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Great story the Mc look fun to watch,i just hope this Mc does not have same fate as other female Mc like other novel,no matter how strong they are they always lose to male character and the mfu**ink male just to have cold eye to win.What bull$**t.
it was good and the story was a bit predictable but good.[img=update][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap]
I love the story line so much and I am just waiting for the protatonist to show everyone who’s boss. I love how the story is written, especially the characters.
2nd review chap 160ish Overall : great work Everytime I read the lucky wheel stuff I see 10000000 ways for the story to go wrong and trash. But it have been fine so far ? im surprised. good job author.
nice story unique background and characters especially Princess snake clan is awesome more poison better and faceslap[img=update][img=faceslap]
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The main character is so deviously funny. It's highly entertaining and I love the world it created! I had to binge the whole story at once. It was just so enjoyable.
W a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h...Worth reading 💕💕💕.
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This book will keep you on you toes. It is towards being faced paced, exciting and wonderful. Characters are definite. You will catch yourself doing double takes at certain events and it is hard at time very hard to anticipate what will happen next.
I'm sooo proud of you. I love this book such that I cant even describe it. it's got a different feel because they arent humans but still have a caste system in there. and it shows a different form of love, les baby!!!!! well more of bi or pan, we dont know since she didn't identify but she did fall and get in bed with her fiance's ex fiance sooooo😂😂😂😅👍. the writing quality is bae and the story makes it seem as though she is destined to become OP but we always forget and get absorbed in the fact that shes in danger. also I'm happy that her relationship with her family isn't something face value. it's like her dad isn't completely bad but just not really worthy of her love. we know it's a dog eat dog world but it's quite clear that's not everything. and sorry Xander, I was always rooting for Charlotte😆❤. great job author. *chefs kiss*
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This is a really good novel. I would 100% recommend you to give this story a chance. The updating stability is good and there are no grammer mistakes. The story devolopent is average which is a good thing, and the character designs are really good. (Note for author: You are missing the fantasy tag.)
I just finished binging this, and all I can say is that I am in love with this story and it’s amazing world/character building. I cannot recommend this enough!!
wow I must say that this author is one out of the million best author in the world and I must say that I am amazed and was totally happy when I read this novel congratulation author you deserve the best I was happy to read this novel and are willing to check it out every day I must say I rate it to the fullest that it could ever go if it have more to rate I would have done that too I must encourage the author to. write more no els and may they .do all the best to get the best in the future thank you for letting me comment 🏆😊🏆🏆🏆
I love Yolohy's works. So far I have never been disappointed. This one follows that same vein for me. I have always liked fantasy, and I think Yolohy has done a great job with this one. Please read it if you are thinking about it, I am sure you will like it as I have. Keep up the great work Yolohy, I am always excited when i see you release something new.
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I love this story! The character development of the main character is fantastic, but what makes it even better is the development of the cast and world around her. I absolutely love her and Charlotte's developing relationship (Sorry Xander I prefer the ladyship) and I can't wait to see where Tang Yue's ambition will take her next!! My current favorite webnovel!
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By far my favorite heroine so far. she never gives up in the face of such adversity. Each charpter is worth reading and adds to the storyline. keep up the good work.
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Lol. Tang Yue not only has Xander have feelings for her, Charlotte does too. Tang Yue is caught in a love triangle and she doesn't know what to do. The system and the old man really likes to screw with her.
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I loved this novel so much, First novel i actually spent Coins to read and im not disappointed at all; i cant wait to continue readIng The rest Of it. i get bored easily with cliches etc so i Never felt the Need to continue reading Many novels on here for coins. This is a Gem.
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This story surprisIngly hooked my imagination and made me laugh. I have very interesting mental images inspiring some funny moments ! I would read this author again.
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Tang Yue is currently in disguise and meets the father of the person she is pretending to impersonate. Tang Yue is actually surprised that the father actually loves his daughter despite her lack of talents, compared to her real father and family that treated her like trash.
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The story is progressing really well, and your really good at reading, I love the character development and how you though of a unique way to level up is awesome. However, it would be better if you could post a bit more often.
Great story the Mc look fun to watch,i just hope this Mc does not have same fate as other female Mc like other novel,no matter how strong they are they always lose to male character and the mfu**ink male just to have cold eye to win.What bull$**t.
it was good and the story was a bit predictable but good.[img=update][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap]
I love the story line so much and I am just waiting for the protatonist to show everyone who’s boss. I love how the story is written, especially the characters.
2nd review chap 160ish Overall : great work Everytime I read the lucky wheel stuff I see 10000000 ways for the story to go wrong and trash. But it have been fine so far ? im surprised. good job author.
nice story unique background and characters especially Princess snake clan is awesome more poison better and faceslap[img=update][img=faceslap]
I enjoy reading All your novels author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The main character is so deviously funny. It's highly entertaining and I love the world it created! I had to binge the whole story at once. It was just so enjoyable.
W a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h h...Worth reading 💕💕💕.
Spoiler de révélation This book will keep you on you toes. It is towards being faced paced, exciting and wonderful. Characters are definite. You will catch yourself doing double takes at certain events and it is hard at time very hard to anticipate what will happen next.
I'm sooo proud of you. I love this book such that I cant even describe it. it's got a different feel because they arent humans but still have a caste system in there. and it shows a different form of love, les baby!!!!! well more of bi or pan, we dont know since she didn't identify but she did fall and get in bed with her fiance's ex fiance sooooo😂😂😂😅👍. the writing quality is bae and the story makes it seem as though she is destined to become OP but we always forget and get absorbed in the fact that shes in danger. also I'm happy that her relationship with her family isn't something face value. it's like her dad isn't completely bad but just not really worthy of her love. we know it's a dog eat dog world but it's quite clear that's not everything. and sorry Xander, I was always rooting for Charlotte😆❤. great job author. *chefs kiss*
Spoiler de révélation This is a really good novel. I would 100% recommend you to give this story a chance. The updating stability is good and there are no grammer mistakes. The story devolopent is average which is a good thing, and the character designs are really good. (Note for author: You are missing the fantasy tag.)
I just finished binging this, and all I can say is that I am in love with this story and it’s amazing world/character building. I cannot recommend this enough!!
wow I must say that this author is one out of the million best author in the world and I must say that I am amazed and was totally happy when I read this novel congratulation author you deserve the best I was happy to read this novel and are willing to check it out every day I must say I rate it to the fullest that it could ever go if it have more to rate I would have done that too I must encourage the author to. write more no els and may they .do all the best to get the best in the future thank you for letting me comment 🏆😊🏆🏆🏆
I love Yolohy's works. So far I have never been disappointed. This one follows that same vein for me. I have always liked fantasy, and I think Yolohy has done a great job with this one. Please read it if you are thinking about it, I am sure you will like it as I have. Keep up the great work Yolohy, I am always excited when i see you release something new.
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I love this story! The character development of the main character is fantastic, but what makes it even better is the development of the cast and world around her. I absolutely love her and Charlotte's developing relationship (Sorry Xander I prefer the ladyship) and I can't wait to see where Tang Yue's ambition will take her next!! My current favorite webnovel!
Spoiler de révélation By far my favorite heroine so far. she never gives up in the face of such adversity. Each charpter is worth reading and adds to the storyline. keep up the good work.
love it.....................................................................................................................................
Lol. Tang Yue not only has Xander have feelings for her, Charlotte does too. Tang Yue is caught in a love triangle and she doesn't know what to do. The system and the old man really likes to screw with her.
Spoiler de révélation Amazing Story!!! Amazing Story!!!Amazing Story!!! Amazing Story!!! Amazing Story!!! Amazing Story!!! Amazing Story!!! Amazing Story!!! Amazing Story!!!
I loved this novel so much, First novel i actually spent Coins to read and im not disappointed at all; i cant wait to continue readIng The rest Of it. i get bored easily with cliches etc so i Never felt the Need to continue reading Many novels on here for coins. This is a Gem.
LOVE IT love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it
This story surprisIngly hooked my imagination and made me laugh. I have very interesting mental images inspiring some funny moments ! I would read this author again.
LOVE IT love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it love it
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Tang Yue is currently in disguise and meets the father of the person she is pretending to impersonate. Tang Yue is actually surprised that the father actually loves his daughter despite her lack of talents, compared to her real father and family that treated her like trash.
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The story is progressing really well, and your really good at reading, I love the character development and how you though of a unique way to level up is awesome. However, it would be better if you could post a bit more often.