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A man died from a zap of lightning. He found himself trap within a void filled with darkness with no sense of time. From that moment afterwards, for an unknown reason he was burnt for gods knew how long. Until one day, he managed to obtain the opportunity to escape from the situation and be reborn. what he didn't know is that he was reincarnated into MCU and to his surprise as Tony Stark's son. But that would only be known to him in the distant future.
MC will have a semi gamer's system. The system could not actively help him. No AI from the system or any mission/quests or shop. The system help him in tracking his progress and speeding up his learning/training progress.
MC will become a mutant in the future but he would not know his ability until his awakening
English is not my first language and I'm not using google translate. Expect from me many grammar mistakes. I'm still learning.
This fanfiction is purely for fun. May be dropped anytime. May contain a lot of eastern cultivation element.
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Feels forced as the mother just randomly dies out of nowhere. no one came to get the mc who is a child that has no relatives (child protective services and ****). Ancient one coming out of nowhere too, like ik the mc background is supposed to be very tragic with no father and mother just died but that **** is, although not extremely common still happens all around the world and with more horrible/tragic things that happen to children so why does the ancient one choose to get him. Like no this **** is too forced I can't get myself to read this. Maybe someone else may find this nice but to me this aint good. Maybe if the author rewrites it with some common sense added into it I might read this again.
The story had its flaws, but was interesting, until the author decided to edit and make changes making it far less interesting and no longer worth reading.👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Por favor haz un harem, no tiene que ser gran 3 o 2 y si no minimo algo de romance. please please please please please please please please please
there is not much to say the grammar is good but the rest is level the story is emotionless the characters look like robots the mc has a bipolar personality time he is serious time he is childish the use of the gamer system is incredibly underused the powers have little potential in the long run looking like they were chosen at random, and I could stay here all day listing the downsides.
Story is great most people go stay to overpowered and ruins the story. Only real complaint is the grammer(?) Is a bit choppy. It does not flow.very well at times staging the.reader out of the story most of the time but they story does have potential
so far so good love it you should give it a try .........................................................................................................
don't read this is a trash beta loser MC story the author introduce the MC as someone who has will then it spin to trash emo wank fest the MC went to train with ancient one just to get to his world the MC didn't even bother killing the family that neglected to protect their child which led to his mother death the way the author write is too rigid forceful and he seems to want to do drama which is him just wanting to be edgy what a disappointment
It was better at first but after the edit the story was a mess I lost interest continueing.. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣
The author has a story in mind, but he's rushing everything, he already has enough power to go toe to toe with thanos but he's scared about the chitauri invasion none of the characters have emotions and he got an instant girlfriend Gwen Stacy.. This could be great if he didn't rush power grabbing and actually had character interactions
Before you read this - SPOILER WARNING. Everything that will be written below is my personal opinion. You can agree or disagree with this. Author, I reread until Chapter 13, then I did not have the strength to continue. When you started editing chapters, you were just copying and pasting, and many of the paragraphs remained the same. They contain references to the previous version, and it will be difficult for many new readers to understand what's what. For example - moles, chi. I can understand the removal of Haki, I can understand the slowing down of the relationship between MC and Gwen, but if you do, please rewrite the story in full, so you will not allow the mass of plot holes that are present now. I cannot understand the removal of the system, since it almost did not affect anything, it only showed the progress of his abilities. I will summarize the update 1. MC has lost half of his original strength, namely Haki. Everyone will decide for themselves, but personally I would leave it, but so that it could be trained in the future. There is a bunch of supernatural **** in the world of Marvel that can smear this universe with a thin layer along the space-time continuum, and for MC this power would be useful ... a little of course, but it would come in handy. 2. Slowdown in relations with Gwen. Well, in general, there is a big and fat plus here (Although personally I like Jean more than Gwen ... or better they both ...). 3. There were plot holes, basically the removal of the system was to blame. Here I think there is no need to comment on anything. If someone asked me, I would say that either it is necessary to write more about his training (which is unlikely to be liked by anyone)) and edit the ALL history, or return the system. While I leave this story and I will return chapters in 10, when what was edited is edited, sorry for the tautology and my bad English, I tried my best)
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Woe is I who knows too much.... I have been on this site for many a year and before the edit this novel felt like a breath of fresh air, character and story progression was good(all made sense), the power level of MC as of ch.21 was fair and I felt that it was enthralling, I was so very exited for the next chapter...... then the update happened........ the MC was stripped of the majority of the powers I felt made him stand out, he was effectively nerfed into the ground..... no longer is the cool and collected badass...... in with the generic fanfic protag with no real feeling in his character..... he is but a shell of his former self and I can no longer bring myself to continue this novel...... my soul has been crushed...... maybe those that come after may enjoy it..... I do hope so...... but this is the end of the road for me...............................................................
The story was better before editing, despite the rushed relationships, but then the protagonist was nerfed. Besides a lot of things have lost their meaning ... And I got discouraged, I hope that those who come after me like it and the changes are worth it for them, but not for me.
Im only writing this to let you onow tha t i like your story, i usually don't write long ass reviews but pls dont drop this pls dont drop this pls dont drop this pls dont drop this
Its extremely rushed and the characters don't feel like real people at all. But since the grammar is good enough , I will rate it a 3.
Great story ........ Keep it up.............................................................................................................................................................
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It is a great story so far and I love how it easily flowed through the first years of his life just wanted to say well done author person I think maybe an alien
Volume 1
- 1 Death [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 2 The Void [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 3 Rebirth [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 4 Growing Up [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 5 Sad News [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 6 The Ancient One [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 7 Kamar Taj [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 8 Soul And Body [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 9 Tony Stark [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 10 New Home & Rune Magic [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 11 Alfred & Young Millionaire [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 12 X-Gene And X-men [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 13 Noah's Mutant Ability [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 14 Show of Power [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 15 Start of Iron Man [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 16 Aftermath [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 17 Hulk's Blood [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 18 The Transformation of Crimson Fire [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 19 Spiderman & Venom [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 20 Oscorp Tower [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 21 Date [EDITED] 4 years ago
- 22 Arrival 4 years ago
- 23 Purple Lightning's Transformation 4 years ago
- 24 Ultimate Form 4 years ago
- 25 SSS 4 years ago
the story is quite lacking, most of the plot is too forced like when his mother died and suddenly the ancient one is visiting so he can train his ability, the timeskip also didnt help as it feels reading a summary rather than a story then you suddenly add tony stark out of the blue, and just like with other conversations they speak like robot or badly written script from a 3rd rate author, pepper alrrady demanded that he speak with tony immediately, she should first ask if he's already fine first or if he needs any thing, your mc is a robot and everyone else is a robot