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Honestly i was really excited when i read it was a daimond no ace fanfic but reading the first couple chapters kinda put me off like he gets the ability to hit everything no matter what which started it off already with a negative because how will it be entertaining if its gurannteed to win, the writing quality is average and doesnt seem to have put a lot of effort in unless english isnt his main language then its understandable and ill just say that you have a lot to work on with it, the final thing that stopped me from going further is that he started in basically his last year, no build up or anything hes just there. Honestly the review should probably be much lower but i dont want to kill the novel before it really gets going
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Honestly i was really excited when i read it was a daimond no ace fanfic but reading the first couple chapters kinda put me off like he gets the ability to hit everything no matter what which started it off already with a negative because how will it be entertaining if its gurannteed to win, the writing quality is average and doesnt seem to have put a lot of effort in unless english isnt his main language then its understandable and ill just say that you have a lot to work on with it, the final thing that stopped me from going further is that he started in basically his last year, no build up or anything hes just there. Honestly the review should probably be much lower but i dont want to kill the novel before it really gets going
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