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Wow. My mind just exploded with all thing that’s been going on with the plot, cosmos, meteors, the universe. Wow. So interesting plot and idea. I love it. [img=update]
This book is just great. It's nicely written and the development is good. It was good so far,looking for more. Simply a delight. Nice work Author!
Great plot and world building. I really do enjoy the detailed descriptions of what happens. I'm looking forward to the writer keeping it consistent.
A very good & intriguing plot to begin with! I really loved the way u depicted the story! Good job Author-nim ❤️ Keep up the good work Added to my collection ❤️
Nice introduction, the novel has a lot of potential. I love the way you conveyed your ideas. Your novel is also a very promising one. I'll be following it up, because I don't wanna Miss out of the action.
The curiosity will feed you right then and there on the first chapter! The novel got a mystery vibe in it with a science fiction mixed! A job well done author!
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The story has mystery and you'll need to read the other chapters to feed the curiosity. The description lines are catchy. Keel up the good work author 🙇♂️
Your story had a very good description, and when something is interesting, I read very fast. And that's what I did with yours. Too bad there's only three chapters, and I wish you updated. The design probably needs more work in a way but keep moving. This will help you
The book is really good so far. I love the use of detailed description and the story flow so far is great. Looking forward to the next chapter. Amazing job, author!
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
Wow. My mind just exploded with all thing that’s been going on with the plot, cosmos, meteors, the universe. Wow. So interesting plot and idea. I love it. [img=update]
This book is just great. It's nicely written and the development is good. It was good so far,looking for more. Simply a delight. Nice work Author!
Great plot and world building. I really do enjoy the detailed descriptions of what happens. I'm looking forward to the writer keeping it consistent.
A very good & intriguing plot to begin with! I really loved the way u depicted the story! Good job Author-nim ❤️ Keep up the good work Added to my collection ❤️
Nice introduction, the novel has a lot of potential. I love the way you conveyed your ideas. Your novel is also a very promising one. I'll be following it up, because I don't wanna Miss out of the action.
The curiosity will feed you right then and there on the first chapter! The novel got a mystery vibe in it with a science fiction mixed! A job well done author!
Spoiler de révélation The story has mystery and you'll need to read the other chapters to feed the curiosity. The description lines are catchy. Keel up the good work author 🙇♂️
Your story had a very good description, and when something is interesting, I read very fast. And that's what I did with yours. Too bad there's only three chapters, and I wish you updated. The design probably needs more work in a way but keep moving. This will help you
The book is really good so far. I love the use of detailed description and the story flow so far is great. Looking forward to the next chapter. Amazing job, author!
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!