Creating My Own Army (on hold)

LV 3

IvenaClaresta

Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very good

LV 12

moises_vahn

Mc dominante pero nececitamos mas retos.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

LV 5

TintedvCeo

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LV 14

yokedjaguar

It's an alright concept it's just that you suck at english and grammar. Their was literally a misspelled word or some type of grammar problem in every paragraph. I'm not overreacting, after I noticed it I started to really focus on that and it was always a misspelled word, no uppercase, the sentence just being incoherent. You should take a break or hiatus to get at least your grammar up to an higher level.

LV 3

AllFiction

Written in Google Translate. For not having read the work, I have no right to give a rating lower than 5 Stars, as I will only say one thing here. I am afraid of this 'Unique Couple' that may exist for the MC, because most of the time, the authors choose the worst girl and leave the best out ... this is irritating and depressing to see. I'll keep it in my library until I find someone talking about who's going to be his Pair.

LV 4

Uchiha_Tenshi

Its a very good book and I cant wait for more chapters and I hope the author is okay and safe

LV 12

Evann_Clarke

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LV 4

Shadow_XYZ

Yow don't drop this one(And I'm also here for the exp xiao!)

LV 10

Lukeskydrinker

Bla bla bla blachy w dniu jutrzejszym czasie rzeczywistym się do mnie 55744-monster-musume-no-oishasan i tak jest to bardzo dobry punkt widzenia i tak jest to bardzo dobry punkt widzenia i nie wiem czy nie wiem co z tego powodu nie wiem co z tego co wiem czy nie jest w porządku dziennym na stronie 55 w tym tygodniu i w sumie nic się w dniu wczorajszym terminie od razu po co to znaczy to w #everything is random#

LV 13

Reykun

Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

LV 4

DuncanIneau

Its amazing thank you its Billions times better than your other novel that i readed from the begining to end i want moar !!!! I just want more chapter because reading it give me so much fun and all !!

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LV 4

Overlord_1000

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LV 4

ANANTA

To Author, Hope MC stays in Naruto world as like an Home-World(coz he can't just go through every world stay for few like Nomad - He needs a place to return after job) For he has almost collected the most strongest Jutsus and Arts, atleast after the war make him collect all jutsus, Sage Arts and other Arts of the Shinobi World and Put into a book with different types also teach them all about it. Bringing all the Shinobi's, Samurai's and Sage Mountains areas into one place to make into a country(NINSHU/WARRIOR CREED Country) also teach them about Mana too about magic in a way a warrior would use. But would still take jobs from other countries like they Shinobi's used to., but without any clans but put in people unity as 1 single clan and leader will be the one who is strongest as well as Intelligent rest as the system as always with helpers/adviors as council, not put everything into leader but in divisions to make the leader, council and country run more efficiently. *Also preserves nature together with all people teach how to preserve it make the planet rich in all aspects of energy, use tech&Science without harming Nature and it's Planet (for we could see in Boruto-Series taking the Development like Earth also take this as note to teach people where he goes to differnent worlds) so the people could live healthy and the planet would be habitual for eternally(by a wish to Lucis) to not make the Planet like Planet-Earth So to say MC becomes the Master of all. A Master like figure who guides and teach's people like a GRANDMASTER WOULD. Along as his World Guardian Job! Thanks- Reader.

LV 12

Shujinko_Josei

8 months 'on a breaks'... i'ill dropped this. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

LV 13

Tacosrule123

I like the story very much so far. It is not slow paced and it gives a lot of details revolving around different worlds that he is exposed to be defending. However, I believe he dropped this, since their has not been a new chapter in a while.

LV 5

Rex_Salamander

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