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Even though there's only 19 chapters this novel got me real excited and the want to read more. Sadly it hasn't been updated in a bit over 5 months I was wondering if the author would continue this book or if its official dropped?
A perfect webnovel 👍👍👌👌😘😘😘🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😁😁🤗🤗. Author continue to write more chapters and have more recent updates 🙏🙏🙏
like the plot, the characters was also fine... the background was somewhat lacking for now..when do you plan to continue this? are you wanna concentrate on the others first?
This is literally great at everything except CONSISTENCY. It has an interesting tier and cultivation system and the mc is pretty much an cultivation maniac.
good averall. wish there were more chapters in the book but yagh. other than that. good background and storyline. author if your reeding. please put more chapters.
Easily the best book I have read in a long time. Enough of the crybaby MCs and more like this!!!!!! Please keep the chapters coming. Roll them out lol
it's a very good story So give us more chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
not bad of a story but why do they forget that when they do something in the past it will cause a butterfly effect and I hope that I won't see some stupid character otherwise its not bad at all
It’s Really good man i know that MyLittleBrother’s focus is on dual cultivation right now but i really hope You dont just give up on this novel and on cultivation online because they both feel like they have a loT of poTential.
This story only at 19 ch has a lot packed into it already. The MC is not a over pissed off dummy and his past relationships are alittle mysterious. I just wish there were more frequent updates.
God f-ing dammit. Why did I stumbled upon this miraculous masterpiece. If not for this masterpiece, I moght not have been inpatient enough to destroy my phone because of waiting for this release. Just release 100 more chapters. This masterpiece is too short
Why is this not being worked on more?!?!?!? It got me hooked almost instantly and now for a month nothing!!! I need more!! Please come back to this novel author we are in need of seeing what else happens!
😋😋🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😙😊😊😊😊😊😉😙😙🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵😱😈😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🥵🤬🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥶🥶🥶
Wow. This is different from a lot of the others. It already was has some good story development despite it being nearly 20 chapters long. Nick Work.
I really Enjoy your work really like this novel and dual cultivation and spirit cultivation hope your continue to put out content asap just to make my day thanks for continuing to write. this story is great but there i no world background so far.
Where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where
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This author has many great books, hope he can just focus on one and bring us more chapters
Kinda sad that there isn't more chapters but oh well.🤫🤡🤫😿🙀🙀👴🤫🤡🥺🤖🤫🤖🙀🤡🤫😿👩🎓👺😺☻☻🤖🥺💀🥴🧐😿😒🤡😉😍😗🤣😎😁🙂😗😶🤔😉😊☺️🙂😉😍😊😎😙🤔😑😁😑😍😙😃😙😎😉😑😊😑😊😑☺️🤨😑😱🤪😦🤯🤯🙁🥶😦😳😱🤪🤒😱🤒😠🤕🤑😴😜🙁😟🙁😩🙁😩😩🙁😢☹🤯🙁😩😦😳🥵🤭💀🤫💀😸🤡💀🤡
This a great cultivation novel thus far. It has quite a lot of the typical cliches and feels of a normal cultivation novel but they're all done very well and feel extremely fresh.
It's ok if slow update just don't drop😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
Inconsistent. Would like more chapters, preferably 2 , but you're not doing even 1 a day properly. I'll up go 5 stars once you're consistent. Anyway, great novel, one of the best on this website. Hopeful for more!
Best cultivation novel i have ever read .....................................................................................................
The Best Cultivation Novel Out there, except for the stupid action at the beginning of the novel which is negligible. Just hope that he doesn't chase MIL F around, just go for pure maiden
The beginning is rough, with cliché garbage stock characters messing with the MC, but the plot grows out of the muck as time goes on. If it stops forcing dumb characters on MC, I will offer my sincere gratitude.
Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good.
pllllllllllllssssssssss uuuuuuupppppppppppsdddddddddaaaaaatttrteeee . mmmmmmooooorrrreeeee plllllsssss .mooooooooooorrrrreeee . ppplllllllllllsssssssssss
Even though there's only 19 chapters this novel got me real excited and the want to read more. Sadly it hasn't been updated in a bit over 5 months I was wondering if the author would continue this book or if its official dropped?
A perfect webnovel 👍👍👌👌😘😘😘🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😁😁🤗🤗. Author continue to write more chapters and have more recent updates 🙏🙏🙏
like the plot, the characters was also fine... the background was somewhat lacking for now..when do you plan to continue this? are you wanna concentrate on the others first?
This is literally great at everything except CONSISTENCY. It has an interesting tier and cultivation system and the mc is pretty much an cultivation maniac.
good averall. wish there were more chapters in the book but yagh. other than that. good background and storyline. author if your reeding. please put more chapters.
Easily the best book I have read in a long time. Enough of the crybaby MCs and more like this!!!!!! Please keep the chapters coming. Roll them out lol
it's a very good story So give us more chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
not bad of a story but why do they forget that when they do something in the past it will cause a butterfly effect and I hope that I won't see some stupid character otherwise its not bad at all
It’s Really good man i know that MyLittleBrother’s focus is on dual cultivation right now but i really hope You dont just give up on this novel and on cultivation online because they both feel like they have a loT of poTential.
This story only at 19 ch has a lot packed into it already. The MC is not a over pissed off dummy and his past relationships are alittle mysterious. I just wish there were more frequent updates.
God f-ing dammit. Why did I stumbled upon this miraculous masterpiece. If not for this masterpiece, I moght not have been inpatient enough to destroy my phone because of waiting for this release. Just release 100 more chapters. This masterpiece is too short
Why is this not being worked on more?!?!?!? It got me hooked almost instantly and now for a month nothing!!! I need more!! Please come back to this novel author we are in need of seeing what else happens!
😋😋🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😙😊😊😊😊😊😉😙😙🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵😱😈😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🥵🤬🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥶🥶🥶
Wow. This is different from a lot of the others. It already was has some good story development despite it being nearly 20 chapters long. Nick Work.
I really Enjoy your work really like this novel and dual cultivation and spirit cultivation hope your continue to put out content asap just to make my day thanks for continuing to write. this story is great but there i no world background so far.
Where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where where
..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This author has many great books, hope he can just focus on one and bring us more chapters
Kinda sad that there isn't more chapters but oh well.🤫🤡🤫😿🙀🙀👴🤫🤡🥺🤖🤫🤖🙀🤡🤫😿👩🎓👺😺☻☻🤖🥺💀🥴🧐😿😒🤡😉😍😗🤣😎😁🙂😗😶🤔😉😊☺️🙂😉😍😊😎😙🤔😑😁😑😍😙😃😙😎😉😑😊😑😊😑☺️🤨😑😱🤪😦🤯🤯🙁🥶😦😳😱🤪🤒😱🤒😠🤕🤑😴😜🙁😟🙁😩🙁😩😩🙁😢☹🤯🙁😩😦😳🥵🤭💀🤫💀😸🤡💀🤡
This a great cultivation novel thus far. It has quite a lot of the typical cliches and feels of a normal cultivation novel but they're all done very well and feel extremely fresh.
It's ok if slow update just don't drop😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇
Inconsistent. Would like more chapters, preferably 2 , but you're not doing even 1 a day properly. I'll up go 5 stars once you're consistent. Anyway, great novel, one of the best on this website. Hopeful for more!
Best cultivation novel i have ever read .....................................................................................................
The Best Cultivation Novel Out there, except for the stupid action at the beginning of the novel which is negligible. Just hope that he doesn't chase MIL F around, just go for pure maiden
The beginning is rough, with cliché garbage stock characters messing with the MC, but the plot grows out of the muck as time goes on. If it stops forcing dumb characters on MC, I will offer my sincere gratitude.
Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good. Holy Hell is this good.
pllllllllllllssssssssss uuuuuuupppppppppppsdddddddddaaaaaatttrteeee . mmmmmmooooorrrreeeee plllllsssss .mooooooooooorrrrreeee . ppplllllllllllsssssssssss