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The Upgrade system
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Synopsis
[Ding! Congratulations on obtaining the upgrade system!]
A year later...
Umm... system, can I take back that upgrade?
[NO!]
Well then lets hope that no one finds out that I was the one who upgraded the world or else, they are all going to come after me.
Hello, This is my first time writing a web novel. I know that there are a lot of things that I could improve on so any constructive criticism will be welcomed. I will read your comments and try to improve my writing. Thank you in advance for reading this novel or at least the synopsis.
200 Power Stones = 1 extra chapter
400 Power Stones = 2 extra chapters
There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.
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Great novel, has high potential and isn't as predictable as many others of it's genre are. A joy to read and is very entertaining. I would like to request the author to post more often, not twice everyday but maybe a extra chapter if the novel gets over 50 votes in a week. (Yes I just want more chapters. Fight me.)
There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover. Discord link - https://discord.gg/h566zub I know that some people hate it when authors rate their books. I made this review just to share the discord. I will delete this comment after a week or so just so it doesn't get on the nerves of the people who hate it when authors rate their books more than once.
I really enjoyed reading this novel. It had an amazing story line! But, please update it more than one chapter a day. I can’t get enough. Him becoming richer really made me happy since what he’s been through.
Ah friend Recommends this novel to me. And I got to say, it's really good. The story is easy to read, as well as to understand. The story progression I think is going swell. The grammar could be better but I think that gives it a charm to it, a beginner writer charm. If I was to rate it I would rate it 9/10. Posted at 29th chapter.
Sucks that he has dropped this since he has not p[posted a single chapter in 8 months. I was really enjoying where everything was going, except for the really small chapter size. Towards the later chapters, it started to remind me of a novel that did not get picked for translations that was about someone being the Admin of a rich people chat group. He would invite rich people into the chat group and they would be able to buy amazing cultivation items for real-life cash. And the MC would be the benefactor of the money. But in this one, he invites a few people into a part of a system. It's really only the cash shop of the system. And that would allow them to buy items for real-life money. The world also started to change into a cultivation world and more random people were about to get a shop system. Basically, the world was becoming pay to win. And I was looking forward to more. Sadly I was disappointed in the end. This would be a 4.5-star novel if it was not dropped.
great story overall thought the detail is missing i have to fillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll the 140 characters needed to post
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I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars I want the upgrade system. 5 stars * 5 stars = 25 stars
Ah friend Recommends this novel to me. And I got to say, it's really good. The story is easy to read, as well as to understand. The story progression I think is going swell. The grammar could be better but I think that gives it a charm to it, a beginner writer charm. If I was to rate it I would rate it 9/10. Posted at 29th chapter.
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Fed up with those cliche cultivation novels? Try read this one, story really god, it's like siscon chat grup but if siscon 10/10 then this one 777/10 Not much of cliche (not yet) Stupid arrogant young master (not yet) It's easy going cultivation novel with not much cliche and nonsense plot twist The minus only the release and the length of every chapters Regardless, keep it up author. U had a potential.
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Hey author, I'm sure that this story is definately not a remake of 'Ill add points to everything' is ? Cause the system is the exact same, so yeah....
I don't like typical chinese cultivation,, but this story is rather interesting so i will let it off, but there is no character development though (everyone seems like a robot,[I specially hate that lily])
Super funny and amazing novel please more chapters 😊😊😊 keep writing 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
slow updates and chapters too short, other than that a good concept but the characters feel too unnatural like in this 2 last chapters the "Boss" accepted the "SYSTEM" way too easily (I'M NOT NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKER SO PLEASE PARDON MY MISTAKES)
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theres no emotion or depth, its very bare. every chapter needs more. the chapter i just read "killers" felt flat. he broke their arms and legs, and chased after the ones who ran away just breaking their legs and disarming them. then sophia called the police and they left. that isnt word for word. but its pretty close. no fight scene. no drawn out police questions. the way it reads it was over in less than 5 minutes from start to them leaving. you could double or possibly even triple the length of this book with details.
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Hello, Author here, This is my first time writing a novel so I hope you like it. I know that there are a lot of improvements that I can make so I would appreciate it if you could write down what I can do to improve the story and give suggestions for the story.