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LV 4

MikruZero

Continue your work bro. You need to update more. I'll be waiting for next chapters. This kind of game genre is really my thing, but I want more character development thing. Anyways this is a good book.

LV 1

Zeertified

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LV 4

Drapetomaniac12

The story is well written. I love the main character's personality. It's complex xD. Author has done a great job. Recommend it for all. Keep writing!

LV 1

JusTaReader

Bookmarked! I love this novel. This type of game system novel is really my thing. More updates from the author and I hope the friendship between the two guys strengthened even more. Lol. It's funny how Denver kept on being in the end of the cliff every chapter.

LV 1

Qian_love

Bruh love the story! Keep up the good job. It's like different from other stories which follows the same exact plotline. I want this book to kinda have no romance or anything. I want this to be a pire fantasy book. High hopes for it. And please update more! 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

I love game and virtual reality novels and this one seemed legitimately good in some aspect. I don't know but it's very fascinating for me how the author put the player's status on some chapters. Keep up the good work author! More updates please!

LV 2

FennecYeou

I'm very fond of VRMMORPG novels and this is very good. The chemistry between the Jaycee and Denver was oddly satisfying despite their differences in personality. More update author! I'll look forward to this gem.

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LAjames

I enjoyed reading this story! The idea is original and well written. I like how this book is centred around a game and I think that this genre is underrated. Besides a few grammar mistakes here and there, it's an amazing book! I hope the author keeps going and is successful!

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AnairaG72

Their friendship is so cuteeee. I lowkey ship HAHAHAHAAHHAH. The story's theme may be common but the author managed to captivate me with the way he delivers the story. Absolutely a must-read!

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Lord_Ancestor

Honestly I do adore this genre of novel. I can't find any faults in game logic so far, as far as cliches and vrmmo logic goes. However, the constant info dumps, although somewhat neccessary in certain aspects considering the scale of the game and the immense amount of information that will need to be covered, are very obstructive to a smooth reading experience. In addition, the character panel presentation is very clunky and could often be done without. If it is absolutely neccessary to keep track of all the individual stats then I would reccomend you to have separate auxillary chapters where things like base class statistics can be recorded for reference. This would remove the need to have so many large info dumps of random statistics that this early on, or even potentially later on, may have minimal impact on the overall story or flow. The best opinion i could give on how to improve overall though would be to use something similar to grammarly for overall writing, and to try and smoothly incorporate tidbits of immediately relevant information rather than just slamming a wall of info into readers like a truck. Please continue to update though as I am very much enjoying the premise and would love to see the work as a whole improve as more chapters are released :)

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lucival

Very good novel please dont drop this and continue to release more chapters PLEASEEEE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need more chapters release release release Release moreeee .

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DiperZ

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Raizen22

Took me awhile to warm up to Jaycee, but so far I am liking where the plot is going and I look forward to seeing where this story goes from here on out. Looking forward to more updates. The story is well written and has my attention.