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This story draws you in more than any one I have read in a long time. The tantalizing mysteries just keep piling up. I can't believe more people aren't voting for it.
I love the story outline.Although it was a clinche back ground about school and super human beings.But on how the adventure going on.It makes me keeping to read more.[img=update]
I don't know how it would be sounds.Since,i am bad at english.But this novel is trully good to read.It was intriguing and excitting to read[img=update]
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Great book! A mix of intruiging and hidden elements and great initial world building at the beginning really hooks you up from the get go. Looking forward for new chapters.
I think that the story is very exciting. I can't wait for the next chapters and I also want to know what's outside. It's a fun read. Great work!
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Really good book so far. it has that Harry Potter+Dragon Prince vibe. Interesting character design and un-put-downable world building makes you sit there and wonder about the world itself. it's not finished yet but overall worth for your time.
This story draws you in more than any one I have read in a long time. The tantalizing mysteries just keep piling up. I can't believe more people aren't voting for it.
I love the story outline.Although it was a clinche back ground about school and super human beings.But on how the adventure going on.It makes me keeping to read more.[img=update]
I don't know how it would be sounds.Since,i am bad at english.But this novel is trully good to read.It was intriguing and excitting to read[img=update]
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Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Great book! A mix of intruiging and hidden elements and great initial world building at the beginning really hooks you up from the get go. Looking forward for new chapters.
I think that the story is very exciting. I can't wait for the next chapters and I also want to know what's outside. It's a fun read. Great work!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Really good book so far. it has that Harry Potter+Dragon Prince vibe. Interesting character design and un-put-downable world building makes you sit there and wonder about the world itself. it's not finished yet but overall worth for your time.