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Hi! I’m still waiting for your reply. If your are interested in our international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *) for more details.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
Come and create your own suspense stories and thrillers !!! Hey! Come and check out our Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, where your hard work and talent pay off. If you like suspense stories and thrillers or stories of these sorts, the contest is your world to run. You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. This might be your chance to begin your writing career, and we have a financial support program for every entry. Moreover, you stand the chance to win the big cash! For more information, you may email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Nice novel, good character development, grammar and world building. Not boring either as the pratoganist has quirky thoughts going on and off in his mind would recommend
I really like this story. Hopefully the author gets some kind of contract pretty soon so we get more updates. Some random text because webnovel require it,
I love postapocalyptic theme as dungeon theme. (So here i'm doing my part.) The story is great and the world amazing but the only thing that is lacking (at least for now and apart for the release rate of the chapters but that's ok i can wait) is the fact the other characters are not as developed as they should be maybe due to only a few chapter released so let's say that if you want to relax this one is made for you.
this is amazing 🤯🤯🤯 .....................................................................................................................
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Review edit: The writing style and quality is best bout the novel. Story development comes along with quality and its also good. Character design is great. Updating stability i think is at its finest. World background is amazing and pretty unique.
Writing quality is amazing. Story development is so good and nice. Character design is also cool. Stability I dunno wat to say. World background is perfecto
This is an amazing story ❤ 👏, it is in my top ten novels. I like how the author shows the main characters thoughts😊 😊 😊 😊😊 👍 👍 👍 👍
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey hey Pwnzer, it is I The Tormentor~!!!!! Coming here to drop this review to get this story going. Isn't this normally the authors job? But oh well lets get this started. This story is about a kid who's sent to a parallel earth where the planet got nuked and beast rule the world and humans hide under ground like the worms the great monster think they are. That is until the mc switches with his parallel self and kills a monster, gets experimented on and... We'll see about that later. Oh and they're are others like the mc who have powers called exalted and live above ground and fight the monsters
Hi! I’m still waiting for your reply. If your are interested in our international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *) for more details.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
Come and create your own suspense stories and thrillers !!! Hey! Come and check out our Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, where your hard work and talent pay off. If you like suspense stories and thrillers or stories of these sorts, the contest is your world to run. You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. This might be your chance to begin your writing career, and we have a financial support program for every entry. Moreover, you stand the chance to win the big cash! For more information, you may email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
Nice novel, good character development, grammar and world building. Not boring either as the pratoganist has quirky thoughts going on and off in his mind would recommend
I really like this story. Hopefully the author gets some kind of contract pretty soon so we get more updates. Some random text because webnovel require it,
I love postapocalyptic theme as dungeon theme. (So here i'm doing my part.) The story is great and the world amazing but the only thing that is lacking (at least for now and apart for the release rate of the chapters but that's ok i can wait) is the fact the other characters are not as developed as they should be maybe due to only a few chapter released so let's say that if you want to relax this one is made for you.
this is amazing 🤯🤯🤯 .....................................................................................................................
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing
Review edit: The writing style and quality is best bout the novel. Story development comes along with quality and its also good. Character design is great. Updating stability i think is at its finest. World background is amazing and pretty unique.
Writing quality is amazing. Story development is so good and nice. Character design is also cool. Stability I dunno wat to say. World background is perfecto
This is an amazing story ❤ 👏, it is in my top ten novels. I like how the author shows the main characters thoughts😊 😊 😊 😊😊 👍 👍 👍 👍
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey hey Pwnzer, it is I The Tormentor~!!!!! Coming here to drop this review to get this story going. Isn't this normally the authors job? But oh well lets get this started. This story is about a kid who's sent to a parallel earth where the planet got nuked and beast rule the world and humans hide under ground like the worms the great monster think they are. That is until the mc switches with his parallel self and kills a monster, gets experimented on and... We'll see about that later. Oh and they're are others like the mc who have powers called exalted and live above ground and fight the monsters