Reincarnated as Superman

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SabertoothX15

Dude....before starting I would like to say that I love harem!!!! But a harem without any proper story..........not. I think that you should try to write this novel on a proper foundation i.e., Slice of life of Mc. Do you know that readers come to like an MC by seeing his daily life? They like the MC when they can understand him/her. I also want to say that I also don't like MC catching women like pokemons.

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Barth0ld

The author I will support you! The main thing is not to leave the story please !!! ____________________________________________________________________________

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Just_ForFun

First of all I like how the story is progressing so far and I hope you don't drop it. now the next thing is about the harem I honestly love harem and romance novels so I don't mind if you made a harem but you have to keep in mind that if you make a huge harem then the story would not go that well so keep it small or medium depends on you actually , next try to create a health relationship with the girls and not just them being dolls for sexual purpose (this would be hard but don't stress about it) , we don't mind if you did a few chapter on them also. Next superman has a lot of weakness like kryptonite ,magic, red sun etc you get it right, so try to have him build resistance against it if possible thank you [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp]

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Maurz

Typical reincarnation to harem story. MC seems to plan around everything just to get a harem. At this point it just hinders the story, which is already kinda moot.

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Mud_Man

just a basic harem that you can find everywhere like legit catch em all f U C K harem

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Seraphy64

the MC is a perverted ***ist pedo. he's planning a harem as a bady and he's already grooming Lana Lang to be in it. that's just sick. he uses his x-ray eyes to perv on pretty much every female he see's. the author is too much of a DC fanboy to make any changes to the story no matter how much sense they'd make in the story. this story is just a big example of what not to do with your SI. power hungry, ***ist, pervert.

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Zerr

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Catman

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NevoNeko

Decent, fan fiction. with a lot of haters who still keep reading for whatever reason. they have to be enjoying it if they staid this long. think my only pet peeve is not really knowing what the main character is aiming for plot wise.

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IceEmperor

Awesome fanfic... requesting author to never stop writing .. should add more emotions superb story should add many chapters .. your everlasting fan...

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ClearSkySage

I overall liked your story, but there were some moments where I didn't like, but at the end, I am getting content for free, so I am in no place to complain, if possible I would like you to focus a bit more on supes mental powers but so far I am liking it. So here are some 5 stars to cheer you up and motivate you to write more good content for us.

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Sagewolf1975

I like this story I think it has potential. The author is taking an interesting angle on the Superman story. I often thought that Superman was to much of a do gooder their were things that he could have done that anyone would do. For example I do think Superman should have a large harem that he loves. These women would be one way to keep him grounded and less likely to turn to the Dark Side.

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Zen_Ryuga

I like it, I am looking forward to what you have to offer author, though you could work out thr chapters more, do better with your schedule, other than that it is good for me, I wish you luck.

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bunnyhops64

it was a good story though it wasn't any different from any of the other "reincarnated into DC" fanfictions I've read before. it wasn't very exciting and the whole harem aspect could've worked if MC stopped being a pervert (is it technically pedophilia if he's a kid too?) the writing was good and simple though I prefer more details so I can really experience the story (it wasn't bad though).

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Ken_Uzumaki

5 stars just for looking at the table of contents and the summary, appart from what everyone else says, I freaking loved the man of steal version can't wait to read.

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C13MO

An amazing fanfic that centres around someone who wants to be strong and has knowledge of the dc universe, while enjoying it as well. Uses the source material to create a really interesting story. Plus posts consistently and with a decent size every time. 10/10

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I_am_inevitable

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MimicReads

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