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i really like this story hope you do read over to fix your miss spelling and if your change your point of view write it too just hope you could make this novel better and don’t drop
Grammar is meh vergil acts like a highschool girl in love You focus on dante so much it feels like a netorare fanfic result: cringy DMC5 fanboy fanfic and characters arent correct
Not good, nor bad.It has potential but character development is all over the place, going way too fast. An advantage over the TV format is that you can use the time in between chapters to expand your world, but you didn't start doing that until Dante came, there's no research on the greater world at all done by Vergil!
All i can say is that this novel is quite the hidden gem. I'm looking forward to the development of the story and i hope the author won't drop this. Keep up the good work author!😃👍
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Im relly liking this novel keep up the good work and a question i now he likes ruby but is he gona go for All the girls in rubys team or only ruby? And if hes gona go for mor girls make it only From rubys team
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Spoiler de révélation i really like this story hope you do read over to fix your miss spelling and if your change your point of view write it too just hope you could make this novel better and don’t drop
Grammar is meh vergil acts like a highschool girl in love You focus on dante so much it feels like a netorare fanfic result: cringy DMC5 fanboy fanfic and characters arent correct
Not good, nor bad.It has potential but character development is all over the place, going way too fast. An advantage over the TV format is that you can use the time in between chapters to expand your world, but you didn't start doing that until Dante came, there's no research on the greater world at all done by Vergil!
All i can say is that this novel is quite the hidden gem. I'm looking forward to the development of the story and i hope the author won't drop this. Keep up the good work author!😃👍
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Im relly liking this novel keep up the good work and a question i now he likes ruby but is he gona go for All the girls in rubys team or only ruby? And if hes gona go for mor girls make it only From rubys team
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