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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Author are you well?? Its been a little over 2 Months since you last updated and im kinda worried about you and your family :( i hope everything is ok
Really great novel set in a well thoght out, interesting World. The events are logical and realistic while not being obivous all in alll a enjouebl fantasy story.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
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Good character development, Good background,mysterious people,Strong parents.People think the MC will not be sucessfull.Overall good it just the release update are slow.Keep up the good work and looking forward for the upcomming chapters.
Me gusta pero odio esos cambios de pov, me gustaría que siguieran en la parte de Lina y arean contra los lobos me vale verga la ciudad, me salto toda la parte de la cuidad que escribes
The story itself is progressing very nicely and world building is pretty good. I enjoy it very much! While the subject of taming is in question for the MC himself his taming is actually advancing very well!!
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HELLOOOOOOOOOOO LOVE THIS NOVEL AUTHOR-SAN MABUHAY PILIPINAS MAHAL KITA 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😂😂😂😂
The characters are all lovable and feel real, the fights are the perfect amount of op and development, in my humble opinion the plot armor apeers very rarely and that's great! overall? great world, great characters, great powers, super underrated novel
As of this review I'm all caught up to the story at ch45 and its great, real steady paced and love how the story and characters are introduced, nice to see an mc that has to struggle but I kinda feel like this part of the story I'm at where a war is breaking out feels kinda rushed but not really, don't know how to explain it, a bit too early I think but I would definitely recommend to readers, I don't have any real complaints except that grammar or spelling can be off at times but that's a rarity lol me nitpicking now.
For anyone who is tired of OP MC in novel and for people that like to read monster taming. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's a awesome novel. The story is developing every well and interestingly. The development of character and introduce of new characters are well presented. It's every interesting to read . The only drawback back is we have to wait for 2 days for new chapter but it's worthy to wait for 2 days. It's not a drawback though. Well it's getting 2days to update new chapter is that the author priorities on quality rather than quantity. I'm suggesting this novel to new and existing reader those who are not yet reader to read.
Great story! Needs more recognition! Really interesting, can't believe the author's new to this! Their grammar is good, the updates are fairly regular and the world building is decent as well! Really enjoying Aeron's adventure!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The story is pretty good and I also like the animals he has tame so far............................................................................ .
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Honestly speaking, author you need to redo your synopsis because its really bad. It doesnt even tell you what the story will actually be about. If I wasnt bored out of my mind just clicking random books that I might like soley based on the title, I wouldnt have even tried this if I hadnt read the other ones in the newbie power rankings I interested in. Plus I only tried this because of the word Tamer in the title and lack of books. As for the actual review, this one was difficult for me as it wasnt like BAD but it was really hard to get into the story. This is because of the first chapter, it felt like it couldve been way better for a starting chapter. Unlike some of the other books I tried that had like actual flaws I could easily flame, this is more to do with your current writing style, which isnt that surprising since I saw u put that this your first book. Only way for that to get better is to read and write a lot more. Because of these 2 things I think are the reason why no1 reads or more so vote this novel. Im also guessing that u review swapped as every1 elses ratings are practically 5 stars while theres like no veiws. I dont like those types of people but whatever, compared to spam and alt accs its way better. The story starts off with MC transmigrating into a hopeless tamer who had died trying to tame monkeys. His parents are legendary talents but not in taming. MC coming from a taming family felt discrace so decided to become a tamer forcefully even though his talent at it is trash. He also has a sister. I only read 3 chaps before I dropped, but the novel's content/style was way too consistent making it dull. With it continuing for 3 chaps I gave up. Again this cant really be fixed without reading good books u like and analyzing what they do and writing more. Its different for every1 but I improved by making a new story and dropping my old one every few dozen chaps to fx my past mistakes and try something else, not the story, but the way I write. Yes my profile only has 3 novels, but I wrote some on other accs while for now Im just stockpiling and also planning for amazon. U just gotta self analayze and try to see what you are doing wrong / right. Review swaps will tell u jack and only r a film that inflate each others egos. Also if u delete me Ill be back as I hate those authors :)
Good Novel!!. For some reason there are not a lot of reviews for this novel but I like it a lot. I like the beast taming Genre usually. And this is a great story. Hope the author doesn't drop this and continues to post chapters.
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I just finished reading the latest chapters. It's good, It has potential to become a better novel. I love this types of Novel's so keep it up :)
Hi Author here :) This is my first work,. I've always had thoughts of writing my own novel, I'm not the best writer but I do try my best :) Please give this novel a try
(score tanked by updating stability) Aeron! Release more chapters, and my life, is yours!
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Author are you well?? Its been a little over 2 Months since you last updated and im kinda worried about you and your family :( i hope everything is ok
Really great novel set in a well thoght out, interesting World. The events are logical and realistic while not being obivous all in alll a enjouebl fantasy story.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
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Good character development, Good background,mysterious people,Strong parents.People think the MC will not be sucessfull.Overall good it just the release update are slow.Keep up the good work and looking forward for the upcomming chapters.
Me gusta pero odio esos cambios de pov, me gustaría que siguieran en la parte de Lina y arean contra los lobos me vale verga la ciudad, me salto toda la parte de la cuidad que escribes
The story itself is progressing very nicely and world building is pretty good. I enjoy it very much! While the subject of taming is in question for the MC himself his taming is actually advancing very well!!
Spoiler de révélation HELLOOOOOOOOOOO LOVE THIS NOVEL AUTHOR-SAN MABUHAY PILIPINAS MAHAL KITA 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😂😂😂😂
The characters are all lovable and feel real, the fights are the perfect amount of op and development, in my humble opinion the plot armor apeers very rarely and that's great! overall? great world, great characters, great powers, super underrated novel
As of this review I'm all caught up to the story at ch45 and its great, real steady paced and love how the story and characters are introduced, nice to see an mc that has to struggle but I kinda feel like this part of the story I'm at where a war is breaking out feels kinda rushed but not really, don't know how to explain it, a bit too early I think but I would definitely recommend to readers, I don't have any real complaints except that grammar or spelling can be off at times but that's a rarity lol me nitpicking now.
For anyone who is tired of OP MC in novel and for people that like to read monster taming. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's a awesome novel. The story is developing every well and interestingly. The development of character and introduce of new characters are well presented. It's every interesting to read . The only drawback back is we have to wait for 2 days for new chapter but it's worthy to wait for 2 days. It's not a drawback though. Well it's getting 2days to update new chapter is that the author priorities on quality rather than quantity. I'm suggesting this novel to new and existing reader those who are not yet reader to read.
Great story! Needs more recognition! Really interesting, can't believe the author's new to this! Their grammar is good, the updates are fairly regular and the world building is decent as well! Really enjoying Aeron's adventure!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The story is pretty good and I also like the animals he has tame so far............................................................................ .
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Honestly speaking, author you need to redo your synopsis because its really bad. It doesnt even tell you what the story will actually be about. If I wasnt bored out of my mind just clicking random books that I might like soley based on the title, I wouldnt have even tried this if I hadnt read the other ones in the newbie power rankings I interested in. Plus I only tried this because of the word Tamer in the title and lack of books. As for the actual review, this one was difficult for me as it wasnt like BAD but it was really hard to get into the story. This is because of the first chapter, it felt like it couldve been way better for a starting chapter. Unlike some of the other books I tried that had like actual flaws I could easily flame, this is more to do with your current writing style, which isnt that surprising since I saw u put that this your first book. Only way for that to get better is to read and write a lot more. Because of these 2 things I think are the reason why no1 reads or more so vote this novel. Im also guessing that u review swapped as every1 elses ratings are practically 5 stars while theres like no veiws. I dont like those types of people but whatever, compared to spam and alt accs its way better. The story starts off with MC transmigrating into a hopeless tamer who had died trying to tame monkeys. His parents are legendary talents but not in taming. MC coming from a taming family felt discrace so decided to become a tamer forcefully even though his talent at it is trash. He also has a sister. I only read 3 chaps before I dropped, but the novel's content/style was way too consistent making it dull. With it continuing for 3 chaps I gave up. Again this cant really be fixed without reading good books u like and analyzing what they do and writing more. Its different for every1 but I improved by making a new story and dropping my old one every few dozen chaps to fx my past mistakes and try something else, not the story, but the way I write. Yes my profile only has 3 novels, but I wrote some on other accs while for now Im just stockpiling and also planning for amazon. U just gotta self analayze and try to see what you are doing wrong / right. Review swaps will tell u jack and only r a film that inflate each others egos. Also if u delete me Ill be back as I hate those authors :)
Good Novel!!. For some reason there are not a lot of reviews for this novel but I like it a lot. I like the beast taming Genre usually. And this is a great story. Hope the author doesn't drop this and continues to post chapters.
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I just finished reading the latest chapters. It's good, It has potential to become a better novel. I love this types of Novel's so keep it up :)
Hi Author here :) This is my first work,. I've always had thoughts of writing my own novel, I'm not the best writer but I do try my best :) Please give this novel a try
(score tanked by updating stability) Aeron! Release more chapters, and my life, is yours!