5Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I'm really amazed by the book, ur storyline is really good and unique, I just came across it book and I'm amazed by it! keep up the good work
I am impressed by the idea of the story. Although the narration is a bit tedious. But the idea of the story tops everything out for me. A protector of the people who will protect the dharma. A novel idea.
The story is awesome, as you see the character is developing from chapter to chapter and the Adhaya is shield of her brothers even in this young age as well.
I read this story and the character Aadhya is insteresting and quite natural If compared to other characters. And the character development is consistent as well as the journey.
I love the concept of introducing Aadhya into the story. Introduction of a female character in a male dominated story adds beauty to the storyline
I'm really amazed by the book, ur storyline is really good and unique, I just came across it book and I'm amazed by it! keep up the good work
I am impressed by the idea of the story. Although the narration is a bit tedious. But the idea of the story tops everything out for me. A protector of the people who will protect the dharma. A novel idea.
The story is awesome, as you see the character is developing from chapter to chapter and the Adhaya is shield of her brothers even in this young age as well.
I read this story and the character Aadhya is insteresting and quite natural If compared to other characters. And the character development is consistent as well as the journey.
I love the concept of introducing Aadhya into the story. Introduction of a female character in a male dominated story adds beauty to the storyline