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I'm not rating my story yet I'm announcing about this story. for those who read my story, you can see that the chapters are deleted. the reason is this story is under revision. I'm working on revising my chapters but the end of the week so I could release the update chapters. please be patient with the new chapters that I'll release, hopefully on Sunday! I'll make it up to you guys! I love you all so much and peace out!
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Havent read it and probably wont read it, but since its based in Korea, why not use the proper way for names? Jeon Misoo and Kim Taehyung, I mean... its really weird since ur basing the novel on a country but names are reversed.
You should really check this book out, you won't regret doing so. I'm in love with this book, got hooked since chapter one. Good job author with the story line and it's development. Keep those chapters Rollin🙌🙌
So far so good! Carry on releasing please! I can't wait to read more of it! 100% recommend!! damn it word count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Soooo It's going great so far. Of course I still need to read more chapters but I an tell that your story has potential! The main character I feel has a lot to face in the future and she's in for it! Can't wait for updates!
Fantasy genre is my favorite in terms of books and movies, which means I have a high standard on reviewing this kind of stories. The story was very well thought of, the characters was well developed but still need some time in order to make the readers care for them, while the world which is the most important part of fantasy genre books and movies is kinda lacking. Yes theres some parts where you are able to tell us what it was but i suggest to make it more alive, let the characters spend more time with the world and try exploring it. Overall this was a great book! Good job for the author
I really am intrigued by your story plot. The story is very interesting. The chapters plot development so far is good and I want to keep reading it. Please Keep writing and keep it up!!
This is a very interesting novel. The groundwork of the story has laid smoothly, and the writing style has brought out the persona of each character. I hope the author keeps writing. I highly recommend this story.
It is a good novel, but there is a bunch of grammatical errors that can confuse the readers for a while. The first chapter will quickly pique a reader's interest and the flow of the story is good. Other than the grammatical errors, all is good.
The story is very interesting and it is very catchy but one thing I notice is the grammatical errors and the form of sentence that should revised but its minimal. over all its great story! Keep it up. I hope you could update more chapter.
Nice and very interesting novel. I liked it's story development and character design. Hope for regular updates. Keep it up. And make sure to release new chapters regularly 😁
great character development characters feel alive descriptions are great writing quality is beyond good updates regular keeps you on the edge love it keep it up
wonder what is her dream? The suspense is all over this book! Nobody can hear of it if you aren't read this. Truly a one of a kind! Good job with your imagination!
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Nice story, cool development, Awesome character design. KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPP GOING
You've got a good base for the story, I wonder how will it go? Gets me curious, really. I hope this story will be successful. Oh wonder what Jeon Minsoo's fate would be. Gotta see I guess.
The story was good, it really interesting and my kind of genre but what I notice is the complexity or the sentences and the grammar. The update was stable, it didn't missed a day which is good. Good job Author-nim! I hope to see another interesting story!
Pace of the story is just right, portrayal of character and grammar can improve. There is balance between fantasy and reality. Update stability is good.
Hello guys! this is my very first story in Webnovel so I'm so excited about this! Please check this out and have fun reading the story and again, Don't be a silent reader! I want to know your thoughts. I love you guys! 💋
I'm not rating my story yet I'm announcing about this story. for those who read my story, you can see that the chapters are deleted. the reason is this story is under revision. I'm working on revising my chapters but the end of the week so I could release the update chapters. please be patient with the new chapters that I'll release, hopefully on Sunday! I'll make it up to you guys! I love you all so much and peace out!
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Spoiler de révélation Havent read it and probably wont read it, but since its based in Korea, why not use the proper way for names? Jeon Misoo and Kim Taehyung, I mean... its really weird since ur basing the novel on a country but names are reversed.
You should really check this book out, you won't regret doing so. I'm in love with this book, got hooked since chapter one. Good job author with the story line and it's development. Keep those chapters Rollin🙌🙌
So far so good! Carry on releasing please! I can't wait to read more of it! 100% recommend!! damn it word count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Soooo It's going great so far. Of course I still need to read more chapters but I an tell that your story has potential! The main character I feel has a lot to face in the future and she's in for it! Can't wait for updates!
Fantasy genre is my favorite in terms of books and movies, which means I have a high standard on reviewing this kind of stories. The story was very well thought of, the characters was well developed but still need some time in order to make the readers care for them, while the world which is the most important part of fantasy genre books and movies is kinda lacking. Yes theres some parts where you are able to tell us what it was but i suggest to make it more alive, let the characters spend more time with the world and try exploring it. Overall this was a great book! Good job for the author
I really am intrigued by your story plot. The story is very interesting. The chapters plot development so far is good and I want to keep reading it. Please Keep writing and keep it up!!
This is a very interesting novel. The groundwork of the story has laid smoothly, and the writing style has brought out the persona of each character. I hope the author keeps writing. I highly recommend this story.
It is a good novel, but there is a bunch of grammatical errors that can confuse the readers for a while. The first chapter will quickly pique a reader's interest and the flow of the story is good. Other than the grammatical errors, all is good.
The story is very interesting and it is very catchy but one thing I notice is the grammatical errors and the form of sentence that should revised but its minimal. over all its great story! Keep it up. I hope you could update more chapter.
Nice and very interesting novel. I liked it's story development and character design. Hope for regular updates. Keep it up. And make sure to release new chapters regularly 😁
great character development characters feel alive descriptions are great writing quality is beyond good updates regular keeps you on the edge love it keep it up
wonder what is her dream? The suspense is all over this book! Nobody can hear of it if you aren't read this. Truly a one of a kind! Good job with your imagination!
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Spoiler de révélation Nice story, cool development, Awesome character design. KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPP GOING
You've got a good base for the story, I wonder how will it go? Gets me curious, really. I hope this story will be successful. Oh wonder what Jeon Minsoo's fate would be. Gotta see I guess.
The story was good, it really interesting and my kind of genre but what I notice is the complexity or the sentences and the grammar. The update was stable, it didn't missed a day which is good. Good job Author-nim! I hope to see another interesting story!
Pace of the story is just right, portrayal of character and grammar can improve. There is balance between fantasy and reality. Update stability is good.
Hello guys! this is my very first story in Webnovel so I'm so excited about this! Please check this out and have fun reading the story and again, Don't be a silent reader! I want to know your thoughts. I love you guys! 💋