1Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Author here, and I'm giving you an honest review! Writing Quality (4S) - The story progresses in the 3rd person narration and thoughts (' ')and spoken conversation (" ") are identifiable. Writing is polished before being published. Grammer is also taken into consideration. Stability of Updates (1S) - If you're the type of person who expects. Expect nothing when it comes to the frequency of the updates. It's dog water. But hey, at least it does update... in a month or year or so? Story Development (4S) - Narration is limited to what is only revealed to the readers via the characters conversing about it. Thoughts may be a small hint but undoubtedly, the conversation would be the time it would be revealed eventually. Nevertheless, Story Development is always the priority as well as Character Development. Character Design (3S) - Character Development as the story progress will be taken to account and register the events as the story undoubtedly continues. No character nor story of mine would just turn a quick 180 when something huge just occurred. I'm not trying to make an anime here! World Background (4S) - This is the priority. Because if I don't make this successful, this part here. The story becomes boring, void, and utterly wasted. So, I am working on this part. Especially. – Around Us Inside – P.S - if you are still reading till this part. Consider adding this to your libary! It will notify whenever there's an update. Also if you do enjoyed it, a Power Stone would be greatly appreciated :)
Author here, and I'm giving you an honest review! Writing Quality (4S) - The story progresses in the 3rd person narration and thoughts (' ')and spoken conversation (" ") are identifiable. Writing is polished before being published. Grammer is also taken into consideration. Stability of Updates (1S) - If you're the type of person who expects. Expect nothing when it comes to the frequency of the updates. It's dog water. But hey, at least it does update... in a month or year or so? Story Development (4S) - Narration is limited to what is only revealed to the readers via the characters conversing about it. Thoughts may be a small hint but undoubtedly, the conversation would be the time it would be revealed eventually. Nevertheless, Story Development is always the priority as well as Character Development. Character Design (3S) - Character Development as the story progress will be taken to account and register the events as the story undoubtedly continues. No character nor story of mine would just turn a quick 180 when something huge just occurred. I'm not trying to make an anime here! World Background (4S) - This is the priority. Because if I don't make this successful, this part here. The story becomes boring, void, and utterly wasted. So, I am working on this part. Especially. – Around Us Inside – P.S - if you are still reading till this part. Consider adding this to your libary! It will notify whenever there's an update. Also if you do enjoyed it, a Power Stone would be greatly appreciated :)