Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)

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Eom

Every thing was good until MC accepted Cang yue's confession, I mean it was so unnecessary to accept that confession that I don't even wan't to read anymore he know that jasmine liked him but he still accepted her confession was really cringe I mean she not worthy of MC no matter who say I am not going to accept that she is just going to be MC's pet that need to feed cultivation resources and have S** with and thats it I think author really made a bad decision to accept her as first harem member so I just want to say author thanks until this time with that move you did there every thing over for me(you know I read so many atgs fanfics so I can see future direction of your story in atg universe so with turn you did here harem of this story made story over for me). Because of language barrier I can't express what I have in my mind so if the things I write here is heavy sorry fo that.

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Itachi_Hyoudou

The story is great. Love it❤️❤️. But if you drop this like your last against the gods story, then I am gonna find you and force you write 100 chapters straight. Understand?

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Weirdo

Please.... Please give us the satisfaction of slapping the arrogant face of the ice b1tch!!! Make her regret so much that she feel like she had poop inside her ancestor urn....

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daniel_rahn

This is a Great novel You should definetly go check it out, first of all the mc avoid all wunxia cliches and simp situations, he is being OP with the time and so Far he can beat tyrants tier level cultivators and he is not Even a throne, when he get to the divine realm he Will probably bitch slap them without worry The story and interacctions are well and the girls he Will add in the harem are just the few useful, that means he Will not leave them while he is in his Journey like the OG jun che Really good without all that wunxia drama so Far, You should really check this out, totally worth it

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Kutu

This is simply a work of art. A good MC that thinks with his head ? ✅ Actual Love Progress ? ✅ System that is actually useful ? ✅ OP Cheats ? ✅ NO System Punishment for Missions ? ✅

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Amon91

It was good until he accepted cang yue confession. It became sort of annoying. i hope you the author can do better later to composate this thing.

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LeyAn99

I don't really usually comment on the stories I read, not for anything in particular, but I can't help but comment on the great amount of joy that reading this work has brought me so far, when it comes to ATG I've always felt bad I use that fanfics give to the character of Yun che because I think that if you know how to use this character you can give a lot of ideas for very interesting and funny stories This kind of plot with this new yun che is simply incredible and I can't help but wait like an addict for the new chapter I would like to congratulate the author for the hidden work of art that he has left on this site and I wish him the best of encouragement to continue this great story My sincere thanks to the author

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PARADOXICAL

Like most xianxia novels logic does not apply to this one too, just a 10x more illogical. Also I can't even understand wtf is going on without reading it twice or more.

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creepycatisawesone

Well You can read the other reviews and you would get the idea. Simply Said. This is the best ATG Fanfic out there. I have read many of them. But this is truly the best. So what is better than the other ones?? Writing Quality ... The story is written in proper english, No shitty grammatical errors. No He/She errors. Perfect but easy to understand word flow. The flow is so well, I didn't even realise when I covered all the chapters.( and for the haters... It's was not because of words. Each chapter had at least 1500-2000 words for sure but I didn't count) Character Design is actually the best part as the Yun Che of the story is the best ever. Each character acts the way you would expect them to act actually if that event would have happened. System too is good as it is a system of the person and the person is not a slave of the system. There are no penalties. Quests are given but are for the benefit of Yun Che himself and he is not forced to accept them. He can refuse them. The shop part is very funny. But it's a secret for you. Next ... Well there are more points but I gotta go. So I recommend the story to any and everyone . C YA

LV 14

Number1Fan

One of the better ATG fanfic that have rad till now with a down to earth mc who is humble and not horndog compared to the original mc. The relationship between mc and the characters also feels a lot more genuine. Overall I recommend this to anyone looking for a good ATG fanfic.

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Evil_Duke

nice work author and hope not to drop this fanfic till u finish [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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InhumaneGarou

So far it's going very well, the grammar and very good is going in the right way (in my case on google translator). I hope the author continues with the fanfic.

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jeanpierregerardo

After reading until the last chapter, I can only say that I like how it goes, I am not a native of English, so I do not know if the grammar and all that pod of failures that there will be, if like how I progress, not so fast with the force, is not pervert looking for girls like collecting pokemon. - First it has its main point, which is to become strong, it is not like the other "fanfic" where they start with a dominated protagonist, who does not know what to do (those who when they have Op powers, they only use it to have all the beauties in their bed just for fucking). - Since it started until now I like how it goes, it has been slow, but not so slow, it does not get into other people's problems, as other authors do. - You presented "can yue" that is different from other "fanfic" where they don't give it a different approach (as for example in other "Atg" stories, they always put "can yue" only as bait for the protagonist to help her because of its beauty, in passing also so that the protagonist feels good about himself), but in your story, I see that his role is not simple, you are giving it a different approach, where alone it is managing to obtain more power, not one that It is given by the protagonist who would make things easy and without any effort. - I just hope to see how you will treat "xiam quiyue" for treating him badly, I want to see how you put her in her place and make her see that she is not a big deal and that what she does is only because of her selfish satisfaction that she has for her mother , where he hurts the rest of his family that he is already losing with each time he gets more involved in the cultivation that blocks his emotions. - I would put more but it i am lazy xD.

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Evil_Duke

I like your motto "Never Give Up". Awesome is the only word I could use to describe the fanfic. The relationships are not forced and the character development is very good. Just don't get yourself stressed out and focus on haters. Haters are everywhere. I hope you show your version of how ATG should be.[img=recommend]

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BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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DaoistdoKJss

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Lal_Kenji8thkazaha

Suck I regret commenting on the chapter a while back this suck reborn as SCUM CHE himself. Although he isnt THE Yun Che cant help but feel disgusted knowing its the same fucking INCUBUS

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SCP_0999

The fanfiction was going well after the confession chapter. everything went down hill. Also why did change jasmine attitude they barely know each other she already considered her big sister. she supposed to jealous of her. Jasmine attitude ruthless not meek.