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How early can one give a review? Well, dear readers, our author already has a good track record! You can expect them to give you an enjoyable story! If the title, synopsis and the cover wasn't enough, then this review may help you read it already! This is your virtual e-friend! Go ahead and read the book and earn soul points! This is a wonderful and fresh take on [ System ] stories and a unique romance!
Such an amazing book from start to finish and the ending is perfect💓💓 Destiny is truly a great story teller💓💓 Tynan goes through huge character growth along the way with Laura's help. Family is more than just the blood bonds but also the ones you choose for yourself💓
Another cute story 😍❤️❤️ I'm loving Laura so much!! Such a cute ghost. The interaction of MC is realistic and thankfully not dramatic. Also it perfectly describes a bachelor's abode😁 will be waiting for further updates 😊
I had found this book when I was seeing if any of the books in my Currently Reading list have an author that has other novels on the platform. And here I was reading the book I’m rating now. There’s cute nicknames that the characters give each other all the time, that I just find amazing. I can tell the author puts a lot of effort into her work, too. Now this book has a lot of wonderful details and elements of comedy and drama. It has its moments of seriousness too, don’t get me wrong, so it’s not one of those books that are random and just bizarre in every paragraph. If you, the possible future readers of this book, find you like the content written here by the author, I advise you to read her other books as well. Thank you!
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The characters in the novel are lovable. The character's makes you want to immerse yourself in the book. The author really did a good job in making all the characters interesting so I will suggest you read the novel.
Great writing, amazing story development with constant update and amazing author. I am definitly not saying random things to reach the word minimun limit or anything
Interesting and unique concept! Characters are really cute as well!! Reading the cooking part made me hungry too >_< Do your best author! Don't give up!!
A promising story with an interesting and unique romance development, the author also has a good track record so...one can expect a (maybe) soon to be finished romance novel worth your time.
Ahh, can't wait for the next update! I was like watching an anime as I read! My mind began wishing for miracles that Laura can be in her human form! I want Tynan and Laura to go on a date! 😘 And good luck, Author dear! Fighting! 🥰
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The synopsis itself was so intriguing that it will make you go in the depths of the chapter. I want Tynan and Laura to live happily ever after. But waiting to know what will be their journey to reach that destination!!
owo what an interesting romance~ I am excited for e-ghost and the guy. Tynana is sweet and funny at the same time and the e-ghost Laura complements him. They are quite a pair. Only thing that I suggest is breaking down the long paragraphs into smaller one. It gets monotonous. Goodluck, Author-sama.
Ho ho ho! Seriously, this is such a gem! I just read the first chapter and then I'm hooked! Now, I'm waiting for the next chapter! Love the characters! We have an angst type FL and a sweet ML that you can't help fall for! The plot is kind of unique for me so it was such a fun read! Heard that this will be in the competition, so wishing the author all the best! I sincerely hope you will win because this book deserves it! Send more love to Tynan and Laura!!!
Hello! Good luck dear author with this book~ I hope you do well! I want to say that I know this author to be a person who writes very well so you won't be disappointed with this title. Just the synopsis alone had me laughing xDD <3
Great author so make sure to check out the other works 😉 This hooks you in from the very beginning and has you laughing and wanting more. Strong character development💗💗 Happy reading 😉😊
Author's Shameless Review & Announcement: 1. This book has been made even though I had one before. It's because I'm using it to enter the WSA competition. 2. There will be edits made to this story so it will be a little different from the other book that I deleted. Names will be changed and the setting is now more defined. 3. The work is estimated to be about 120k words long because that's the requirement for WSA. I won't be doing sequels, it's going to be just a simple read and complete work. 4. Currently don't have proofers so feel free to apply if you're up for it. I will put your name in the author notes credits. 5. Last but not least please show love for my other books as well! Thank you <3
How early can one give a review? Well, dear readers, our author already has a good track record! You can expect them to give you an enjoyable story! If the title, synopsis and the cover wasn't enough, then this review may help you read it already! This is your virtual e-friend! Go ahead and read the book and earn soul points! This is a wonderful and fresh take on [ System ] stories and a unique romance!
Such an amazing book from start to finish and the ending is perfect💓💓 Destiny is truly a great story teller💓💓 Tynan goes through huge character growth along the way with Laura's help. Family is more than just the blood bonds but also the ones you choose for yourself💓
Another cute story 😍❤️❤️ I'm loving Laura so much!! Such a cute ghost. The interaction of MC is realistic and thankfully not dramatic. Also it perfectly describes a bachelor's abode😁 will be waiting for further updates 😊
I had found this book when I was seeing if any of the books in my Currently Reading list have an author that has other novels on the platform. And here I was reading the book I’m rating now. There’s cute nicknames that the characters give each other all the time, that I just find amazing. I can tell the author puts a lot of effort into her work, too. Now this book has a lot of wonderful details and elements of comedy and drama. It has its moments of seriousness too, don’t get me wrong, so it’s not one of those books that are random and just bizarre in every paragraph. If you, the possible future readers of this book, find you like the content written here by the author, I advise you to read her other books as well. Thank you!
Spoiler de révélation The characters in the novel are lovable. The character's makes you want to immerse yourself in the book. The author really did a good job in making all the characters interesting so I will suggest you read the novel.
Great writing, amazing story development with constant update and amazing author. I am definitly not saying random things to reach the word minimun limit or anything
Interesting and unique concept! Characters are really cute as well!! Reading the cooking part made me hungry too >_< Do your best author! Don't give up!!
A promising story with an interesting and unique romance development, the author also has a good track record so...one can expect a (maybe) soon to be finished romance novel worth your time.
Ahh, can't wait for the next update! I was like watching an anime as I read! My mind began wishing for miracles that Laura can be in her human form! I want Tynan and Laura to go on a date! 😘 And good luck, Author dear! Fighting! 🥰
Spoiler de révélation The synopsis itself was so intriguing that it will make you go in the depths of the chapter. I want Tynan and Laura to live happily ever after. But waiting to know what will be their journey to reach that destination!!
owo what an interesting romance~ I am excited for e-ghost and the guy. Tynana is sweet and funny at the same time and the e-ghost Laura complements him. They are quite a pair. Only thing that I suggest is breaking down the long paragraphs into smaller one. It gets monotonous. Goodluck, Author-sama.
Ho ho ho! Seriously, this is such a gem! I just read the first chapter and then I'm hooked! Now, I'm waiting for the next chapter! Love the characters! We have an angst type FL and a sweet ML that you can't help fall for! The plot is kind of unique for me so it was such a fun read! Heard that this will be in the competition, so wishing the author all the best! I sincerely hope you will win because this book deserves it! Send more love to Tynan and Laura!!!
Hello! Good luck dear author with this book~ I hope you do well! I want to say that I know this author to be a person who writes very well so you won't be disappointed with this title. Just the synopsis alone had me laughing xDD <3
Great author so make sure to check out the other works 😉 This hooks you in from the very beginning and has you laughing and wanting more. Strong character development💗💗 Happy reading 😉😊
Author's Shameless Review & Announcement: 1. This book has been made even though I had one before. It's because I'm using it to enter the WSA competition. 2. There will be edits made to this story so it will be a little different from the other book that I deleted. Names will be changed and the setting is now more defined. 3. The work is estimated to be about 120k words long because that's the requirement for WSA. I won't be doing sequels, it's going to be just a simple read and complete work. 4. Currently don't have proofers so feel free to apply if you're up for it. I will put your name in the author notes credits. 5. Last but not least please show love for my other books as well! Thank you <3