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Beautifully written, with such interesting characters. You have a way of storytelling where words come alive. Solid plot.What more I can say? Good job!
I'll have to say, the synopsis was the first that got. It was would I say unique. The plot is a master piece and the character designe is just outstanding. Author you're really talented.. keep doing what you're doing ❤️
The story is so good.. Characters are well designed.. Only problem is Author stopped writing.. I hope you will take some time and continue writing
This story is outstanding. The characters to the plot. wonderfully written. Where are the remaining chapters???? Please [img=recommend] You are an exceptional storyteller. keep up the good work.
The author crafted this story with a beautiful imagination! Imagine having this kind of power that increases its intensity day by day! What a great job on plotting it out so wonderful!
i really like your book Author!I loved the fact how you separated the lines with another line.I also really like the plot.BTW I LOVE THE COVER IT'S FROM THE ANIME "Brother's Conflict" right?Anyways good luck to you Author!
there are so many twists and turns in this novel. I like them, author when ate you going to let them know they are destined mates.. more updates please
I am following this book from quite a long time. your way of writing is unique dear author. only concern is update regularly even if it one chapter per day.. Best wishes
Amazing plot, characters and design. I really like it so keep up the good work, cause I can only say it has great potential!!!! I love it!!!
I like supernatural novel most.. For a 18 year old girl, Carla is so matured and calm.. I like her thinking so much, we will not get anything by dwelling in the past.. Good work author!
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I liked it. I was hooked after three chapters. The flow of the plot is very interesting and the main character is my favorite, she is so cool, I’m full of her optimism. I would like to see more dialogues between narrative and description. But it is a quite nice read. Please keep up the hard work author, I can’t wait for more releases.
I like the the FL's description. She is just cool, yet a lot is going on with her. I would really look forward to see how she grows in the further chapters. Good job author.😉
I'm really enjoying the story as it's developing and watching the characters develop. I can tell that English isn't your first language, it's more obvious in the beginning so kudo's for the improvement! Overall I'm loving the story.
Interesting plot and characters! The only drawback is that there are grammatical errors that did occasionally break up the flow while reading. With some editing this will be even better. 👌🏾🙂
I've read stories about werewolves before and I love them. I must tell you that you are doing a very good job. Your storytelling is fresh and fluid. It makes me want to keep reading more and more. Congratulations!
If you are in the comments trying to decide whether to read this story, here is my honest opinion: beginning to read I found a synopsis original that urges me to want to know more, without doubts. I really like the FL. The characterizations of the characters are concrete and well related. The descriptions of the surroundings and the situation are accurate. The plot is clear in the synopsis and the chapters do not skimp on the story. There is definitely an inspired author here with a great story to tell ... Continue like this author! I am a new reader of this story.[img=recommend]
Hi author, upon reading your book I noticed some errors but I do not want to go further noticing all your mistakes. But the plot seemed nice and engaging readers to read more, your characters seemed well described especially their history or background, overall it's nice to read since the paragraph breaks makes it easy to read.
This is a very great novel. The author's dedication is easily reflected. I was hooked since the beginning. If you're interested in Romance Fantasy with a unique storyline, then this is for you. :)
The synopsis is quite good.. Your grammar and vocabulary is so good author.. I am curious how you will introduce two male leads to the female.. Carla is very strong yet calm
The story and the concept the author has chosen are well portrayed and it pulls the readers into it right away. The writing is understandable, but there are some grammatical errors. However, this does not hinder the flow of the story. Also, instead of making each sentence as a paragraph, try to make the paragraphs bigger and give descriptions wherever possible. Whenever there is a conversation taking place, try to put the dialogs in " " so that the readers do not get confused. Other than these, I have no other issues with the novel. Keep up the good work author. All the best.
Romance is not my cup of tea, but I always give an honest review. Your story is really good and captivating. You know how to get a reader hooked onto the story. Your character descriptions are really good too. I like your writing style, although you have a few grammar mistakes. And one thing to remember, because I used to make this mistake a lot. Capitalize your frist word in dialogue unless the dialogue goes on in a sentence. Examples: He looked around, confused at where he was at, and spoke out, “Hello, is anyone here?” “Your eyes are,” the man observed, finding the right words to say, “are captivating.” Other than that you are doing a good job!
Whoa! this is a great one. I am not done with all the chapters yet and I am not a fan of werewolves type of books, but this one caught me! so so good!
The tension when reading in this novel is well done by the author. There are tense mistakes that are easily fixed. Overall, if you are into good characters and a mystery, this one is for you!
Perfectly demonstrated character and world development. Readers can hook up on the book in no time so I can recommend this great story to anyone who likes new stuff.
I feel that since the chapter 1 , the author was able to give a good character build and it ultimately positively affected the story line. The story is very interesting. Keep up the good work
So far so good! Please carry on writing! Can't wait to read more! Recommend 100% Damn you word count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I already read half the book and I really find it addicting and.intruguing at the same time. The story is really great at the start and it only gets better as time goes on. Continue the hard work author!
Very good start. I liked Carla very much. Her relationship with the wolf was also cute. Sassy is good as the villain and I really didn't like her. The only issue I had with this story is that everything is only 1 line long. After reading it for a while it kinda hurts the eyes so just change that and it will read better. Carla having red eyes is nice but I wish we could get a little bit more of a description of how she looks. It works very well as a short read between classes, when there's a break at work, or you're on a commute. Also, good work!
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The synopsis and story description is really quite interesting and attractive. The story plot and pace is also very good. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon...... Looking forward to it....
The story has a lovely dovey start and I like it very much:) I just wondering if the werewolf may be her future boyfriend? Even though it kinda cute now where i am reading now. Pretty immersive and I want to read more.
Hey author the plot is so nice.. There are time I was on edge while reading the chapters.. I like Carla being so optimistic unlike other lead characters
Beautifully written, with such interesting characters. You have a way of storytelling where words come alive. Solid plot.What more I can say? Good job!
I'll have to say, the synopsis was the first that got. It was would I say unique. The plot is a master piece and the character designe is just outstanding. Author you're really talented.. keep doing what you're doing ❤️
The story is so good.. Characters are well designed.. Only problem is Author stopped writing.. I hope you will take some time and continue writing
This story is outstanding. The characters to the plot. wonderfully written. Where are the remaining chapters???? Please [img=recommend] You are an exceptional storyteller. keep up the good work.
The author crafted this story with a beautiful imagination! Imagine having this kind of power that increases its intensity day by day! What a great job on plotting it out so wonderful!
i really like your book Author!I loved the fact how you separated the lines with another line.I also really like the plot.BTW I LOVE THE COVER IT'S FROM THE ANIME "Brother's Conflict" right?Anyways good luck to you Author!
there are so many twists and turns in this novel. I like them, author when ate you going to let them know they are destined mates.. more updates please
I am following this book from quite a long time. your way of writing is unique dear author. only concern is update regularly even if it one chapter per day.. Best wishes
Amazing plot, characters and design. I really like it so keep up the good work, cause I can only say it has great potential!!!! I love it!!!
I like supernatural novel most.. For a 18 year old girl, Carla is so matured and calm.. I like her thinking so much, we will not get anything by dwelling in the past.. Good work author!
Spoiler de révélation I liked it. I was hooked after three chapters. The flow of the plot is very interesting and the main character is my favorite, she is so cool, I’m full of her optimism. I would like to see more dialogues between narrative and description. But it is a quite nice read. Please keep up the hard work author, I can’t wait for more releases.
I like the the FL's description. She is just cool, yet a lot is going on with her. I would really look forward to see how she grows in the further chapters. Good job author.😉
I'm really enjoying the story as it's developing and watching the characters develop. I can tell that English isn't your first language, it's more obvious in the beginning so kudo's for the improvement! Overall I'm loving the story.
Interesting plot and characters! The only drawback is that there are grammatical errors that did occasionally break up the flow while reading. With some editing this will be even better. 👌🏾🙂
I've read stories about werewolves before and I love them. I must tell you that you are doing a very good job. Your storytelling is fresh and fluid. It makes me want to keep reading more and more. Congratulations!
If you are in the comments trying to decide whether to read this story, here is my honest opinion: beginning to read I found a synopsis original that urges me to want to know more, without doubts. I really like the FL. The characterizations of the characters are concrete and well related. The descriptions of the surroundings and the situation are accurate. The plot is clear in the synopsis and the chapters do not skimp on the story. There is definitely an inspired author here with a great story to tell ... Continue like this author! I am a new reader of this story.[img=recommend]
Hi author, upon reading your book I noticed some errors but I do not want to go further noticing all your mistakes. But the plot seemed nice and engaging readers to read more, your characters seemed well described especially their history or background, overall it's nice to read since the paragraph breaks makes it easy to read.
This is a very great novel. The author's dedication is easily reflected. I was hooked since the beginning. If you're interested in Romance Fantasy with a unique storyline, then this is for you. :)
The synopsis is quite good.. Your grammar and vocabulary is so good author.. I am curious how you will introduce two male leads to the female.. Carla is very strong yet calm
The story and the concept the author has chosen are well portrayed and it pulls the readers into it right away. The writing is understandable, but there are some grammatical errors. However, this does not hinder the flow of the story. Also, instead of making each sentence as a paragraph, try to make the paragraphs bigger and give descriptions wherever possible. Whenever there is a conversation taking place, try to put the dialogs in " " so that the readers do not get confused. Other than these, I have no other issues with the novel. Keep up the good work author. All the best.
Romance is not my cup of tea, but I always give an honest review. Your story is really good and captivating. You know how to get a reader hooked onto the story. Your character descriptions are really good too. I like your writing style, although you have a few grammar mistakes. And one thing to remember, because I used to make this mistake a lot. Capitalize your frist word in dialogue unless the dialogue goes on in a sentence. Examples: He looked around, confused at where he was at, and spoke out, “Hello, is anyone here?” “Your eyes are,” the man observed, finding the right words to say, “are captivating.” Other than that you are doing a good job!
Whoa! this is a great one. I am not done with all the chapters yet and I am not a fan of werewolves type of books, but this one caught me! so so good!
The tension when reading in this novel is well done by the author. There are tense mistakes that are easily fixed. Overall, if you are into good characters and a mystery, this one is for you!
Perfectly demonstrated character and world development. Readers can hook up on the book in no time so I can recommend this great story to anyone who likes new stuff.
I feel that since the chapter 1 , the author was able to give a good character build and it ultimately positively affected the story line. The story is very interesting. Keep up the good work
So far so good! Please carry on writing! Can't wait to read more! Recommend 100% Damn you word count!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I already read half the book and I really find it addicting and.intruguing at the same time. The story is really great at the start and it only gets better as time goes on. Continue the hard work author!
Very good start. I liked Carla very much. Her relationship with the wolf was also cute. Sassy is good as the villain and I really didn't like her. The only issue I had with this story is that everything is only 1 line long. After reading it for a while it kinda hurts the eyes so just change that and it will read better. Carla having red eyes is nice but I wish we could get a little bit more of a description of how she looks. It works very well as a short read between classes, when there's a break at work, or you're on a commute. Also, good work!
Spoiler de révélation The synopsis and story description is really quite interesting and attractive. The story plot and pace is also very good. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon...... Looking forward to it....
The story has a lovely dovey start and I like it very much:) I just wondering if the werewolf may be her future boyfriend? Even though it kinda cute now where i am reading now. Pretty immersive and I want to read more.
Hey author the plot is so nice.. There are time I was on edge while reading the chapters.. I like Carla being so optimistic unlike other lead characters