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there is nothing to say apart from AMAZINNNNnG . the updating is stable and the main character is not following now li up and down like a dog 🐶, and everything fits into the story
There's very few grammar mistakes, the characters, background and all have no plotholes and are actually original unlike many fanfics. There's may be a harem who knows but the point is the mc doesn't think with his d*ck. He may be influenced by it but it doesn't lead him to make stupid decisions like Yun Che from ATG. Overall, a good story, only the rate of updates has to speed up and everything else is good
the story has a lot of potential and the grammar is okay, a few spelling mistakes here and there but it's accessible. the story has a titan of an mc who comes from douluo dalu and 33 heavens. don't know much more than that as it'll spoil it. it's a good read, please do try it
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Just read the synopsis and it said “find love and lose love”. Just wanna be clear before I start, there is no ntr right? It looks like this is gonna be a good fanfic but I can’t take being tricked into reading another ntr story man 😔
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there is nothing to say apart from AMAZINNNNnG . the updating is stable and the main character is not following now li up and down like a dog 🐶, and everything fits into the story
There's very few grammar mistakes, the characters, background and all have no plotholes and are actually original unlike many fanfics. There's may be a harem who knows but the point is the mc doesn't think with his d*ck. He may be influenced by it but it doesn't lead him to make stupid decisions like Yun Che from ATG. Overall, a good story, only the rate of updates has to speed up and everything else is good
the story has a lot of potential and the grammar is okay, a few spelling mistakes here and there but it's accessible. the story has a titan of an mc who comes from douluo dalu and 33 heavens. don't know much more than that as it'll spoil it. it's a good read, please do try it
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Just read the synopsis and it said “find love and lose love”. Just wanna be clear before I start, there is no ntr right? It looks like this is gonna be a good fanfic but I can’t take being tricked into reading another ntr story man 😔