A Supernatural Apocalypse

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Bit_Lucky

I don't care if you out the web novel put me in the rankings or not All I want is you people to add this to your library, Love it, Share it, and also keep reading increasing the people who read this. i just want you all to have a wonderful time reading this. Check my other story if you want to in original works.

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Mary_Algen_Guiang1

First, I have a question, do you read light novels? this is exactly the format of a light novel. you have a character page, description of powers, characteristic of protagonist page, and most importantly, it is easy to understand and absorb. why am I asking? because I love light novels. and I clearly admire anyone who also loves to create one. thank you for an enjoyable read, and for reminding me of my favorite kind of book there is.

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Sukyna_Katamba

Wow. Wow. wow. I highly recommend the author to write more coz I cant wait for the next chaps. The book was very great and it vividly showed the characters.

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Swords_Sensei

I will describe the work as, incredible. I am not a big fan of the genre of this work, but this was one of the few that I liked. I was not attracted by the problems or the situations as such, but the way in which the author described it and I feel that this is something important. 4 stars :3

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HANA_4345

So, let's go with the strong points first... The character and world-building in this story are pretty decent. Just as other reviewers have written, it has this light novel type of building which is pretty adequate for the Webnovel platform and readers. What can the author improve? 1. Grammar. (Which the author knows since in ch1 it was mentioned about the grammatical mistakes. I recommend using Grammarly or MS Word to check on those tiny mistakes. If you are writing in 3rd POV remember that most verbs are going to be in the past tense.) 2. Being clearer. I like reading the synopsis, and it took me a few times re-reading it to understand the idea. There's also a lot of redundant sentences. The same goes for the chapters I have read so far. You need to describe so your readers know but prevent being redundant. Try using pronouns. And... that's all. I hope that maybe someday the author will go back and edit the chapters. This story can have a lot of potential with a bit of more polishing.

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Vanessa_dowlatram

Perfect book dear author you are an amazing writer who one in a million best book are been liked by me your book are amazing and wonderful I usually don't like these types of book but I give it a try and I was amazed with the talent and words that are in it it touches my heart and that I really loved it right now I am running out of words to say I will say I rate this novel 100% The best I could have done you are an amazing writer keep it up 🎖 your book \ novels mean alot to me you are one of the best author in the world . and I wish you all the best in the future and continue to achieve perfection and write more novel can't wait to see more chapters from your sincerely fan Vanessa dowlatram thank you very much for letting me comment on your book😀 \novel.🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎖🎗🎗🎗🎗🎗🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊🎖🎖🎖🎖

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favorit567

this story feels so real and it is well written! it has me hooked already and i want to keep reading. the author did a great job in creating this story

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RaijinInu

The story is an intriguing premiss to the post-apocalyptic sci-fi genre, in a way it made me think of ghouls and the bloodlust of vampires. Am curious how this story will continue to grow. Want something fresh filled with lots of blood and action? Certainly give this novel a try! Keep up the good work Author-kun! ^_^

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LanumKing

a well written book. i like how the character was introduced and how easy the writer was able to show us the world. there was alot of exposition and it was easy to follow. the action scene are a bit wordy in my opinion but that's fine but yea that's all i got for this book I'ma keep reading also.

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TheWoodsman

The characters in this book seem intriguing, melding well with the clear threat posed by "it". There are minor grammatical errors, but a few edits will fix that up. [img=recommend]

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Nancy_Jim

This is clearly an original. The author has an admirable imagination. But wait the MC has a crazy personality😂😂. I know I am going to enjoy this book[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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MitakaKotsuka

There we go. pretty funny story, i must admit, its not what you expect for the cover. Im not really a fan of sci.fic BUT if you want to read something new and fresh, its great 4.2/5

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tanu_sam

Nice story line but can I say the main character is crazy.....oh my God the things he like ....it was supposed to be serious but I literally find it funny🤣🤣. it is a very nice suggestion for Sc fi lovers

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eyaggelia146

Apart from a few grammatical errors the story has a good start. The book begins with the exploration of the main character's personality and the mental problems the loneliness has brought her. Nice flow,keep writing.

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Aks_

Ok so after reading the first few chapters I could tell that this is something unique unlike some of the other post-apocalyptic novels though I found that since it was a 3rd pov written book, there were a few details that could be described better. The phrasing could also be improved, while it's not bad... I believe it could be better, I would also like if you explained the surroundings in more detail to bring a better sense of imagination.

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Deborah_Pruijmboom

I have laughed my pants off. The main character is very funny. Before I started reading I had not expected as much. I love the fact that every characters was discribed so that the reader gets to know it right away. Overall it was a great read!

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PEARL_WANG

You write well. i liked how you described the character beforehand. The scene were interesting. Please keep doing great work. We need some clarity for the scenes and action. So far i have read it was good and amazing.

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sylverlight

I like the concept and how the characters and the world building is being introduced throughout the story. There's only a little bit of problem which are the grammatical errors and the punctuations.