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Living life traveling the omniverse
4.14 (40 audimat)
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I don't know what happened, at one point I am here and then I am there, but hey, now that I am there I get a couple of wishes and I'll be there...Just kidding, things went by very differently, but in the end I was still satisfied, because I still got what I want.
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A/N: I am posting on fan fiction.net as well, my name is goken son of summer
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So the MC has instant mastery and Saiyan powers along with the Rinnegan. Later on the author just starts adding knowledge the MC didn't have before where he can build anything he thinks about. He awakens in the Jurassic era and let all the dinosaurs get killed off by the meteor. Time doesn't seem to affect him at all and is glossed over by multiple time skips. Right after the mass extinction, the MC gets Super Saiyan God form and meets his first harem member. And it is Death from the Marvel Universe. This is where I learned it was a crack fic. There was no logical reason for a romantic interest here who is 'brainwashed' to love him and completely destroyed any hopes I had for the story. But at the least this fic is better than Zenith and actually follows some form of pacing/story structure.
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No Ntr this story will not be any ntr, if you see anything you think is ntr please let me know, and I will change it.No Ntr this story will not be any ntr, if you see anything you think is ntr please let me know, and I will change it.
One of the reasons why i give this such an low score is because "insert your imagination", like really ?? if i wanted to do that i would write my own story.. there are some more mistakes, otherwise its ok
Thanks for the chapters and great work and keep up and don't drop and keep writing more and more chapters. Hope you post more chapters and don't drop. Waiting for adventures in other worlds in future.
In this world the emboidemnts rule the omniverse The emobodiment of death is a she, unsuprising, she is in obssesd with mc and comes to earth to Claim him Mc won't give himself up without a fight, Just wanted to clear that up thanks for reading
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Bruh, this dude obsessed with Jaune or something, powers suck, grammar sucks, dropped Now for that extra so Webnovel will actually let me post this. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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I like almost everything thing,the MC is interesting and I like how OP he is. I like how smart the MC is. The only thing I don’t like is the harem but that’s just because I feel like harems are really annoying but this harem probably won’t be to bad. All and all not to bad.
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The idea of the starting a multiverse adventure is somewhat unoriginal. God appears, and he gives you an adventure with no reason. Typical starting sentences of an adventure through the multiverse which I don't mind. Typical, but unoriginal. The writing qualities seem like a person who's at least tried to write the fanfic. Although you ARE a rookie author, I don't blame you. But at least put some more effort if you want to write a decent fanfic. I'd give you a four star for that. The character designs are showing signs of effort, I'd like you to do the same as everything else. That's my suggestions of writing a good or decent fanfic.
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Volume 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 : Introduction
Volume 2 : Marvel; beginning of time
- 3 Going over Abilities and Powers(fixed) 4 years ago
- 4 A Jurassic world(fixed) 4 years ago
- 5 Element mastery(fixed) 4 years ago
- 6 Home building. 4 years ago
- 7 More training 4 years ago
- 8 Preparing for the Space Rock 4 years ago
- 9 Meteor Strike 4 years ago
- 10 The Aftermath 4 years ago
- 11 New form and an unexpected surprise 4 years ago
- 12 Death pt1 4 years ago
- 13 Death pt2 4 years ago
- 14 Death's resolve 4 years ago
- 15 Death vs Jaune pt1 4 years ago
- 16 Death vs Jaune pt2 4 years ago
- 17 Death vs Jaune Pt3 4 years ago
- 18 Clarify 4 years ago
- 19 Death vs Jaune pt4 4 years ago
- 20 Death vs Jaune pt5 finale 4 years ago
- 21 Aftermath 4 years ago
- 22 The Garden of Eden pt1 4 years ago
- 23 The Garden of Eden pt2 4 years ago
- 24 The Garden of Eden pt3 4 years ago
- 25 Adam and Eve Pt1 4 years ago
- 26 Adam and Eve Pt2 4 years ago
- 27 Death's intermission 4 years ago
- 28 Meeting the emboidements pt1 4 years ago
- 29 Meeting the emboidements Pt2 4 years ago
- 30 Meeting the emboidements pt3 4 years ago
- 31 New form 4 years ago
- 32 Reasoning and assumptions 4 years ago
- 33 Wonders and Discovery 4 years ago
- 34 into space we go 4 years ago
- 35 Ooh~ Space pirates 4 years ago
- 36 ...I don't see it.... 4 years ago
- 37 Discoveries and proposals 4 years ago
- 38 It begins 4 years ago
- 39 The fight for Sakaar 4 years ago
- 40 The Humiliating Defeat 4 years ago
- 41 King Jaune or Emperor? 4 years ago
- 42 Reengineering Sakaar 4 years ago
- 43 The change in Sakaar 4 years ago
- 44 Planet Ōtsutsuki 4 years ago
- 45 The three branches 4 years ago
- 46 Flourishing 4 years ago
- 47 Returning to earth 4 years ago
- 48 Job 4 years ago
- 49 Primordial Ascension. 4 years ago
- 50 The years gone by 4 years ago
- 51 The Shinto Queen 4 years ago
- 52 Training 4 years ago
- 53 Jesus 4 years ago
- 54 Departure (Fixed no ntr in this story.) 4 years ago
Volume 3 : Naruto
- 55 New world 4 years ago
- 56 Sealing 4 years ago
- 57 Masked man 4 years ago
- 58 Obito Uchiha 4 years ago
- 59 Obito's Realization 4 years ago
- 60 Turn of events 4 years ago
- 61 Jaune's clarification 4 years ago
- 62 Interesting developments 4 years ago
- 63 The Red Dawn 4 years ago
- 64 Not a Chapter 4 years ago
- 65 Filler; featuring Exp 4 years ago
- 66 Hanzo's defeat and enlightenment. 4 years ago
- 67 I'm back bitches 3 years ago
This story even though has some flaws, it is incredibly fun to read, the grammar gets so much better as the story goes on, and most importantly, Death is in this story, the living emboidement, and it is a she, and she is madly in love with mc. Yandere death, is a new one. I am heavly looking forward to more