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Liiitttt and love the drip man it's awesome 😎. I'll definitely keep on reading this one for sure. Great work dude keep it up I'd love to see kore of your work
First of all, Five stars because this book deserves it. It would be an injustice if I rate it lower.. this book is interesting..caught me hooked from the first chapter.. The MC's cheat is his 400 year's spend in hell, the author had written so well..except for some few fixes, this book is great. keep going author
they skipped immediately 400 years, and for someone who lived so long the guy couldn't even control his emotions, this novel is terrible. And the writing is as good as my little sister who is in 2nd grade, though i believe shes better
Moar bloodbath Please dont drop. Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp,
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Overall the story is good similar to the novel i read called three meals a day reincarnator something.. i forgot correct name, but still the story is good.
The premise of this story intrigued me and I thought to give it a try... But getting past the 1st chapter proved impossible! I'm really sorry to say it that frank; but the writing is *so* bad. Cluttered phrases, repetitions, very simplistic vocabulary and a ton of errors; no useful breaks to make it less... Obtrusive and a grammar that hurts at times. Descriptions are simplistic if there at all; Dialoge reads more like a bad play written in high school... Seeing the 4.5 stars rating - does it improve in the later chapters (like, vastly)? Then I'll just struggle through, but if it continues in the current quality...☠️R.I.P. So, help anyone?
From synopsis it seems like seoul station necromancer....140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters
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.......................................................--------------....................................................................................... Hello, did you give up that novel? ........................................................-------------.........................................................................................
This novel is like the three meals reincarnater novel so of you like that i suggest you read this. Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The concept is very interesting. The writing style leaves a lot to the imagination and interpretation of the reader. The pacing is ok with a few weird tangents in the plot. But overall what surprised me the most was the direction the story took in the beginning. Having a great concept perfect for a power fantasy. Then quickly switched the direction to one that is more aligned to that of a revenge fantasy. I am interested to see more, if only just to know where this is going.
Good Story Keep going have a nice day { *-* } Stay Safe >?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?
......................... its a very good story and very entertaining.................................................................keep up the good work...............
Si quieres leer una novela dónde un mc paso 400 años en lo que el describió como el infierno y perder todos sus poderes cuando volvió y que en vez de ser inteligente es el típico mc entonces está novela es para ti
a cliche novel with a not so clever MC and one dimensional villains............i was expecting more.......so disappointing......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Thanks for chapter Please more chapters I have a doubt what is the purposes of spending 400 years in hell at last hero gain system and again started increasing his level.
La historia es bastante buena y es un poco parecida a "seol station necromancer" y "solo leveling", pero ya luego se va separando su propia trama espero ver como progresa ya que tiene pocos caps en este momento pero va bueno
So good gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
So gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo9ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Overall this is a dang good book not perfect but maybe even great the main character is as of right now not understood I’m not entirely sure what kind of person he is and even when we learn things about him we are told it rather than shown it most of the other characters are just props for him to act and react too of course that isn’t to say it’s not a fun book it’s reminiscent of only I level up but is definitely unique in its own way the only thing that I would actually complain about is how he mutters this one young master guy who was frankly really foolish and it just felt lazy overall there is some really fun stuff you could do with this concept but it needs to be fleshed out more if anything I would try and get more conversation with the character and to give him a more complex motive than protect his family and blind revenge. Also give this story at least one power stone it deserves more recognition.
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Liiitttt and love the drip man it's awesome 😎. I'll definitely keep on reading this one for sure. Great work dude keep it up I'd love to see kore of your work
First of all, Five stars because this book deserves it. It would be an injustice if I rate it lower.. this book is interesting..caught me hooked from the first chapter.. The MC's cheat is his 400 year's spend in hell, the author had written so well..except for some few fixes, this book is great. keep going author
they skipped immediately 400 years, and for someone who lived so long the guy couldn't even control his emotions, this novel is terrible. And the writing is as good as my little sister who is in 2nd grade, though i believe shes better
Moar bloodbath Please dont drop. Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp, Xp,
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Overall the story is good similar to the novel i read called three meals a day reincarnator something.. i forgot correct name, but still the story is good.
The premise of this story intrigued me and I thought to give it a try... But getting past the 1st chapter proved impossible! I'm really sorry to say it that frank; but the writing is *so* bad. Cluttered phrases, repetitions, very simplistic vocabulary and a ton of errors; no useful breaks to make it less... Obtrusive and a grammar that hurts at times. Descriptions are simplistic if there at all; Dialoge reads more like a bad play written in high school... Seeing the 4.5 stars rating - does it improve in the later chapters (like, vastly)? Then I'll just struggle through, but if it continues in the current quality...☠️R.I.P. So, help anyone?
From synopsis it seems like seoul station necromancer....140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters140 characters
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
.......................................................--------------....................................................................................... Hello, did you give up that novel? ........................................................-------------.........................................................................................
This novel is like the three meals reincarnater novel so of you like that i suggest you read this. Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The concept is very interesting. The writing style leaves a lot to the imagination and interpretation of the reader. The pacing is ok with a few weird tangents in the plot. But overall what surprised me the most was the direction the story took in the beginning. Having a great concept perfect for a power fantasy. Then quickly switched the direction to one that is more aligned to that of a revenge fantasy. I am interested to see more, if only just to know where this is going.
Good Story Keep going have a nice day { *-* } Stay Safe >?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?
......................... its a very good story and very entertaining.................................................................keep up the good work...............
Si quieres leer una novela dónde un mc paso 400 años en lo que el describió como el infierno y perder todos sus poderes cuando volvió y que en vez de ser inteligente es el típico mc entonces está novela es para ti
a cliche novel with a not so clever MC and one dimensional villains............i was expecting more.......so disappointing......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Thanks for chapter Please more chapters I have a doubt what is the purposes of spending 400 years in hell at last hero gain system and again started increasing his level.
La historia es bastante buena y es un poco parecida a "seol station necromancer" y "solo leveling", pero ya luego se va separando su propia trama espero ver como progresa ya que tiene pocos caps en este momento pero va bueno
So good gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
So gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo9ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Overall this is a dang good book not perfect but maybe even great the main character is as of right now not understood I’m not entirely sure what kind of person he is and even when we learn things about him we are told it rather than shown it most of the other characters are just props for him to act and react too of course that isn’t to say it’s not a fun book it’s reminiscent of only I level up but is definitely unique in its own way the only thing that I would actually complain about is how he mutters this one young master guy who was frankly really foolish and it just felt lazy overall there is some really fun stuff you could do with this concept but it needs to be fleshed out more if anything I would try and get more conversation with the character and to give him a more complex motive than protect his family and blind revenge. Also give this story at least one power stone it deserves more recognition.
why cant i send gift.?.theres no button?...… ,..😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 good job writing this.
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