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I had to read half way through of the story. I could not stop myself reading for more and more ... One of the things that I find difficult to write because I tend to run out of ideas when it comes to a contemporary genre but the Author-nim seems to have the knack and talent to extend the plot and offer us a great reading material. I am truly impressed of the story especially how the emotions and scenes were woven carefully to actualize such impression for the readers. I am hands down to how the story is well-written. Let us give this novel a chance because it deserves more than one glance or second look, the time you will spend for this story is worth it. This will not disappoint you guys! Please let us give the Author our support and our time to read the novel. Must-Read!
I must say I am hooked up with his book and I found it so interesting and funny that I can't stop reading. I love the way you wove the emotions and characters! Ahh I am so into it! Please author-nim continue this book and give me more. Guys there are few errors but the story is awesome! Its a gender- blender type story so I know you all would want to read it! Don't miss this out.
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Oh God which kind ofparents are they? But it seems like a nice novel lemme continue reading it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Giving a five star review because it caught my attention so fast and i feel good about reading it... I haven't read much but from what i have read, I can say that author-nim has done great with the plots and emotions along with characters!! And that it is cross gender... I hate to say that but I am loving it!!! I am so excited for reading whole book. So please give me lots of context and updatesss!!! [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! γmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comγ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iβm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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Loved the book. Author did an excellent job πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
so first of all, I loved this book, it's perfect, the characters and their feeling can be felt and u can easily imagine every single scenario in the novel. I loved this book, I keep up and good luck! ππ
Hiii Dear author! Hope you're doing well. Giving 2nd time a five star review is no wonder. You've written the events so nicely that I'm not able to leave your book. Keep going like this. All the best with this work.
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this book is beautifully written. the authors use of diction is spot on pleaseeeee keep it up. β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ100%amazinggggggggggggggggggggg
fair reviewing here after Ch 50. (I was using an alt to read it btw) this book is pretty underrated. not sure why? but I can vouch for this book of how great it is. 10/10
I think this is a pretty decent story. Decent writing with few errors but nothing that not understandable. The characters are well made, but they lack description when it comes to apperances. The updates are fast, keep it up. The world background is described fine but try excluding the unnecessary details and explain the necessary ones. That makes it easy to comprehend and imagine. Overall, few errors, but not a bad read at all.
I totally enojyed reading thisβ€οΈ Such a great story I have ever readβ€οΈI hope for the best upcoming stories from youβ€οΈlots of love and support β€οΈ
Love the way u narrate the story. Keep on writing. Hope for more better result.β£β£The story simply explains your fabulous writing skills.I simply enjoyed reading this during lockdown period.
It's a great book. Author keep up the good work I m really hoping for updates sooner. Don't stop...keep updatingπππππππππππππππππππππ
As I read the synopsis I realized that this is a very unique and gentle love story between two MCs. Giving this work a five star review despite there are some minor mistakes is because I feel this story can go a long way. I would like to suggest you to break those long passages to smaller ones to make it more intriguing. Talking about the story, every chapter has an interesting plot which is necessary to hook up the readers with it. I recommend this book to everyone. The other important thing about this story is that the updates are stable. Keep it up author. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Spoiler de rΓ©vΓ©lation I had to read half way through of the story. I could not stop myself reading for more and more ... One of the things that I find difficult to write because I tend to run out of ideas when it comes to a contemporary genre but the Author-nim seems to have the knack and talent to extend the plot and offer us a great reading material. I am truly impressed of the story especially how the emotions and scenes were woven carefully to actualize such impression for the readers. I am hands down to how the story is well-written. Let us give this novel a chance because it deserves more than one glance or second look, the time you will spend for this story is worth it. This will not disappoint you guys! Please let us give the Author our support and our time to read the novel. Must-Read!
I must say I am hooked up with his book and I found it so interesting and funny that I can't stop reading. I love the way you wove the emotions and characters! Ahh I am so into it! Please author-nim continue this book and give me more. Guys there are few errors but the story is awesome! Its a gender- blender type story so I know you all would want to read it! Don't miss this out.
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Oh God which kind ofparents are they? But it seems like a nice novel lemme continue reading it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Giving a five star review because it caught my attention so fast and i feel good about reading it... I haven't read much but from what i have read, I can say that author-nim has done great with the plots and emotions along with characters!! And that it is cross gender... I hate to say that but I am loving it!!! I am so excited for reading whole book. So please give me lots of context and updatesss!!! [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! γmy email: kazechanku@gmail.comγ If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. Iβm sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Spoiler de rΓ©vΓ©lation hmmmmmmmmmm...why did this story make me remember the drama bromance so much..???? π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€
β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππβ€πβ€πβ€β€πβ€πβ€πππππππβ€β€β€β€β€
Loved the book. Author did an excellent job πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
so first of all, I loved this book, it's perfect, the characters and their feeling can be felt and u can easily imagine every single scenario in the novel. I loved this book, I keep up and good luck! ππ
Hiii Dear author! Hope you're doing well. Giving 2nd time a five star review is no wonder. You've written the events so nicely that I'm not able to leave your book. Keep going like this. All the best with this work.
this story is amazing this story is amazing this story is amazing this story is amazing this story is amazing this story is amazing this story is amazing this story is amazing
this book is beautifully written. the authors use of diction is spot on pleaseeeee keep it up. β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ100%amazinggggggggggggggggggggg
fair reviewing here after Ch 50. (I was using an alt to read it btw) this book is pretty underrated. not sure why? but I can vouch for this book of how great it is. 10/10
I think this is a pretty decent story. Decent writing with few errors but nothing that not understandable. The characters are well made, but they lack description when it comes to apperances. The updates are fast, keep it up. The world background is described fine but try excluding the unnecessary details and explain the necessary ones. That makes it easy to comprehend and imagine. Overall, few errors, but not a bad read at all.
I totally enojyed reading thisβ€οΈ Such a great story I have ever readβ€οΈI hope for the best upcoming stories from youβ€οΈlots of love and support β€οΈ
Love the way u narrate the story. Keep on writing. Hope for more better result.β£β£The story simply explains your fabulous writing skills.I simply enjoyed reading this during lockdown period.
It's a great book. Author keep up the good work I m really hoping for updates sooner. Don't stop...keep updatingπππππππππππππππππππππ
As I read the synopsis I realized that this is a very unique and gentle love story between two MCs. Giving this work a five star review despite there are some minor mistakes is because I feel this story can go a long way. I would like to suggest you to break those long passages to smaller ones to make it more intriguing. Talking about the story, every chapter has an interesting plot which is necessary to hook up the readers with it. I recommend this book to everyone. The other important thing about this story is that the updates are stable. Keep it up author. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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