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Mrssmithwriter

Hi Readers!! Hope you're enjoying the book so far. I thought I'll introduce some of the characters for you. Please meet Dr. Kim McPherson. Love ya and enjoy! [img=recommend]

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4yr
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Mrssmithwriter

Hi Readers!! Hope you're enjoying the book so far. I thought I'll introduce some of the characters for you. Please meet Master Chief Nick Roberts. Love ya and enjoy!

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4yr
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Ellen_Simpson

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3yr
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KittyMeow_Meow

This book is hands down one of the best military romances I've had the pleasure of reading. Initially found it on Chapters and couldn't put it down. Hoping you decide to publish on paper. Definitely going to reread. [img=recommend]

3yr
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Ellen_Simpson

best book here on this aoo and their is a second book cant wait to read it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

3yr
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Hey_5549

Amazing story👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 i love it😍😍😍best story I’ve read so far😊............................................ ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

3yr
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Vannie_C

Lovely story👏🏻👏🏻 read this story On chapters and loved it👌🏻Amazing, definitely the best story I’ve read so far........................

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Spartan_Creed

I love the way it's first person to help the mind explore the experience of the storyline and the view of the two makes it seem more larger than it is but the same time you get more information that makes you keep Reading

3yr
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tammieyara

I love this story .I hope everything goes smoothly on the mission in the city and that they coming back to each other ..and the truth comes up *about her sister

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
DebSki69

I couldn't put it down. It keeps you in the moment, like you are there with them experiencing everything that they are going thru. Can't wait to start book 2. You really have a wonderful talent in writing, your faithful reader Deb 🥰😁

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Tx_Princess

I absolutely love this book, and can't wait to read My Navy Seal Two!!!! You did a great job in book one with the characters and the story. You can count on me to be a loyal reader. Keep up the good work and God bless.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Patricia_Neto

I really loved this story... and I'm already following the next story My Navy Seal II. I started reading it in chapters and followed the writer here to this app. The story is so captivating, has suspense, action, romance, betrayal and some erotic parts. Congratulations on writing such and awesome stuff 😍😍👏👏👏

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
chilly_v

It has been a while since I’ve truly read a good book and this book has it all. It has adventure, romance and suspense. It is also well written.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Sandra_Martin_4810

this is a great book. it shows people what it is like to find the true love of your life. I have cried and laughed while reading this book. I would recommend this book to anybody who loves a good romance.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Peggy_Snyder

This is a great book. The writer is a great writer. When your reading the book it make you imagine that your there while your reading it. The writer goes into details and it's a great book. I recommend it to anyone who wants to read a great book.

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
SassiSunni

I have throughly enjoyed this book and I cannot wait for the sequel. If you love Romance mixed with Suspense then this is your book. Awesome job.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
kelly_b
LV 10 Badge

Ahhh i loved book 1 im excited for book 2 its been a whirlwind of a ride thus far for kim & nick the clIff hanger had me on the edge of my seat yelling dont you dare do it! Amazing writing cant wait for more!!

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
PreciousAngel516

Great story. wish it was not so long in some parts. And was all in one book, cause as much as I love this story. I don't want to have to wait another 125 chapters to have a great ending. I guess I just must be impatient. But all in all I really love this story and it's a great read for rollercoaster emotions. Awesome writer. Thanks for sharing.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Nisina_Abdi

Amazing story can’t wait for more to come . Love the relationship between Kim and Nick they are a beautiful couple so excited to see how they evolve in the next book

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Soleram
LV 15 Badge

I drop this novel after randomly read and jump few chapters. The think thqtvreally made this novel not enjoyable to read is the use of personal pronoun, it is really bothering. This novel is like read a ppt with bullet points. There no coherence and when reafing on the characyers pov, would that be better using the proper pronouns.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Peggy_Snyder

I love this story. It's like you are watching a movie and it's great. This story has a lot of details and it's written great. It almost feels like you are there when your reading it. Or you can imagine what's going to happen next. Thanks for writing a great story .

3yr
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revin_na

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3yr
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Smntngbty10

I’m following you from chapters app. i love your book but i also curious about the ending. I hope they get the happy ending! Maybe after your book end I’m not open this app again lol! Because i just download the app for the book! [img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Kristina_Whoo923

Love this story! I actually followed it here from previous app. My main story I read on here! Definitely would recommend! Beginning had me wanting more from Nick and Kim.!!

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
mayb4
LV 13 Badge

The author definitely draws the readers into Nick and Kim Passionate Naval Journey together as a couple ❤🤍💙 As you read each chapter you can't help wanting to read more. The author draws you into there journey together and honestly you feel part of there story. Its beautifully well written and You want to continue reading Nick and Kim's Naval Journey together as A Super Couple. I hope the readers add this to there reading collection. Passionate, Heartfelt and Heated with Desire is the best way to describe the novel ❤ 🤍 💙

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Morgon_Maxwell

I love this book so much. how the charaters develope in this book and how it keeps going with new obstacles. I love how she Updates everyday. One of my favorite books!!

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Monica_Lee_7188

I started reading this story on a different app, and really wanted to continue reading this story. I feel in love with the main characters. [img=recommend]

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Natasha_Laing

This book had me captured from the first word I read. Awesome characters excellent writing. I love the fact that the story is clean and that small details are kept correctly throughout the chapters, truly an amazing writer

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
Tina_Roberts_1551

I love your story I like how they met and how I fell in love and no matter what they go through they always come back to each other and your story always makes us want more

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Morgan_Alderman14

I followed this book over from another app and couldn't be happier with the decision. I'm obsessed with it. Nick and Kim are goals and I can't wait to see how it ends. Loyal reader <3 <3

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Elzette_Niemand

The build up in every chapter is awesome. I really can't put it down and every chapter keeps you coming back for more. Such a good story. As I said before. I hope this book gets published📖 as I will buy a copy 😍

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
Renee_Knowles

Absolutely love your writing! Your a great writer. I only downloaded this app to be able to continue read My Navy Seal, than I found more of your books and started those. Beautiful writer! ❤

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Mrssmithwriter

Hi Readers!! Hope you're enjoying the book so far. I thought I'll introduce some of the characters for you. Please meet Dr. Kim McPherson. Love ya and enjoy! [img=recommend]

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4yr
Voir 10 Réponses
Mrssmithwriter

Hi Readers!! Hope you're enjoying the book so far. I thought I'll introduce some of the characters for you. Please meet Master Chief Nick Roberts. Love ya and enjoy!

img
4yr
Voir 12 Réponses
Ellen_Simpson

best writer ever[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
KittyMeow_Meow

This book is hands down one of the best military romances I've had the pleasure of reading. Initially found it on Chapters and couldn't put it down. Hoping you decide to publish on paper. Definitely going to reread. [img=recommend]

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
Ellen_Simpson

best book here on this aoo and their is a second book cant wait to read it[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Hey_5549

Amazing story👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 i love it😍😍😍best story I’ve read so far😊............................................ ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Vannie_C

Lovely story👏🏻👏🏻 read this story On chapters and loved it👌🏻Amazing, definitely the best story I’ve read so far........................

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Spartan_Creed

I love the way it's first person to help the mind explore the experience of the storyline and the view of the two makes it seem more larger than it is but the same time you get more information that makes you keep Reading

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
tammieyara

I love this story .I hope everything goes smoothly on the mission in the city and that they coming back to each other ..and the truth comes up *about her sister

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
DebSki69

I couldn't put it down. It keeps you in the moment, like you are there with them experiencing everything that they are going thru. Can't wait to start book 2. You really have a wonderful talent in writing, your faithful reader Deb 🥰😁

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Tx_Princess

I absolutely love this book, and can't wait to read My Navy Seal Two!!!! You did a great job in book one with the characters and the story. You can count on me to be a loyal reader. Keep up the good work and God bless.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Patricia_Neto

I really loved this story... and I'm already following the next story My Navy Seal II. I started reading it in chapters and followed the writer here to this app. The story is so captivating, has suspense, action, romance, betrayal and some erotic parts. Congratulations on writing such and awesome stuff 😍😍👏👏👏

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
chilly_v

It has been a while since I’ve truly read a good book and this book has it all. It has adventure, romance and suspense. It is also well written.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Sandra_Martin_4810

this is a great book. it shows people what it is like to find the true love of your life. I have cried and laughed while reading this book. I would recommend this book to anybody who loves a good romance.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Peggy_Snyder

This is a great book. The writer is a great writer. When your reading the book it make you imagine that your there while your reading it. The writer goes into details and it's a great book. I recommend it to anyone who wants to read a great book.

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
SassiSunni

I have throughly enjoyed this book and I cannot wait for the sequel. If you love Romance mixed with Suspense then this is your book. Awesome job.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
kelly_b
LV 10 Badge

Ahhh i loved book 1 im excited for book 2 its been a whirlwind of a ride thus far for kim & nick the clIff hanger had me on the edge of my seat yelling dont you dare do it! Amazing writing cant wait for more!!

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
PreciousAngel516

Great story. wish it was not so long in some parts. And was all in one book, cause as much as I love this story. I don't want to have to wait another 125 chapters to have a great ending. I guess I just must be impatient. But all in all I really love this story and it's a great read for rollercoaster emotions. Awesome writer. Thanks for sharing.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Nisina_Abdi

Amazing story can’t wait for more to come . Love the relationship between Kim and Nick they are a beautiful couple so excited to see how they evolve in the next book

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Soleram
LV 15 Badge

I drop this novel after randomly read and jump few chapters. The think thqtvreally made this novel not enjoyable to read is the use of personal pronoun, it is really bothering. This novel is like read a ppt with bullet points. There no coherence and when reafing on the characyers pov, would that be better using the proper pronouns.

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Peggy_Snyder

I love this story. It's like you are watching a movie and it's great. This story has a lot of details and it's written great. It almost feels like you are there when your reading it. Or you can imagine what's going to happen next. Thanks for writing a great story .

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
revin_na

✨🌺🌺✨🌺🌺✨ 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺 ✨🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺✨ ✨✨🌺🌺🌺✨✨ ✨✨✨🌺✨✨✨ ✨🌸🌸✨🌸🌸✨ 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 ✨🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸✨ ✨✨🌸🌸🌸✨✨ ✨✨✨🌸✨✨✨

3yr
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Smntngbty10

I’m following you from chapters app. i love your book but i also curious about the ending. I hope they get the happy ending! Maybe after your book end I’m not open this app again lol! Because i just download the app for the book! [img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Kristina_Whoo923

Love this story! I actually followed it here from previous app. My main story I read on here! Definitely would recommend! Beginning had me wanting more from Nick and Kim.!!

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
mayb4
LV 13 Badge

The author definitely draws the readers into Nick and Kim Passionate Naval Journey together as a couple ❤🤍💙 As you read each chapter you can't help wanting to read more. The author draws you into there journey together and honestly you feel part of there story. Its beautifully well written and You want to continue reading Nick and Kim's Naval Journey together as A Super Couple. I hope the readers add this to there reading collection. Passionate, Heartfelt and Heated with Desire is the best way to describe the novel ❤ 🤍 💙

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Morgon_Maxwell

I love this book so much. how the charaters develope in this book and how it keeps going with new obstacles. I love how she Updates everyday. One of my favorite books!!

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Monica_Lee_7188

I started reading this story on a different app, and really wanted to continue reading this story. I feel in love with the main characters. [img=recommend]

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Natasha_Laing

This book had me captured from the first word I read. Awesome characters excellent writing. I love the fact that the story is clean and that small details are kept correctly throughout the chapters, truly an amazing writer

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
Tina_Roberts_1551

I love your story I like how they met and how I fell in love and no matter what they go through they always come back to each other and your story always makes us want more

3yr
Voir 0 Réponses
Morgan_Alderman14

I followed this book over from another app and couldn't be happier with the decision. I'm obsessed with it. Nick and Kim are goals and I can't wait to see how it ends. Loyal reader <3 <3

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
Elzette_Niemand

The build up in every chapter is awesome. I really can't put it down and every chapter keeps you coming back for more. Such a good story. As I said before. I hope this book gets published📖 as I will buy a copy 😍

3yr
Voir 2 Réponses
Renee_Knowles

Absolutely love your writing! Your a great writer. I only downloaded this app to be able to continue read My Navy Seal, than I found more of your books and started those. Beautiful writer! ❤

3yr
Voir 1 Réponses
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