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This story is the best novel, but I will like to use this opportunity to thank the author of writing an amazing storyline and please continue
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Gotta rate, The story is good and been reading all the chapters for a single day, when’s the next update though.............................................................
Lots of standard cliches, however the book is still very engaging and fun to read. I 100% recommend this book to anyone that has a love for magic.
A good read , wish content was released a little more often because i dont feel i truly can get sucked in with so little chapters. then again i read 50 chapters a day for fun lol
Has a decent storyline pretty good time killer over all I would recommend it to most people it as past a lot of time waiting in doctor officers so yeah recommend it.
Hey can some one tell me how to vote with a power stone because I don’t really know how to
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Excellent story, really looking forward to reading more of this interesting take on cultivation!
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The book was very good the translation quality was not only nice but I was great while the world building is good it could use a little more work amazing book
Stability and World Background 3* since it's new. Cultivation novel about a boy who comes across a fortuitous encounter which enables him to produce Qi and Spiritual Essence which in turn, turns his world upside down. Like what most people have been saying, it's a generic cultivation story plot. However, by all means is it not uninteresting but casual enjoyable. I found myself reading all 60 chapters and waiting until it gets picked up. It's a familiar novel that you've read countless of times and still not sick of it. The author writes good enough to get you hooked. The question now remains is, for how long? Verdict: Read when you can.
All that i saw nice in this novel was the different cultivation system, the rest being cliche and everything other xianxia generic type novels offer. What I see as a shame is that this novel has more fans then The Cell Prison that is something different in the good sense because after a while you get bored of generic bull*hit. Sometimes I question the reading taste of people...don t you get bored of the same type of novel with no innovation, again and again?
I like this story very much. The dichotomy between "Qi" and "Spirit Power" is not unheard of, but the author uses it skillfully to make two kinda different types of warriors and overall the effect is interesting. I hope we'll see more chapters of this one,
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I really like this book and it should be chosen especially as it ends on a cliff. I think that, yes, there are some traditional Eastern fantasy tropes (ex. family infighting and dumb, arrogant antagonists) but thankfully skipping out on some others (failed fiancee). There are a few things I liked about this story. First, his cheat is still kind of mysterious 60 chapters later. And he definitely has power acceleration because of it, but somehow it still doesn't feel overpowered. There's definitely some meaningful fights here. And while having avatars (and even how he uses them) isn't new, for some reason, having them this early in the story seems more meaningful than usual especially in relation to his growth curve. Also even if they show results already there is still some mystery left here. Finally, I really like this character's growth. He actually shows remorse for the stupid actions he takes and is willing to learn and grow from them. He acts like a kid but is definitely showing character growth. That's a pretty rare and reflective thing to see in these kind of stories.
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I enjoyed the first part of this novel (only 60 chapters released at time of review) and I really like the concept of spirit bodies of different types, it’s a great progression from golems or elementals that an MC could control. Hope this gets picked up for co tinted translation as it has potetail and is a fun read
Fuq why do you even post thesr novels when you won't pick them. It's a fuqinng torture bro. Getting into the story then suddenly not continuing it. Fuqq!shety fuq. I know they know what they do but fuc you editor's choice
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ADHD review: it's pretty good Overall score: 4.4 More in depth review: The cultivation nature this novel is different. And sonis the setup of the characters. The MC does kill, so he isn't too naive (even though he is still somewhat naive). He is clever but not shrewd or especially intelligent. The other characters around the MC I'd say are even more fleshed out than the MC making their appearances enjoyable. While this is ridden with the plot devices of so many oghe de cultivation novels, it holds a unique system and especially unique ability of the MC. It has the opportunity to have really interesting fights scenes. And so far seems to have the best future in the stories up for picks rn
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Its really not fair the way some people rated this novel, as if they were expecting something different in a wuxia site. I almost missed this gem by relying on the ratings. Yes it has part of the usual wuxia trope, but it is a different and interesting story on its own. Don't allow the ratings fool you and read it for yourself
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3 Words: Interesting, Exciting, Driven This is on of these books with a lot of cliches where you can only give praise to the author because he does them so well with his own little twists, that you are actually excited about them. Example: There is a discarded son from a powerful family, but it the MCs father and he actually learns to compromise and give up his pride. This leads to a family reunion and a close relationship between family members. What I like most about this book is that the MC grows with his experiences and failures. And yes they are actual failures with near disastrous endings. Additionally the motives behind why the clan allows **** to happen are actually explained in the book. READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOPE IT GETS PICKED UP SOON
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This story is the best novel, but I will like to use this opportunity to thank the author of writing an amazing storyline and please continue
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Gotta rate, The story is good and been reading all the chapters for a single day, when’s the next update though.............................................................
Lots of standard cliches, however the book is still very engaging and fun to read. I 100% recommend this book to anyone that has a love for magic.
A good read , wish content was released a little more often because i dont feel i truly can get sucked in with so little chapters. then again i read 50 chapters a day for fun lol
Has a decent storyline pretty good time killer over all I would recommend it to most people it as past a lot of time waiting in doctor officers so yeah recommend it.
Hey can some one tell me how to vote with a power stone because I don’t really know how to
I reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy love it. Thank you for this wonderful book..
Spoiler de révélation Excellent story, really looking forward to reading more of this interesting take on cultivation!
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
The book was very good the translation quality was not only nice but I was great while the world building is good it could use a little more work amazing book
Stability and World Background 3* since it's new. Cultivation novel about a boy who comes across a fortuitous encounter which enables him to produce Qi and Spiritual Essence which in turn, turns his world upside down. Like what most people have been saying, it's a generic cultivation story plot. However, by all means is it not uninteresting but casual enjoyable. I found myself reading all 60 chapters and waiting until it gets picked up. It's a familiar novel that you've read countless of times and still not sick of it. The author writes good enough to get you hooked. The question now remains is, for how long? Verdict: Read when you can.
All that i saw nice in this novel was the different cultivation system, the rest being cliche and everything other xianxia generic type novels offer. What I see as a shame is that this novel has more fans then The Cell Prison that is something different in the good sense because after a while you get bored of generic bull*hit. Sometimes I question the reading taste of people...don t you get bored of the same type of novel with no innovation, again and again?
I like this story very much. The dichotomy between "Qi" and "Spirit Power" is not unheard of, but the author uses it skillfully to make two kinda different types of warriors and overall the effect is interesting. I hope we'll see more chapters of this one,
Spoiler de révélation I really like this book and it should be chosen especially as it ends on a cliff. I think that, yes, there are some traditional Eastern fantasy tropes (ex. family infighting and dumb, arrogant antagonists) but thankfully skipping out on some others (failed fiancee). There are a few things I liked about this story. First, his cheat is still kind of mysterious 60 chapters later. And he definitely has power acceleration because of it, but somehow it still doesn't feel overpowered. There's definitely some meaningful fights here. And while having avatars (and even how he uses them) isn't new, for some reason, having them this early in the story seems more meaningful than usual especially in relation to his growth curve. Also even if they show results already there is still some mystery left here. Finally, I really like this character's growth. He actually shows remorse for the stupid actions he takes and is willing to learn and grow from them. He acts like a kid but is definitely showing character growth. That's a pretty rare and reflective thing to see in these kind of stories.
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Let's see............................................................................................................................................................................................... .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. ............................................................................................................................................................................................... .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. ............................................................................................................................................................................................... .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................................................................. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation I enjoyed the first part of this novel (only 60 chapters released at time of review) and I really like the concept of spirit bodies of different types, it’s a great progression from golems or elementals that an MC could control. Hope this gets picked up for co tinted translation as it has potetail and is a fun read
Fuq why do you even post thesr novels when you won't pick them. It's a fuqinng torture bro. Getting into the story then suddenly not continuing it. Fuqq!shety fuq. I know they know what they do but fuc you editor's choice
Spoiler de révélation ADHD review: it's pretty good Overall score: 4.4 More in depth review: The cultivation nature this novel is different. And sonis the setup of the characters. The MC does kill, so he isn't too naive (even though he is still somewhat naive). He is clever but not shrewd or especially intelligent. The other characters around the MC I'd say are even more fleshed out than the MC making their appearances enjoyable. While this is ridden with the plot devices of so many oghe de cultivation novels, it holds a unique system and especially unique ability of the MC. It has the opportunity to have really interesting fights scenes. And so far seems to have the best future in the stories up for picks rn
Spoiler de révélation Its really not fair the way some people rated this novel, as if they were expecting something different in a wuxia site. I almost missed this gem by relying on the ratings. Yes it has part of the usual wuxia trope, but it is a different and interesting story on its own. Don't allow the ratings fool you and read it for yourself
Dr bxhd hdndjd sbsnsshr e end sbs DJ end dinner rke r Ken ss kd dne and some DNS sne e end ens ens ens ens dn dnd DNS d DVD ehr eject ene version even e Erin
Spoiler de révélation Cannot be cannot be wont be wont be cannot be wont be wont be cannot be wont be wont be cannot be wont be wont be cannot be wont be wont be cannot be wont be wont be cannot be wont be wont be cannot be wont be wont be cannot be wont be wont be tested and picked
Spoiler de révélation 3 Words: Interesting, Exciting, Driven This is on of these books with a lot of cliches where you can only give praise to the author because he does them so well with his own little twists, that you are actually excited about them. Example: There is a discarded son from a powerful family, but it the MCs father and he actually learns to compromise and give up his pride. This leads to a family reunion and a close relationship between family members. What I like most about this book is that the MC grows with his experiences and failures. And yes they are actual failures with near disastrous endings. Additionally the motives behind why the clan allows **** to happen are actually explained in the book. READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOPE IT GETS PICKED UP SOON
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.