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Loving this story so far! The thing I really like about this story is that the cultivation is explained well. Many cultivation novels do a terrible job of explaining the cultivation ranking system but not only does the author go into depth about how things work, but the addition of a system makes it really easy to understand. I can't wait to see what happens once Young grows stronger. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Found this book on kindle. I can't believe it didn't show up in my recommended reads here..... it's exactly the type of book I like to read.
Can't wait to see how this turns out. more please author san. 👀 I have to admit that cultivation stories are quickly becoming my .favorite guilty pleasure.
Shameless Author Review. This is an original story which features some different aspects to it than your standard weak to strong fiction. While the character does grow strong, it happens much more quickly since he doesn't need to worry about acquiring high grade energy for his body. The main focus is on action , martial arts and battles -- as well as unraveling the mystery of Spark -- the entity that resides within the Mc.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I'm updating my review on this because the story is starting to get more interesting. one thing I really like about this story is that the cultivation is explained well. many cultivation novels do a terrible job of explaining the cultivation ranking system. not only does the author go into depth about how things work, but the addition of a system makes it really easy to understand. it seems like there's a lot of potential here and the action is picking up as well. I can't wait to see what happens once Young grows stronger.
This story is interesting, if only for the premise. A young boy is double crossed and finds himself sharing his body with a spirit. together they must prevent rampant spirit energy from destroying them. I'd like to reserve my judgement to see how the story develops but right now I think I favor the author's other cultivation story (A Dragons Grimm Cultivation). This one isn't bad , it's just more traditional.
Spoiler de révélation I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Loving this story so far! The thing I really like about this story is that the cultivation is explained well. Many cultivation novels do a terrible job of explaining the cultivation ranking system but not only does the author go into depth about how things work, but the addition of a system makes it really easy to understand. I can't wait to see what happens once Young grows stronger. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Found this book on kindle. I can't believe it didn't show up in my recommended reads here..... it's exactly the type of book I like to read.
Can't wait to see how this turns out. more please author san. 👀 I have to admit that cultivation stories are quickly becoming my .favorite guilty pleasure.
Shameless Author Review. This is an original story which features some different aspects to it than your standard weak to strong fiction. While the character does grow strong, it happens much more quickly since he doesn't need to worry about acquiring high grade energy for his body. The main focus is on action , martial arts and battles -- as well as unraveling the mystery of Spark -- the entity that resides within the Mc.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I'm updating my review on this because the story is starting to get more interesting. one thing I really like about this story is that the cultivation is explained well. many cultivation novels do a terrible job of explaining the cultivation ranking system. not only does the author go into depth about how things work, but the addition of a system makes it really easy to understand. it seems like there's a lot of potential here and the action is picking up as well. I can't wait to see what happens once Young grows stronger.
This story is interesting, if only for the premise. A young boy is double crossed and finds himself sharing his body with a spirit. together they must prevent rampant spirit energy from destroying them. I'd like to reserve my judgement to see how the story develops but right now I think I favor the author's other cultivation story (A Dragons Grimm Cultivation). This one isn't bad , it's just more traditional.
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I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.