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I really enjoyed reading this! The story is great and it's not the usual love story! I also love how the author described every scene. I really like the funny parts! It kept me reading! I really, really recommend this, it's a fun-to-read story! Keep up the good work Chaya! 🥂😍
I am galling in love theee more I read. Keep going and drop lots of interesting plots and chapters!! I love this book and mostly I love you❤❤ I recommend this book to all...don't think twice and just go for it. It's awesome!!
Author, This is a fantastic book. I really loved it from the beginning all the way to the end! You are an amazing writer, and I can’t wait to read more. Keep up the amazing work!!! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! Have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
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Very interesting nd educating........when is the next part coming out💕🤗...... can't wait to finish the story....................................
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The first chapter manages to grab you with the quirkiness of the characters and the Premise of a girl who is *DETERMINED* to be a NASA worker, definitely sounds interesting right? The fact she also is completely disinterested in romantic relations also opens room for character growth into that area, I do think it's something you can easily find intriguing and look forward to from the start itself which is a good book opener for such a book as this! Over all, I think it's worth the read~ Enjoy everyone :>
loved this story amazing😃🥰😍🤩🤩🤩🤩😍🥰🤗keep writing and entertaining us god bless you🥰😍😍🤩🥳🥳🥰😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
AUTHOR UPDATE THE BOOK PLZZZZZ I LOVE THIS BOOK.....ITS AWESOME😍😍😍😍 and I m dreading the next part. I love John and Melan but I hate Ekectrica And Avery
The story is truly enjoyable! The comedy is alive, I love the humor. At first, I felt confused with the title and the synopsis but as I got to the chapters, I find this super interesting. Your writing is great, not many mistakes. There's nothing else I can say but to keep up the good work!
Thank you for this story Author. Great plot and buIlt up of emotions to greetings, frIction of the feelings, exploring curiosity to the characters knowing what they want and falling into the feelings. The narrative reflects the first experience both Melon and John amiably - *******, curiosity and the yearning to feel more. looking foward to see how John will deal with him parents decision for the family to travel versus Melon and Sam’s engagement how it will work out for them. Good job In describing the fight scene between their mothers - -another dimension to play with of family support will be key for John and Melon moving fwd. Well done and keep up the good work!
I really enjoy the idea of having the main character being obsessed with NASA and then finding love when she expected it the least. The plot is a bit predictable and there are some language mistakes that could be avoided. To the author: Keep working on your craft!
Interesting premise though I can't say much more since its just developing ATM. Cheers to you on more chapters soon! 👍👌👏Interesting premise though I can't say much more since its just developing ATM. Cheers to you on more chapters soon! 👍👌👏
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I like how it was written. Simple yet precise. Character's background description are okay and you didn't dump infos. You weave words nicely. Keep up the good work, bb ❤
great character development characters feel alive descriptions are great writing quality is good updates regular keeps you on the edge love it keep it up
I love the story and characters! The sentence structure and grammar need fixing, but it’s Such a good story! I’m gonna be so Mad if John moves to London! Their love is intense🥰
Spoiler de révélation You are doing great!! I absolutely loving the characters and the way you use them. Humour is awesome! I must say you are great!! Keep going! Best of luck! ❤❤❤
A great book to read❤️❤️ Just loved it! Plot, storyline, character building, everything is absolutely perfect! Just loved it from my heart!
I really like the story. Just by reading the 1st chapter, i was already hooked and constantly laughing as well as I read the next few chapters of the story. I like the character of Melan,and that moment in the bus with John is sooooo epic xD Highly recommended to read. <3 Keep up the good work author :)
This feels like reading watching a romcom on Netflix with a date. In other words, it's good, even if there's no funny business after the movie. Good job author and I hope to read more!
I can't stop laughing at these two women still fighting over petty things lol. It's just so funny. Haha. And the sweet love 😻😻😻 Makes me want to dupe myself in this novel. Author I love you
Love this book. It's a true romcom. I always love this kind of sweet love story and it's worth reading it. Characters r so realistically. Author u r just best.
Damn! this book keeps getting better day by day. I mean I started reading and just could not stop. I personally wants to kill Electrica and Avery. 😬😬😬😬😬 Guys don't let this book pass out. It's a story u all wanna read and it's worth it. Author u have my heart💘
Ma'am, u r already have many customers yet u still open ur shop 24h/day? Just don't forget about ur health and have enough sleep. 🙃 You also have many stockholders, so enjoy your life more. All right, back to ur book I read up to chap 19. The story is nice and HILARIOUS! 😂 I really like the mothers bickering each other with their funny behavior. 🤣 Even though they are the villain in ML and FL relationships... ML is cool and charismatic while FL is a late bloomer. 😅 Rom-com teen parody and drama, somehow I can get ur reference from many movies. 😃 Written beautifully and funny that u want to read more. Recommended. Instant library. Keep up the good work. 😄
A sweet story. Light and Fun to read. Overall the development is nice. Considering authors first work it has great potential. A nice romance is hardly found on webnovel so my well wishes.
For me writing a book is like weaving; When the threads are spun tight, everything else will come out right. The author has spun the threads of this book so well that I am absolutely in love with it!! Great work author ❤️😊
I really enjoyed reading this! The story is great and it's not the usual love story! I also love how the author described every scene. I really like the funny parts! It kept me reading! I really, really recommend this, it's a fun-to-read story! Keep up the good work Chaya! 🥂😍
I am galling in love theee more I read. Keep going and drop lots of interesting plots and chapters!! I love this book and mostly I love you❤❤ I recommend this book to all...don't think twice and just go for it. It's awesome!!
Author, This is a fantastic book. I really loved it from the beginning all the way to the end! You are an amazing writer, and I can’t wait to read more. Keep up the amazing work!!! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! Have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
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Very interesting nd educating........when is the next part coming out💕🤗...... can't wait to finish the story....................................
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The first chapter manages to grab you with the quirkiness of the characters and the Premise of a girl who is *DETERMINED* to be a NASA worker, definitely sounds interesting right? The fact she also is completely disinterested in romantic relations also opens room for character growth into that area, I do think it's something you can easily find intriguing and look forward to from the start itself which is a good book opener for such a book as this! Over all, I think it's worth the read~ Enjoy everyone :>
loved this story amazing😃🥰😍🤩🤩🤩🤩😍🥰🤗keep writing and entertaining us god bless you🥰😍😍🤩🥳🥳🥰😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
AUTHOR UPDATE THE BOOK PLZZZZZ I LOVE THIS BOOK.....ITS AWESOME😍😍😍😍 and I m dreading the next part. I love John and Melan but I hate Ekectrica And Avery
The story is truly enjoyable! The comedy is alive, I love the humor. At first, I felt confused with the title and the synopsis but as I got to the chapters, I find this super interesting. Your writing is great, not many mistakes. There's nothing else I can say but to keep up the good work!
Thank you for this story Author. Great plot and buIlt up of emotions to greetings, frIction of the feelings, exploring curiosity to the characters knowing what they want and falling into the feelings. The narrative reflects the first experience both Melon and John amiably - *******, curiosity and the yearning to feel more. looking foward to see how John will deal with him parents decision for the family to travel versus Melon and Sam’s engagement how it will work out for them. Good job In describing the fight scene between their mothers - -another dimension to play with of family support will be key for John and Melon moving fwd. Well done and keep up the good work!
I really enjoy the idea of having the main character being obsessed with NASA and then finding love when she expected it the least. The plot is a bit predictable and there are some language mistakes that could be avoided. To the author: Keep working on your craft!
Interesting premise though I can't say much more since its just developing ATM. Cheers to you on more chapters soon! 👍👌👏Interesting premise though I can't say much more since its just developing ATM. Cheers to you on more chapters soon! 👍👌👏
Spoiler de révélation I like how it was written. Simple yet precise. Character's background description are okay and you didn't dump infos. You weave words nicely. Keep up the good work, bb ❤
great character development characters feel alive descriptions are great writing quality is good updates regular keeps you on the edge love it keep it up
I love the story and characters! The sentence structure and grammar need fixing, but it’s Such a good story! I’m gonna be so Mad if John moves to London! Their love is intense🥰
Spoiler de révélation You are doing great!! I absolutely loving the characters and the way you use them. Humour is awesome! I must say you are great!! Keep going! Best of luck! ❤❤❤
A great book to read❤️❤️ Just loved it! Plot, storyline, character building, everything is absolutely perfect! Just loved it from my heart!
I really like the story. Just by reading the 1st chapter, i was already hooked and constantly laughing as well as I read the next few chapters of the story. I like the character of Melan,and that moment in the bus with John is sooooo epic xD Highly recommended to read. <3 Keep up the good work author :)
This feels like reading watching a romcom on Netflix with a date. In other words, it's good, even if there's no funny business after the movie. Good job author and I hope to read more!
I can't stop laughing at these two women still fighting over petty things lol. It's just so funny. Haha. And the sweet love 😻😻😻 Makes me want to dupe myself in this novel. Author I love you
Love this book. It's a true romcom. I always love this kind of sweet love story and it's worth reading it. Characters r so realistically. Author u r just best.
Damn! this book keeps getting better day by day. I mean I started reading and just could not stop. I personally wants to kill Electrica and Avery. 😬😬😬😬😬 Guys don't let this book pass out. It's a story u all wanna read and it's worth it. Author u have my heart💘
Ma'am, u r already have many customers yet u still open ur shop 24h/day? Just don't forget about ur health and have enough sleep. 🙃 You also have many stockholders, so enjoy your life more. All right, back to ur book I read up to chap 19. The story is nice and HILARIOUS! 😂 I really like the mothers bickering each other with their funny behavior. 🤣 Even though they are the villain in ML and FL relationships... ML is cool and charismatic while FL is a late bloomer. 😅 Rom-com teen parody and drama, somehow I can get ur reference from many movies. 😃 Written beautifully and funny that u want to read more. Recommended. Instant library. Keep up the good work. 😄
A sweet story. Light and Fun to read. Overall the development is nice. Considering authors first work it has great potential. A nice romance is hardly found on webnovel so my well wishes.
For me writing a book is like weaving; When the threads are spun tight, everything else will come out right. The author has spun the threads of this book so well that I am absolutely in love with it!! Great work author ❤️😊