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author ang ganda po ng story please ipagpatuloy niyo po.I'll invite my friends to read this because the story is nice...first time kong nagdownload nito tas ito pa talaga nabasa ko...nice talaga yung story sana maiupdate mo na yung next chapter...para malipay ko HAHAHAHAHAHA
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Simple request from me as the author, I really want my stories to be exciting. Please Vote or just a simple comments para ganahan ako mag update everyday. Just simple comment would motivate and help me a lot. Tell me what I need to improve or what do you think about it.
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author ang ganda po ng story please ipagpatuloy niyo po.I'll invite my friends to read this because the story is nice...first time kong nagdownload nito tas ito pa talaga nabasa ko...nice talaga yung story sana maiupdate mo na yung next chapter...para malipay ko HAHAHAHAHAHA
Spoiler de révélation Ako nalang magrarate HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA 😂😂😂😂🤣🤣😂🤣🤣😪😪😪🤣😪😂🙂🙂😂🙂😗😑😗😑😑🙄🙄🤣😑😑🤦😑🤣😑😂 basahin niyo pleaseeee
Simple request from me as the author, I really want my stories to be exciting. Please Vote or just a simple comments para ganahan ako mag update everyday. Just simple comment would motivate and help me a lot. Tell me what I need to improve or what do you think about it.
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