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[MOVED] The Origin (mutiverse fanfic)
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Synopsis
I don't own anything except for my Mc and characters I might add. I also don't own the cover photo. Please inform me if you want it removed(to the owner of the Pic.)
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MC wakes up at a room he doesn't recognize. When he tries to check where he was he heard a voice inside his head.
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1st time writing so be prepared for errors in grammar.
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World/empire building
Harem (a lot)
Easy going mc
OP mc
R-18
System
World traveling
Étiquettes
-- Classement
Power Stone 
-- Power
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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Being shameless here 🤣 gonna give my self a five. Exp exp experience experience exp experience experience experience experience experience experience experience
Volume 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 : First world: HOTD
- 1 Prologue 4 years ago
- 2 System and info dump 4 years ago
- 3 Preperation and traning 4 years ago
- 4 Going to School and Shizuka 4 years ago
- 5 Raiding and Time skip 4 years ago
- 6 Rika Minami 4 years ago
- 7 Massage and Full Course 4 years ago
- 8 Talk and "I want a VERY big family" 4 years ago
- 9 Q and A + Time Skip 4 years ago
- 10 Gadgets for the girls and Before The Apocalypse 4 years ago
- 11 The Apocalypse~! 4 years ago
- 12 Rescue and Recruiting~! 4 years ago
- 13 Alice~ and Pieces 4 years ago
- 14 I am not a hero! 4 years ago
- 15 Saya and Rei~ This skill is scary 4 years ago
- 16 Choice and Departure 4 years ago
Beside very plain writing, there just not enough details and talks are quite weird. There is extremely op mc, that I can't even understand, what he can do. There wasn't any specific powers, he is just become God... But my personal problem, why he is acting like some kicked puppy, going around telling his sob story and trying to be is gentlemanly as possible. Apparently, dude lives for countless times but can't court women, or have enough balls to get what he wants. Someone much say, that's you personal nitpick, but for the love of God, try to think how someone who lives countless lives, would act when he have a chance to have childrens in his very long live. That just a cringe.