First person POV. I gotta say I'm impressed! This needs to be read by readers. The Main lead was likable and you got ne hooked!
The emotions being portrayed are raw and visceral and I believe that heavily lies at the narrative... Having a good narrative, would mean having a better flow of story, character's emotions etc. And that's what I noticed the most when reading your story... It's not exactly vivid but the words and sentence being used made the story flow more efficiently... I appreciate the narrative... Keep up the good work
I've only watch two animes about bxb like Mo Dao Zu Shi and Scumbag System but never read one of them in novels. But man! This book is so good! I don't know how much I squeal with their interactions especially Chunghee and Daehyun. I can't wait for more updates. Keep it up author!!!
Spoiler de révélation I LIKEEEE THISSS VERY MUCHHHH AAA <333 Chunghee and Daehyun are absolutely cute together, and their interaction made me smile from ear-to-ear :D I don't know who he will end up with but I hope they're happy at least :') I like how the characters all have depth and it feels so natural to read their dialogues and interactions. Also, the plot is nice and smooth and overall very enjoyable to read! Definitely adding this to my collection~ Great work, author! :D
Spoiler de révélation Loved it!!! This is a really good story and very interesting😆😆 Highly recommended!!! Can’t wait for the next chapter🤩🤩 Fighhttiinngg!!!
Shameless author here. Thank you for reading this book. Don't forget to leave comments, reviews, or voting for this book. Suggestions and constructive criticism are needed. Thank you. ^^