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Chapitre 5: Chapter 5

As they stepped into the great hall Alvar let his eyes roam over the crowd in the hopes to find his friends amongst the celebrating crowd. As he was watching his people laugh, feast, drink and simply enjoying their time together a warm feeling made itself known inside his stomach and Alvar couldn't help but smile in happiness at the atmosphere that he and his grandparents plunged right into.

Alvar was brought out of his musings though by someone tackling his back from behind him while laughter filled with mirth greeted his eyes as he stumbled forwards in surprise at the sudden impact.

"Alvar, you're back! Why didn't you notify us you jerk?" the feminine voice of his friend Gerdi sounded from behind him while he himself had no choice but to shove the body that had tackled him to the ground under mock protests to the side in a huff under the laughter of those watching the ongoing quarrel.

"Damn it Veli! Stop it with those tackles you buffon!" Alvar said while a small smile adorned his face in mock exasperation at his friend who couldn't help himself but shove Alvar slightly once more in a good nature shove that nearly sent Alvar sprawling on the ground once more.

"Anyway, now that you are back you have to tell us what you experienced out there." Gerdi said with a no nonsense voice while Alvar threw himself at Veli in revenge and tackled him to the ground as well which earned him a satisfying yelp of surprise in turn, all the while ignoring Gerdi's mock anger at the duo which caused her eyebrow to tick upwards in annoyance.

After wrestling for a while the two friends stood up and laughed their banter off and began speaking about what was about to happen tonight as all three of them were reaching the age of eleven this month, and for logistical reasons were brought into the ceremony as well.

"Do you think we'll have to pick a profession tonight? I doubt it but I could be wrong, you know?" Alvar asked the two as this was his biggest worry since he didn't want to make such a huge decision lightly without knowing what he really liked to do. His friends hummed in thought for a while after which they both shrugged their shoulders since they didn't know either though Alvar could clearly see the nervousness on the two's faces as he himself felt his heart pound in his chest in anticipation.

"Come, let us find your uncle and grab ourselves some food and drinks." Alvars grandfather said while his grandmother asked Gerdi and Veli where their parents currently were at who in turn looked around for a second after which they motioned towards a nearby group of people that also contained uncle Olaf which caused the group to venture over to them where they were greeted warmly with exclamations of anticipation.

The group began talking amongst themselves while uncle Olaf brought over a boar that had been roasting over a smaller nearby fire which they all began to eat in gusto, mead flowing freely and warming all those involved from the inside out, only increasing the laughter that came along with the slight tipsiness the mead provided.

Minutes turned into an hour and the sun had finally disappeared behind the tall peaks of the surrounding mountains while the animals of the night like owls and bats began to occasionally flutter through the night sky, no doubt looking for their first prey of the evening.

While the group were still talking a low murmuring and exclamations for silence began to softly echo through the hall which in turn drew the attention towards the middle of the great hall where an old man had stepped forwards and was now standing besides the huge fire in the middle of the great hall while leaning on his staff that was adorned with black feathers. The man himself wore a coat similarly adorned by black feathers while his clothes underneath his coat held a simple grey color onto which his long braided grey beard fell.

Soon the great hall had fallen silent and Alvar could feel his heart hammering in his chest, slightly surprised that nobody around him was hearing it as well as he thought it sounded like a cacophony of war drums, loud enough to rouse even Jormag from his sleep far up in the north.

Wooden smashes of a staff being smacked onto the ground brought Alvars attention away from his own beating heart and back to the Havroune in the middle of the hall who by now had the attention of the whole hall on him.

"Welcome friends, families, comrades, brothers and sisters. We have gathered here today for a joyous event, to welcome some of our descendants into the ranks of the young adults. Those that have been deemed worthy to continue onwards, please step forwards!" The Havroune spoke into the silent hall after which Alvar took a deep inhale and with the exhale stood up, accompanied by his two friends Veli and Gerdi while other children amongst other groups also stood up and with tension visible and written all over their faces ventured under the gazes of the crowd over to the Havroune who smiled upon them with clear eyes that spoke of a deep wisdom gathered over the years.

Once the children had lined up before the Havroune he gazed into the eyes of each child while humming in satisfaction. Why he did so Alvar did not know.

"Now, in order to complete this rite of passage you will follow me to the shrine of the raven, one of our patron spirits and the wisest of them all. There you will find guidance for the path that lay ahead of you. Once we return your rite will be over and you may join our people in celebration." The Havroune spoke after which he turned around and marched out of the great hall with the children following behind him into the cold dark night, towards the shrine of the raven that lay at the small vale below Hoelbrak.

With a firm look in his eyes Alvar followed right behind the Havroune, determined to do the best he could joined by his friends and the other children…


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Chapitre 6: Chapter 6

Darkness was all around them. Shadows teasing and embracing the trees that towered over their small group while the children lead by the old Havroune marched down into the vale at the foot of Hoelbrak, the sounds of the adults who had begun talking, eating and celebrating having long faded into the distance as the trees and shrubs served as a natural wall that kept all familiar sounds away from the children, apart from the natural ones that originated from the wildlife that was flourishing in the night.

Alvar didn't fear the dark as he had grown accustomed to its presence while he was out in the wilderness with his uncle Olaf. No. Though he was wary of the things the darkness could hide from his eyes as the wild boar had made him acutely aware of. The night could be your best friend or your worst enemy.

As the small procession walked further into the forest trees and shrubs gave way to rocks and small rivers until the group reached a small cavern. Alvar wondered if that was their destination and it seemed he was proven right as the Havroune walked over to its entrance and turned around to face them at its doorstep.

"This is one of the caves that are dedicated as shrines to the sacred spirits. This one in particular more then others of its kind to the raven patron spirit. Inside those caves that you'll find all over the Shiverpeak mountain range the connection to the mists, where our spirit patrons and ancestors dwell, is especially strong. Of course caves such as these aren't the only strong chokepoints where it is possible for those trained to do so to commune with those that dwell in the mists.

Your task is to take a sip out of this flask. It contains a fluid that will enable you to call upon the spirit of the raven and receive his advise. Once you have consumed the fluid you will venture into the cave and do exactly that. Though beware! The fluid does not directly call upon the raven. Only you yourselves can do so. What the fluid does is elevate your mind onto the level that it is able to perceive the mists for a short period of time. The danger lies within the mists though. So listen carefully and heed my words. Do not venture lightly into the mists, no matter what you may see or hear! Many have done so and not returned." The Havroune spoke to the children with a grim expression on his face that sent a small shiver down Alvar's spine.

"But how are we supposed to do that? Can't you instead come with us?" A young girl asked the old Havroune who turned his eyes towards her and lightly shook his head in response.

"No, I cannot. Of course we will not force you to undertake this task but if you want to step onto the path of the adults then you will have no other choice because that is what it means to be an adult before everything else. Taking responsibility for yourselves! Now, if you choose to venture inside step forward and drink." The Havroune said, seemingly unwilling to speak any further on the matter.

Taking a deep breath Alvar straightened his back and stepped out of the group of children which earned him uncertain looks from some of the children that seemingly had not yet made a decision for themselves but Alvar did not care for them at the moment. His mind was firmly made up, he would find out for himself which path was destined for him to be taken!

Without giving a comment to Alvar stepping forwards the Havroune stretched out his arm with the flask in his hand which Alvar took from him and lifted the flask to his mouth. Without hesitation he took a deep gulp of the fluid, which had a strangely earthen taste to it, and swallowed it in one go, feeling the liquid run down his throat as he did so. Afterwards he handed the flask back to the Havroune and, with firm steps, walked past the old man who now returned his eyes back onto the children while Alvar stepped foot into the pitch black cavern in front of him, being swallowed completely from sight soon afterwards.

Once Alvar was inside his mind began to blurr a little as the fluid took hold. Due to the darkness his eyes were useless to him, his smell just as well while the only things he could rely upon were his hearing and his sense of touch. Stumbling through the darkness Alvar kept on walking while his mind became more and more foggy until as if stepping through some sort of veil made of satin Alvar was greeted by a soft blue light that began to shimmer all around him, framing and showing him where he was exactly.

He seemed to be in some kind of hall but he could not make out any details about it. Thus he kept on walking while his mind became clearer by the second until it returned to its original state.

'Are these the mists? I thought it would look differently…' Alvar thought to himself.

"No child, these are not the mists. Only an entrance of sorts, guarded by me and my kind." A chipper voice spoke directly into Alvars mind, startling him a lot.

'Woah! You can hear my thoughts? How? And who are you?' Alvar asked while swivelling around his head to find the one he was speaking to.

"Yes and no, young one. In the mists thoughts and words spoken by your mouth are one and the same, at least for an untrained mind. Thus I am able to hear your thoughts. As to who I am, I am the patron spirit of the raven." The voice said as an ethereal statue of a raven became visible a few steps away from Alvars position who promptly walked over to the statue, mustering it from top to bottom curiously.

'It is an honor to finally meet one of the spirits! Though I do not understand what you mean by 'only an entrance'. The Havroune said we would be venturing out into the mists.' Alvar asked with a bit of confusion. Was he not supposed to travel and find the raven in the mists?

"Likewise, child and I meant exactly what I said by entrance. The Havroune's words were nothing but a small test to see if you are willing to take on the challenges a young adult will have to undertake. You did not truly think we would send children into the mists, did you? Hehehe" The statue spoke into the darkness while chuckling a little at its own words causing Alvar's ears to redden slightly at his own naivety. Of course they wouldn't.

'Err, so what is this test that I need to undertake?' Alvar said, trying to change the topic away from his naivety.

"You will have to answer a few of my questions. At the end we will see which profession suits you the most. Do you agree to beginning the test?" the statue said and Alvar agreed without hesitation, thus beginning the test.


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